We are all sinners...and I would like to see your original - NO PREWRITES ALLOWED - poems about your sins, about how you are going to Hell, or about what's going on in Hell as we speak. The general theme is Hell. Please don't submit any poems talking about how Hell doesn't exist, or how good you are and you will go to Heaven. This planet is another planet's Hell. We've all been through Hell. And I want you to write poems about it.
For the rules:
1. No prewrites
2. No more than 2 entries per person
3. Hold back on profanity and erotica, although I certainly don't mind it in small doses
Have fun!
For the rules:
1. No prewrites
2. No more than 2 entries per person
3. Hold back on profanity and erotica, although I certainly don't mind it in small doses
Have fun!
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on December 14, 2003
- Rewards: Gold: 250
- Final notes: Ah, I wish I could give out ten trophies instead of just three. I thank everybody for entering my contest. It was a hard one to judge because every poem was very unique, and Hells described were very different.
Entries [7]
1 - 7 of 7
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Fluffy bunny, horrible day
Here comes Mr. Hunter, Yay!• Commented on by judge. -
It's the car alarm that won't go off
Repeating discordant fury as an old• Commented on by judge. -
It's the car alarm that won't go off
Repeating discordant fury as an oldby Katg16 32 lines, 3 comments, on Dec 9 4:38 AM 2003. In Adult humor, Humor, Contemporary
Gold trophy winner
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Will it be any different..
When I end up in hell..• Commented on by judge. -
a single hair-thin papercut,
bound thick with broken glass• Commented on by judge. -
I travelled as I slept,
Missing the Light by just a fraction• Commented on by judge. -
Hell is the line to get into Hell.• Commented on by judge.
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Aww...this sounds like so much fun dammit. If I come up with a good idea I will enter
. Not like that will happen...but we shall see!
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Can it be a Hell-on-earth sort of thing, or do you want it more like mythical Hades...?
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I'm Guilty of bieng a loser
sorry that the subject matter isnt that much on hell but on this one guy I don't know who certian other people think should be sent there, I'm sure you'll have some big reaction to it though, be it hug me or slap, break and decapitate me... -
ah damnation!!!no prewrites.oh wellenjoy this one then
To Hell
VIOLENT,HORRIBLE,BOTTOMLESS,HOLE
ENDLESS,VENOMOUS RIVERS,FLOW
ETERNAL SUFFERING PLACED ON THEE
NOW IN THE PITS CAPTIVITY
SCREAMING VOICES-TWISTED SOULS
DARK DOMINATES-LIGHT NEVER SHOWS
TWISTED HOPELESS
AGONY WITH PURPOSE
BEGGING IN VAIN...
TO END THIS SPIRIT SCORCHING PAIN
BURNING CHAOS,IN A WORLD OF ASH
A CENTURY OF BURNING,IN A FLASH
DOOM,DOOM-HADES HAMMERS CRASH
POUNDING DOWN THE WICKED-BEATEN,BROKEN,SMASHED
A LAKE OF FLAMES,IN FIRE YOU DROWND
MALEVOLENT MALESTROM FOREVER,SPIRALING,DOWN
ENTOMBED BY FATE,
DAMNED IN HATE
LIVING A NIGHTMARE...
IN UNDEAD TERROR
A CROWN OF THORNS,UPON YOUR HEAD
FOR HELL KNOWS HOW TO HONOR ITS DEAD
A THOUSAND THORNS,FOR YOUR EYES!
FOR HELL LOVES TO LAUGH AT YOUR CRIES
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