Wow, a contest. I want poems that tells what you would do if you had 24 hours to live. Do your worst you can do, if you want a example you can check out mine. ( HTTP://allpoetry.com/Poem/412709 )If you are some one who is kind hearted and would want to spend time with the people you love or if you want to take the world with you, its all good just give it your all.
No prewrites allowed.
First place is 300 points. Its all i got.
I want allot of detail with this, every thing from the way blood drips to how you kiss your true love for the last time.
Just give me your mind and if you are the best i give you my points.
Ok i changed the lines thing here because not even my poem is 20 lines hell with it just give me what you got no line thing.
Have at it.
If you have any quesetions im me on here on on aol at Carnaspider.
Enter as many times as you like, the more the marrier. lol
No prewrites allowed.
First place is 300 points. Its all i got.
I want allot of detail with this, every thing from the way blood drips to how you kiss your true love for the last time.
Just give me your mind and if you are the best i give you my points.
Ok i changed the lines thing here because not even my poem is 20 lines hell with it just give me what you got no line thing.
Have at it.
If you have any quesetions im me on here on on aol at Carnaspider.
Enter as many times as you like, the more the marrier. lol
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on March 1, 2004
- Rewards: Gold: 300
- Final notes: Well i can tell everyone put a very of effort in to each one of theses great poems,This was very hard to judge.....with that said
There are only a few that can but here are a few that were close A Rich Legacy by,leannewales, Final Revenge by,LuNaR EcLiPsE as well as many more but thanks all of you's for entering this has been great ~D~
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The last 24 hours would be spent in bed,
just waiting for the black cloud to come,• Commented on by judge. -
The warmth is coming
The tears my veins are crying• Commented on by judge. -
As your poison enters my body
My heart fills with disgust• Commented on by judge. -
in my last twenty-four
i would had asked for more• Commented on by judge. -
I strap on my bullet proof vest
To add some irony to my death.• Commented on by judge. -
This is what i would do if i had 24 hours to live.by sogoodinblue 24 lines, 6 comments, on Feb 22 5:31 PM 2004. In Personal• Commented on by judge.
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i stumble up the steps
into the room where you sit• Commented on by judge. -
They said I didn't have long
Only one short dayby TroubledAngel 13 lines, 1 comment, on Feb 23 10:20 PM 2004. In Other• Commented on by judge. -
ON MY LAST DAY
IF I HAD TWENTY FOUR HOURS TO LIVEby 76 lines, 3 comments, on Feb 23 11:25 PM 2004. In Love• Commented on by judge. -
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Tick T
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24 hours left to live
1,440 minutes, now that sounds betterby My Nemesis 45 lines, 3 comments, on Feb 25 5:08 PM 2004. In Other• Commented on by judge. -
I hear it from the news
today will be the last dayby cherish130 50 lines, 1 comment, on Feb 25 6:09 PM 2004. In Love• Commented on by judge. -
to take your own life
to cause so much painby xshatteredsoulx 33 lines, 3 comments, on Feb 25 11:29 PM 2004. In Other• Commented on by judge. -
I i only had a day to live,
I would live that day with you.by PainsWings 20 lines, 3 comments, on Feb 26 6:49 AM 2004. In Love• Commented on by judge. -
One day left
just a simple 24 hours• Commented on by judge. -
If I only had twenty four hours
And nobody else knew itby leannewales 33 lines, 8 comments, on Feb 26 2:47 PM 2004. In Humor• Commented on by judge. -
i've got a day and a night left to live
and i'm going to spend each moment awakeby DarkNightingale 113 lines, 3 comments, on Feb 26 4:18 PM 2004. In Other• Commented on by judge. -
Running from the hourglass
I see the minutes passing.by Actual Reason 24 lines, 3 comments, on Feb 26 9:13 PM 2004. In Love• Commented on by judge. -
My body infected with an unholy virus
And I am left to prosperby Gwynaviere 41 lines, 2 comments, on Feb 26 10:44 PM 2004. In Love• Commented on by judge.
Bronze trophy winner
Gold trophy winner
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I am going to work on it tonight and see what I come up with. ~~Shannon~~
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lol i have a pre-write
but ill see what i can come up with offhand..
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Hey sexy....I haven't talked to you in a while...This is an awesome contest...its totally you...don't mean to sound like a prep....lol...Hope you enjoy my poem...just want you to know that whenever I read a gorey poem...I think of you...lol..
...later sexy...hope you have fun judging this..
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hey dirk i am gonna try my best to enter your contest all though i am not sure what i will come up with cuz its been awhile since i wrote...ti amo ! ttyl i am gonna try to write luv ya byez
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lol its a dozen roses
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wow you guys are doing some really good poems. the end is drawing near, less then a week, then it shall be the final 24 hours for this contest. keep entering, i want to see different points of view, when ppl only got a day to fit every thing they wanted in to there life. keep on keepin on, ~D~
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good idea for a contest! have fun!
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i will enter my poem tomorow, i have to edit it tonite and the rest of today-be warned, i probly wont win, mines gonna be all depressing with no goodbyes in it oh well tho, its what i would do...
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it says 'do the worst you can do' whats that mean?
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THIS IS GREAT CONTEST... GREAT IDEA!
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it means the worst the sickest, make it be like some thing that will make me fall from the chair.
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holy shit so many entires in to this wow, you guys rock. ~D~
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thank you very much joker for acknoledging my piece...
very well appreciated, your contest is worth the thinking and writing... hope to join your another contest soon or maybe check one of mine soon to post...
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Thanks for the win, Joker. Amongst these high class pieces it feels very satisfying to be there with them all. Thank you to anyone who read 'Whose 24?'...I'd like to thank the academy.....LOL
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