you have now entered into the DARK zone
no matter who you are, emotions effect us all... you can dismiss, disguise, conceal, cloak, cover, screen, hide, paint, mystify, reserve, camouflage, relinquish, abandon, banish, eject, defy, confront, brave, challenge, dare, employ, engage, embrace, hold, alienate and the list goes on.
in our world there are many constants. many things stand as concrete as they never change. humans will always go through a changing process in their lives as we are driven by our emotions. what follows is your task at hand:
write about how or what you feel about me(theDARK1)
write about how or what you feel about yourself
write about how or what you feel about someone else
those things i stick in there what you know to be rules.
1. no pre-writes (the only reason i even say it is for those new admirers that don't know this rule).
2. any styleform (again, just for the new followers since everyone knows this one too).
3. up to 3 entries (one for each choice...you won't have to list it as it will be evident of your entry).
4. closes january 30, 2004 (i want to give plenty of time for this is something you might need to think about).
NOTE: by the way, itz always policy that i wish you luck now for i will not do it on your entry (i forgot to put this statement in the last contest and is why i commented like i did on the entries in contest #10).
the DARK zone
a soul without boundaries
floating in the DARK endlessly
a heart without a beat
flatlined on a lonely DARK street
the body limber in the night
engulfed in DARKness without light
only in the end to be alone
itz time to enter the DARK zone
no matter who you are, emotions effect us all... you can dismiss, disguise, conceal, cloak, cover, screen, hide, paint, mystify, reserve, camouflage, relinquish, abandon, banish, eject, defy, confront, brave, challenge, dare, employ, engage, embrace, hold, alienate and the list goes on.
in our world there are many constants. many things stand as concrete as they never change. humans will always go through a changing process in their lives as we are driven by our emotions. what follows is your task at hand:
write about how or what you feel about me(theDARK1)
write about how or what you feel about yourself
write about how or what you feel about someone else
those things i stick in there what you know to be rules.
1. no pre-writes (the only reason i even say it is for those new admirers that don't know this rule).
2. any styleform (again, just for the new followers since everyone knows this one too).
3. up to 3 entries (one for each choice...you won't have to list it as it will be evident of your entry).
4. closes january 30, 2004 (i want to give plenty of time for this is something you might need to think about).
NOTE: by the way, itz always policy that i wish you luck now for i will not do it on your entry (i forgot to put this statement in the last contest and is why i commented like i did on the entries in contest #10).
the DARK zone
a soul without boundaries
floating in the DARK endlessly
a heart without a beat
flatlined on a lonely DARK street
the body limber in the night
engulfed in DARKness without light
only in the end to be alone
itz time to enter the DARK zone
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on February 1, 2004
- Rewards: Gold: 317
- Final notes: this contest became bigger than i could imagine. itz now officially worth a total of 802 points at the closing of this contest. i have spent hours reviewing all of the entries in this contest and it was not an easy task. i have done something different in this contest for i have selected 11 winners. trust me that there could have been more than what i have selected. even the ones that i selected may not be better than the ones not being selected, but this was an 'emotional' contest and i judged it based on my emotions as to what i read.
Grand Prize Winner (of 369 points) From The Charred Depths by ShadowedOne
First Place Winner (Gold Trophy) The Darkness That Lies Within by meesa p
Second Place Winner (Silver Trophy) Octobers Curse by Samplette
Third Place Winner(Bronze Trophy) Life's Been Hell by predatorsgirl
The following is a list of honorable mentions with the points designated:
35pts The Mournful Me by poetryality
25pts The Gift of Friendship by wonderfullest
17pts Fallen Blu Angel by SLKenM
15pts Mysteriousness of DARK by MoonWillow
12pts Dark Storm by aloneintheworld
07pts light to dark back to light by Shaggys Wife
05ptsDark man by TheOneRomeo
i do thank everyone for participating. if you have been awarded points, you will receive them by the close of business on february 1, 2004. this will exhaust all of my points until i get in gear to get some more. thank you for making this a very enjoyable contest. if exceeded my expectations by far with the personal entries i received. i hope everyone is proud of their entry(ies) as they were of great quality. thanks again for being in the DARK zone.
Entries [24]
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My thoughts cluster
in the hopes of what I picture saneby clamchoder 28 lines, 9 comments, on Dec 30 9:01 PM 2003. In Angst• Commented on by judge. -
I dig the hole deeper
And bury her thereby RebelJunkie666 41 lines, 7 comments, on Dec 30 10:00 PM 2003. In Other• Commented on by judge. -
The Darkness That Lies Within
The darkness has always been my one true friend• Commented on by judge. -
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There is a fire burning deep inside
lit by the first conversation we sharedby ShadowedOne 19 lines, 6 comments, on Dec 31 4:30 PM 2003. In Love• Commented on by judge. -
As a child I was a lone,
always lingering towards the unknown,• Commented on by judge. -
Your presence continuously tries to haunt me
Forever stepping on the edge of my shadowby silent-heart 24 lines, 1 comment, on Jan 1 2:12 AM 2004. In Angst• Commented on by judge. -
by Shaggys Wife 46 lines, 3 comments, on Jan 1 12:54 PM 2004. In Personal• Commented on by judge.
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i hate myself with a passion
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This twisted euphoria will always keep me at a mental block of finger deep, and will hold my legs down from taking a last, committed step, so I will lay along t• Commented on by judge.
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Be careful of who you go out with.by lustfulviolets 16 lines, 4 comments, on Jan 24 3:12 PM 2004. In Dark• Commented on by judge.
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but my leg is never nawed off
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Now I've been hurled
Into a world ofby lovelessgravitation 25 lines, 1 comment, on Jan 25 6:28 PM 2004. In Other• Commented on by judge. -
Cause if thats all ya got.
Your left with me.• Commented on by judge. -
an overveiw of my feelings sometimes.by Lady Tetsu-Maru 23 lines, 1 comment, on Jan 28 1:38 PM 2004. In Other• Commented on by judge.
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All my feelings
Everything I want to sayby LonelyDepressed 23 lines, 2 comments, on Jan 28 9:57 PM 2004. In Other• Commented on by judge. -
I fall to the floor
Crimson tears drippingby LonelyDepressed 27 lines, 4 comments, on Jan 28 10:07 PM 2004. In Abuse• Commented on by judge. -
I walk the streets
Through the darkenedby LonelyDepressed 31 lines, 3 comments, on Jan 28 10:16 PM 2004. In Dark• Commented on by judge. -
Beware the mood subject is about to change,• Commented on by judge.
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it aint really dark n scary, but it works 4 me...by my broken love 17 lines, 1 comment, on Jan 29 7:56 PM 2004. In Love• Commented on by judge.
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I'm dead
When those words start flowing• Commented on by judge.
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New and different
i need to write something for this contest...i will join when i have something thought of
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"What we FEEL we create and what we create we SEE"
I'm sure I will be able to enter this I will just wait though til I've got that ripper of a piece to explode...you know that feeling...that you don't get everyday...hope I get it before it closes...I know it's open for quite a while so thats kool...Great contest DARK...CHEEKS..X. -
Wow, you like contests, a lot.
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i was wanting to get to all of the entries, but i must retire these eyes for an hour or two because i must be leaving for work soon. if i have not made a comment on your poem i will do it before itz judged if not before then. time does have an ending cycle in itz measurement even if it does not know when to end in infinity.
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Very unique kind of contest is this one,good luck judging all and darkness is very compelling it takes you with it and steals your soul.lol.
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im with TheOneRomeo totally
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there were alot more entries that i still need to read later today and comment on. then i will review all of the poems one more time and make my decisions. i can tell you this will not be an easy contest to judge for i received so many great entries not to include the ones i have yet to read (which i am sure that it will make my job even tougher). at least i will have it all judged by the end of the day (feb 01, 2004).
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Thank you so much for honoring me with the silver. I am so glad you thought it deserving.
Sam
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sam,
it was very deserving. i liked how there were many personal entries in this contest. i just wish i could give every one a prize and points. i did spend 802 points on this contest. i probably won't have any more until april 2004 after the contest i have for the ShadowedOne for i plan to take two vacations in march 2004 now. so many will probably see me very little during the next month. i will be on and off i am sure. anyway, you are very welcome.
luvya, DARK
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