Hello new members! leannewales and I, along with the AllPoetry Greeters staff are excited to meet you and read what you have.
Here is the criteria (Requirement, Standard)- please examine thoroughly!
I would like wonderfully polished poetry inspired by or illustrating someone in the work force, community , church or ministry arenas that can uncover what kind of person he/she is. You don’t have to “know “ them personally. It can just be ABOUT someone in that job title or position.
The position, however menial, must reveal strong or admirable qualities of one’s personality or character; therefore, don’t just write about the person, but how or what they do which reveals it.
READ EXAMPLE- 'Through Deelie's Window' allpoetry.com/Poem/151317">allpoetry.com/Poem/151317">allpoetry.com/Poem/151317
- OKAY. Here’s the PLUS factor that will make your entry much more favorable:
The more obscure the person’s position or service, the better it will be
considered!
-Also, I will eventually put a collection of them for those who’d like to use them for personal greetings to others, including friends, family, co-workers with the permission of the author. Your copyright will be on YOURS should I include them in this special collection which will ONLY be on the AllPoetry forum.
The Basic rules:
1.) You must choose only ONE theme per poem. In other words, if you’re
writing about a street musician in one, and want to enter a second time, it has to have a different subject. TWO entries maximum, please.
2.) Each piece must not exceed 30 lines, but can be written in any style or form.
3.) We’re looking for your best writing that flows well and has good aural quality if recited.
-If you have any typos or misspells, you are welcome to edit and let one of us know by Instant Message, after we’ve posted the notice of it. Hey. You can do this!
Previously written poems that describe the content required are ACCEPTED.
PLEASE! No obscene language nor graphically sexual references.Slang, street lingo, colloquialisms, cliches are fine, long as they are tastefully and not wastefully used.
Please try not to be clumsy with grammar or word structure. (If you’re unsure of a verb usage or word, check with me or another member on the site. Most are very happy to help!)
First Prize-300 points
Second Prize-150 points
Third Prize Cup-75.
Depending on the complexities in comparing, we will also rank a few runners up, and some will be given points if they make honorable mention!
Here is the criteria (Requirement, Standard)- please examine thoroughly!
I would like wonderfully polished poetry inspired by or illustrating someone in the work force, community , church or ministry arenas that can uncover what kind of person he/she is. You don’t have to “know “ them personally. It can just be ABOUT someone in that job title or position.
The position, however menial, must reveal strong or admirable qualities of one’s personality or character; therefore, don’t just write about the person, but how or what they do which reveals it.
READ EXAMPLE- 'Through Deelie's Window' allpoetry.com/Poem/151317">allpoetry.com/Poem/151317">allpoetry.com/Poem/15131
- OKAY. Here’s the PLUS factor that will make your entry much more favorable:
The more obscure the person’s position or service, the better it will be
considered!
-Also, I will eventually put a collection of them for those who’d like to use them for personal greetings to others, including friends, family, co-workers with the permission of the author. Your copyright will be on YOURS should I include them in this special collection which will ONLY be on the AllPoetry forum.
The Basic rules:
1.) You must choose only ONE theme per poem. In other words, if you’re
writing about a street musician in one, and want to enter a second time, it has to have a different subject. TWO entries maximum, please.
2.) Each piece must not exceed 30 lines, but can be written in any style or form.
3.) We’re looking for your best writing that flows well and has good aural quality if recited.
-If you have any typos or misspells, you are welcome to edit and let one of us know by Instant Message, after we’ve posted the notice of it. Hey. You can do this!
Previously written poems that describe the content required are ACCEPTED.
PLEASE! No obscene language nor graphically sexual references.Slang, street lingo, colloquialisms, cliches are fine, long as they are tastefully and not wastefully used.
Please try not to be clumsy with grammar or word structure. (If you’re unsure of a verb usage or word, check with me or another member on the site. Most are very happy to help!)
First Prize-300 points
Second Prize-150 points
Third Prize Cup-75.
Depending on the complexities in comparing, we will also rank a few runners up, and some will be given points if they make honorable mention!
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on March 2, 2004
- Rewards: Gold: 300
- Final notes: Wow...over 50 entries! Although some poems did NOT meet the criteria or requirements, there were so many great entries!
Wish there was tie-status, for this one would CRASH in all THREE place winnings. I'm so very glad you have participated if no trophy. But for those who successfully attributes of the criteria , they stand in Honorable Mention.
Honorable Mention: are 4.) kirbysman's 'Simple Pleasures' 5.) Jobob's 'Soul Cleaner' 6.) Apneic Suicide's 'Even A Hero Dies'
Others: TheDan's 'My True Love,The Garbage Man' , tyrtle's 'Green Hair Loser' , passionatepiece's 'Clay Maker' LadyCat's 'My GreatGrand Uncle, E.J Smith' , nokie's 'Nurse,My Mother'_-There are many more I can't nameEntries [38]
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It was time when something new came around. Something called experience. The incredible reality.Long live the line of truth.The X.To expand the mind not to escaby TheManOnTheMoon 0 lines, 6 comments, on Feb 2 7:27 PM 2004. In Lyrics• Commented on by judge.
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Some people say we clash but to me, we are like the colors of the rainbow. Perfect until the rain falls and the sun disappears.by TheManOnTheMoon 0 lines, 4 comments, on Feb 2 7:39 PM 2004. In Love• Commented on by judge.
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You accuse the man on the moon like you shared the vision of failure with me.
Just because the weeds grow in my brain doesn't mean you have to fuck with his feeby TheManOnTheMoon 4 lines, 6 comments, on Feb 2 8:01 PM 2004. In Personal• Commented on by judge. -
I chopped up frozen ice,
So snow could drain, his feet would know,• Commented on by judge. -
To see the last of something happen first,
Before the ground is broken, is to know a loss• Commented on by judge. -
He kneads the mud.
He needs the mud.by passionatepeace 18 lines, 9 comments, on Feb 6 2:32 PM 2004. In Society• Commented on by judge. -
There is a wound in his hand
And ironically the blood flows prudent• Commented on by judge. -
Kindness personified,
She's one of a kind.by Philanthropist 34 lines, 13 comments, on Feb 7 11:12 AM 2004. In Other• Commented on by judge. -
to the masses they must some how knock down
to the ways of life they must have found• Commented on by judge. -
Said son I'm sorry to say
You farther left for the U. S.of A• Commented on by judge. -
I work I work I work all day
And what do I have to say• Commented on by judge. -
Eyes always moist, with fresh new tears,
a heart continually breaking,• Commented on by judge. -
There is something Calvinistic about this man of the old-sea breed.
Where they never outgrow the wild grandeur of the sea.• Commented on by judge. -
But without his faithful garbage man
His house would smell like rear• Commented on by judge. -
His Hands in my hair,
May he leave it right thereby 5 lines, 4 comments, on Feb 19 3:19 PM 2004. In Love• Commented on by judge. -
Burning stones to ashes
and feeling good politicians• Commented on by judge. -
This fire-breathing dragon has a secret no one wants..
Foolish or valiant? You decide.• Commented on by judge. -
Written in regards of a 25yr. old mother who was brutally murdered and dismembered.• Commented on by judge.
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Lost in this world,
overcome with grief.by Alisha Greene 18 lines, 6 comments, on Feb 22 6:26 PM 2004. In Angst• Commented on by judge. -
My flooded gaze encountered his eyes
as I thought, "Even a hero dies."by Apneic Suicide 16 lines, 9 comments, on Feb 23 7:38 PM 2004. In Personal• Commented on by judge. -
He follows sweeping strokes until the end
where, reaching Altar steps, he genuflects.• Commented on by judge. -
cold
Its so damn cold, all it ever is is cold in this god forsacen place.by sideshowbobby 9 lines, 9 comments, on Feb 24 10:00 AM 2004. In Other• Commented on by judge. -
He sits in the corner talking to himself
That is how he has spent every day of the last 10 yearsby My Nemesis 34 lines, 7 comments, on Feb 24 2:51 PM 2004. In Society• Commented on by judge. -
over looked people that keep everything workingby Pinkeye Pete 11 lines, 8 comments, on Feb 25 11:03 AM 2004. In Contemporary• Commented on by judge.
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Vociferocity begins at the end of a desperate trail of hope
The vociferous kiss is given over drinks from the poets own getm mugs• Commented on by judge. -
He gave my voice a rise...
with his Nyquil songs...prayers that tranquilize.by Nobody You Know 17 lines, 7 comments, on Feb 25 12:46 PM 2004. In Lyrics• Commented on by judge. -
Forgotten Rainbows
Tears of Happinessby Getm Mugs 33 lines, 8 comments, on Feb 25 7:52 PM 2004. In Contemporary• Commented on by judge. -
Who are they without you
you drive the sound• Commented on by judge. -
Mr. Johnson cleaned all day, while all of the children laugh and play.
He treasured each child as if his own, but most of the time he spent alone. He mopped a• Commented on by judge. -
This one's about the people who really matter...teachers.• Commented on by judge.
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For thirteen years, I missed her
After thirteen years, she cameby Silent Dreamer 32 lines, 9 comments, on Feb 28 12:14 AM 2004. In Love• Commented on by judge. -
But I took my own life.
That wasn't so bad.• Commented on by judge. -
As if you are the alpha and omega, with the power to procure
Letters of good tiding [or bad tiding, circumstantial]by vaguelyfamiliar 33 lines, 9 comments, on Feb 28 3:44 PM 2004. In Society, Other, Hope
Bronze trophy winner
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Cookie can I enter huh huh can I
well ya know who I be writing about you 
Love you dear, you was on my heart said a prayer for you today to......I really need a relationship with the Lord in my life closer walk with him ya know. But anyhows just wanted to tell you I loved you today Aunt Cookie. Much love,Sherry
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A great contest subject
And the example poem you mentioned is wonderful.
Lol.. at Sherry... she's such a sweetie.
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hey this is a really neat contest guys. -goes to change my messege-
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Wonderful idea Leanne and Cookie - so many unsung heroes out there that deserve some recognition. I don't think I've ever seen a contest with this theme before.
I look forward to reading the entries.
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Cool idea. I hope you get alot of entries.
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Hey!! Thanks to all who commented..a.nd philophant. Good to see you stand in our corner!
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Great idea would like to enter about my job lol the one in real life not here ! GOOD LUCK TO YOU ALL!!
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Come On, you all! You can do it. It's not that hard...really
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I agree with everyone else above, this is a good idea and one that everyone can really put some thought into.
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This is a great idea. We've been having such original and unique greeter contests lately. Can't wait to do some reading.
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I am sorry I missed this one!
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I'm sorry , but the closing date was wrong. Please post your entry! It's been edited. Thank you for telling me.
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awesome idea, go AP
What a wonderful idea for those new to the site! I just think it is terrific! So many new features on the site. Things are always changing! I can't even afford to be sick! Every time I am, I return to be totally lost in all the updates and new going's on! I am speaking very highly of Kevin's brain child. this site has more than doubled since I was guided here by a cousin of a well established author here. Our own 'catz'! AP has provided a lifeline to the outside world when I am not able to be active in my own area. It's a blessing from God. Di~ I don't know how you do it all? I'll be reading some of these entries, so much bookmark for later. -
Wonderful idea! I missed the January newcomers contest. May I enter this one?
Ja
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Is the picture in montreal, in the just for laughts?, it looks like am such exited....I love canadaa...
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You know, I'm not sure. I was looking for city crowd photos and it was at the bottom of a page without description! Or I would do as I would normally-given credit. Interesting that you would recognize it if it were. Let me know, will you??? Thank you...????
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I wanted to say this is the first time I have been by the new poets contes and I enjoyed it i will have to stop by here a lot more when the contest come up
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A Loner was entered by mistake and I don't know how to get it out. Help anyone?
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lol..don't worry. I happens a lot! Simply go to 'Edit' and it will give you the option to delete it
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Thanks for the Mention on my poem.
Contragrates to the Winners.
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*is extreamly mad*
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Congratulations to the Winners of the February contest. We certainly receved some outstanding entries.
You all deserve 'Applause" as do your Unsung Heroes.
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Amen again I say...Amen! lol
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I want to add The Beasts "Mr. Johnson, A Tribute" and also Fern's "The Military Man for EXCELLENT and touching poems. I'm sorry if they were skipped on the Honorable Mention, but I could not edit the Final Note! Please forgive! Each is rendered the promised gratuity points!
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