I am finally going to be judging the poems. If you care to help me with this.. feel free to Email me at Butterfliegurl06@aol.com. You may also IM me at this name as well...
I am so impressed with how many entries I have recieved. However, I will only allow one poem per person to enter my top ten. Once the list of the top ten have been announced...I will re-read them to determine the winner.
Best of Luck!
~* Nikki *~
I am so impressed with how many entries I have recieved. However, I will only allow one poem per person to enter my top ten. Once the list of the top ten have been announced...I will re-read them to determine the winner.
Best of Luck!
~* Nikki *~
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on March 25, 2004
- Rewards: Gold: 300
- Final notes: I would like to thank everyone that has entered in this contest. I know it took a while to judge, but if you read some of these poems... it is really hard. I choose the ones I did, becuase they touched me the most... Great people come into my life and sometimes I am blessed enought for them to stay. However, some move on and I move on without them. In this case, that is what has happened. I don't need the guy that I thought I did. The guy that I was looking for was right under my nose the entire time... Take a look around. Stand back and look at your life. If you were to die tomorrow... would you be satisfied with your accomplishments? Just think about all of that. Don't judge someone by the cover... look what's on the inside first...
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The love of a stranger of one you don't know
can sink to your heart like knife to a wound.by Night Terrors 11 lines, 5 comments, on Dec 19 9:41 AM 2003. In Love• Commented on by judge. -
I thought I loved you
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You walk by with your pretty hair, mumbling your "hey"
I smile my little smile, maybe I give you a waveby supermansdead 29 lines, 3 comments, on Jan 26 9:38 PM 2004. In Society, Love
Silver trophy winner
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Lieing here head pressed on your chest,
Knowing that i am safe.by DaCheshireKat 44 lines, 2 comments, on Jan 29 8:23 PM 2004. In Love• Commented on by judge. -
I'm thrilled, yet so scared
Will you still love me tomorrow?by jolieflute327 17 lines, on Feb 10 6:10 PM 2004. In Love• Commented on by judge. -
Love is, in itself, a controversy,
A feeling that easily heals or scars.• Commented on by judge. -
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There are many opinions on the thing called Love
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To have walked my whole life feeling so unreal,
The consistency of my blood is anew and making me feel so real.by kayleeamanda 26 lines, 3 comments, on Feb 15 10:35 PM 2004. In Love• Commented on by judge. -
how do I say this
your the only one for me• Commented on by judge. -
Flipping through the book I keep
On the bed where I drift to sleep• Commented on by judge. -
you’re red and I’m inside your innocence you’re painted red now
I'm inside• Commented on by judge. -
this is for you, with loveby midgetjesus666 51 lines, 4 comments, on Feb 20 2:08 AM 2004. In Love• Commented on by judge.
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life's what we make it...by Wounded Scars 33 lines, 6 comments, on Feb 20 4:37 AM 2004. In Lyrics• Commented on by judge.
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I was made to find a suitable mold for myself-
a finite clause, a cleft sentence or anby envagorien 14 lines, 2 comments, on Feb 27 9:32 AM 2004. In Love• Commented on by judge. -
I saw him standing thereby cherish130 18 lines, on Feb 28 9:02 PM 2004. In Love• Commented on by judge. -
Every time I see you
My heart falls• Commented on by judge. -
I knew I loved you the first day that I saw you...
Your eyes stared at mine...• Commented on by judge. -
All these thoughts,
Running through my head,by Necromatickilla 13 lines, on Feb 29 1:04 PM 2004. In Love• Commented on by judge. -
I knew I loved you before I lay ed my eyes upon you...
For this life is built for us...• Commented on by judge. -
The strolls through the park
And the walks on the beachby Dont-you-care 28 lines, 1 comment, on Feb 29 4:52 PM 2004. In Love• Commented on by judge. -
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You held your cross
I tried to think of anything butby TillLemonsFall 18 lines, 1 comment, on Feb 29 7:06 PM 2004. In Spiritual• Commented on by judge. -
I've never even felt your kiss
But I've seen your pain• Commented on by judge. -
My knees are week
My heart skips a beatby xBeautifulxHellx 31 lines, on Mar 3 4:17 PM 2004. In Love• Commented on by judge. -
You are my only one desire
My only sent from god giftby fadedbyfate 55 lines, on Mar 4 1:24 PM 2004. In Love• Commented on by judge. -
The summers nearly ended
last time the lake will mingle with tearsby Inspired-Elf 40 lines, 7 comments, on Mar 7 1:34 PM 2004. In Lyrics• Commented on by judge. -
every single time I take you back I
feed the fire my eyes are dryby Inspired-Elf 33 lines, 10 comments, on Mar 7 3:21 PM 2004. In Lyrics• Commented on by judge. -
I can still feel your arms wrapped around me,
Your hands soothingly caressing my back.• Commented on by judge. -
I have a heart, a soul, a mind.
But now I lay helpless in the hands of time.by Flame Dancer 89 6 lines, on Mar 8 6:33 PM 2004. In Angst• Commented on by judge. -
Life has a meaning
I did not know whatby Flame Dancer 89 5 lines, on Mar 8 6:53 PM 2004. In Angst• Commented on by judge. -
We walked, and we talked,
About meaningful things,by Francesca Barrow 43 lines, 6 comments, on Mar 10 10:08 AM 2004. In Other• Commented on by judge. -
Because you you are my everything
because you• Commented on by judge. -
YOU ARE MY ANGEL
BUT I LET YOU GO,by carlspenc1 17 lines, 2 comments, on Mar 14 6:27 PM 2004. In Love• Commented on by judge. -
NEW ENTRY
I am a wandering soul -You are my refuge• Commented on by judge. -
Here I sit, lie awake and think about what sense this makes
Here I lay down this night without you by my sideby thebigwillie 29 lines, on Mar 15 12:09 AM 2004. In Love• Commented on by judge. -
How do you hold me the way you do,
To make me fall in love with you?• Commented on by judge. -
Just like before
This love is a boreby Confessionest 8 lines, 2 comments, on Mar 15 9:25 PM 2004. In Other• Commented on by judge. -
It came from that place
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by Muffin Magic 35 lines, 1 comment, on Mar 16 12:44 AM 2004. In Love• Commented on by judge.
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this is my perfect \by treehugger 24 lines, on Mar 16 9:02 AM 2004. In Love• Commented on by judge.
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You asked me what i liked
about the gender opposite of mineby DreamAsItSeems 15 lines, 1 comment, on Mar 16 8:20 PM 2004. In Love• Commented on by judge. -
I met you in a whirlwind
A tangle of emotion• Commented on by judge. -
There are always reasons to let go,
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My thoughts are blinking
My thoughts are flying• Commented on by judge. -
I really feel like she could be the "ONE"
but i don't know with never been out with a girl• Commented on by judge.
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this is cool. i know EXACTLY how you feel, because just a few months ago i was in the same position, but now i am back with my boyfriend
i'll be sure to enter this if i can think of something to write!
Leila -
Wow, my boyfriend (who I'm in love with and who loves me) decided that he needs a break because against his will, he has started to like some girl who put me and him through a lot of crap a few months ago. It hurts so bad...how ironic this was the first contest I saw after starting to have my heart ripped slowly apart. I might enter.
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you know...im dating a boy that i once dated 2 years ago...its great.
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I mean no offense by this, but if you want a really powerful poem that can make your ex boyfriend cry, shouldn't it be one that you write? After all, you know him, you could make it personalized to something that could only be written by someone who knows him.
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HAHAHA Sex is for marriage? are you f**kin screwy? Your poor boyfriend...
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Of couse I would write my own poem. I was just trying to further explain what I am looking for. I have already wrote many poems for him and he has enjoyed them. And no, I am serious that sex is for marriage. If you have a problem with that KittysAnAngel05, maybe you should think about NOT entering. And it wasn't my decision alone. He too agrees.... Know what you are talking about before you call some one screwed up becuase of them doing something they believe in.
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Finally a great contest. See,theres this girl katie..and I can actually say I love her. She's so perfect for me but she has a boyfriend. She cheated on him with me, but they still didn't break up...so now I write to let my emotions out/ I kind of know how you feel, so im glad someone has made a contest like this one!
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wow, i found this really hard, i really dont write happy things, but i think i did really good, these are my 1st contest poems and all, so i relaly dont know how it works, i dont know what 1/2 the words mean, well thnx for havin this contest
Terri -
Your position is an unfortunate one. I was in one kinda like it earlier. My bf of 5 months dumped me and we were apart for a little over 3 months, but we're back together now. But this contest is a great idea. I gave him a letter and apparently it helped in the break-up between him and his gf at the time so good luck, I might write an entry for the contest too. =)
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This is a lovely idea for a contest and I wish you the best in judging.
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Well, that was tons of fun. Hope my poem is something you were looking for. It is a fantastic idea for a contest. Good luck with your boyfriend by the way.
Best of luck,
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One question: Why do you want a poem to make him cry? If you really want him to know that you love him why don't you write him one yourself? I'm sure it would mean a lot more coming from your heart. Also, a word of advice to him [if he reads this] I know of someone who was proposed to but didn't marry this "perfect guy" because this guy ended up having to marry another girl [she said she would kill herself if she didn't stay with him] The two went their own ways and the man and suicidal woman ended up getting a divorse. Moral: THIS IS YOUR LIFE, LIVE, LOVE, LAUGH AND BE HAPPY. No one can tell you or force you to love. Also, what are the chances that anyone has a prewrite for this? I guess there is a possibility. Good luck with the contest and the guy
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narrow-minded. sorry
well since you said it's okay to disagree, then 'll admit that i do. i will try to be diplomatic but i must say that i don't really like the basis or the rules at all for this contest. first off, your very first topic. why are you hiring other people to write a poe for your ex? how is a poem from a complete and total stanger going to prove that you love him? sweetie, if you want him to come to that realization, you're going to need to write it yourself. the other topics i don't really have a problem with. now, on to the rules.
why are rhyming poems a bonus? not everyone writes rhymed poetry, and sometimes free verse is more appropriate. it just doesn't make sense to automatically give more credit to rhymed poems over non rhymed. next...no sex? if you don't believe in engaging in sex before marriage that's fine, that's your prerogative, but you seem to fail to understand that sex can be a beautiful thing. that's why it's called "making love." and to automatically disqualify a loving act just because you don't agree with it seems rather obtuse of you. i also think that on the rare occasion, a swear word or two might be appropriate. i also have some issues with the fact that you can only submit one previously written poem. people write poems about love all the time, why would you limit them to just one? at least it's been revised and polished, and it will be better than one just slapped together at the last minute.
i'm not trying to offend you, these are just the facts the way i see them. but again, this is your contest and i suppose you can judge it any way you like. good luck to all the contestants. -
my poem that i entered was a great hit with my "friend" and she absolutely loved it
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Best of luck to everyone thanks....and Thanks PixieDustins. I enjoyed writing for this contest. Thank you.
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i know theres a lot of poems but when are you gunna judge them?
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I am working on it.. I have a life of my own just as you do. I have school and practices and romance in my life. I will get to them as soon as I can. PROMISE!!
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