We've all been thru it before at least once in our lives.. you know.. wishing you said something that you didnt? Now.. I want you to write about an incident in which you think you shouldve said something but didnt and now its too late.. write what you wouldve said to that person.. Like.. for me.. it would be not telling my parents and those who mean a lot to me how I felt.. but it doesnt have to be that at all.. be creative and have fun!
Rules- Sorry gotta have them
~You may enter up to three times but Id like at least ONE new one if youre going to enter more than once
~Rhyme no rhyme doesnt matter (personally.. I like a poem that flows easily and doesnt sound forced like some people force the rhyme.. if it sounds fake or forced Im not going to consider it)
~I want it to come from your heart
~If you have any other questions IM me or leave a message here and I'll get back to you as soon as possible
Rules- Sorry gotta have them
~You may enter up to three times but Id like at least ONE new one if youre going to enter more than once
~Rhyme no rhyme doesnt matter (personally.. I like a poem that flows easily and doesnt sound forced like some people force the rhyme.. if it sounds fake or forced Im not going to consider it)
~I want it to come from your heart
~If you have any other questions IM me or leave a message here and I'll get back to you as soon as possible
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on November 23, 2003
- Rewards: Gold: 250
- Final notes: great entries, sometimes a difficult subject, but written to well here. good job everybody!
Entries [24]
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I'm looking back at all the pain
you drove straight through my heart• Commented on by judge. -
The things I left unsaid.
My feelings left in my heart• Commented on by judge. -
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I feel my heart breaking
And I just don't know what to doby Nightshadow 40 lines, 1 comment, on Sep 28 2:49 PM 2003. In Love• Commented on by judge. -
Time passes,
You're trying to look as cool as you can,• Commented on by judge. -
Father you left this morning,
We had a fight last night,• Commented on by judge. -
His hands held mine so intensely
As we fooled around on the floor,• Commented on by judge. -
Winter Reminiscence
Sitting alone, watching snow falls,by Eliza Simmons 32 lines, on Oct 6 5:07 PM 2003. In Angst• Commented on by judge. -
To you my heart stays true
Forever more, I’ll be yoursby sameoldfears 13 lines, on Oct 6 10:37 PM 2003. In Love• Commented on by judge. -
My friend there's so much I want to say to you,
even thought the number of years I've known you are few.• Commented on by judge. -
Running my hand through your hair
A soft and gentle caressby surrealdelusion 32 lines, 1 comment, on Oct 8 10:26 AM 2003. In Angst• Commented on by judge. -
The night was cold
you gave me your jacket• Commented on by judge. -
dedicated to someone very close to me that died and i never got to tell them i loved them......
so many nights i have spent drowning in my tearsby Wildchild310 46 lines, 3 comments, on Oct 8 4:47 PM 2003. In Personal• Commented on by judge. -
I wouldn’t have told you so desperately
I needed you that snowy dayby EmpathyBlue 21 lines, on Oct 8 5:36 PM 2003. In Angst• Commented on by judge. -
if you dont care that you hurt me
i know you'll care about herby SacredRose 41 lines, 2 comments, on Oct 9 9:50 PM 2003. In Other• Commented on by judge. -
You often said that "love was true"
an oddly placed emotionby emojunkie543 20 lines, on Oct 9 9:54 PM 2003. In Love• Commented on by judge. -
If time can be put back
To the day you I were together• Commented on by judge. -
If time can be put back
To the day you I were together• Commented on by judge. -
I can not believe,
My last words to you,• Commented on by judge. -
With your painful words
I was stabbed in the heart• Commented on by judge. -
How can I come clean to the childrenby goldmember 34 lines, 1 comment, on Oct 10 4:18 PM 2003. In Angst• Commented on by judge. -
don't you know you hurt me?
torture every time the phone ringsby poetonly5002 14 lines, 2 comments, on Oct 10 7:57 PM 2003. In Personal• Commented on by judge. -
I wish I fwould have said I love you
When you told me how you felt• Commented on by judge.
Bronze trophy winner
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decided to enter twice hehe...This is a great contest there are soo many things that I wish I could have said to people and never got to...and this is a great way to vent...
thanks!
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hey thanks for entering and good luck..
Im glad someone entered I was sort of doubting this but if this is the kind of contest Id have a ball with because its just so free ya know? anywhos keep em coming!!
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oh and about my poem that you said that the line was repeated? yeah hehe I didnt mean to do that...but when I read it it only show up once...weirdness...anyhoo great contest! thank for your comments on my poems!
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Ahhh, yes i can totally relate to this as i am sure ALOT of people can. It is a shame that people often take other people for granted, and then before you know it, they are gone and you are left going over in your mind all the things you should have said or should have done. Sometimes you don't get the chance to ever tell it, but if you do, go for it. Thats my porogative on that. Good luck all, cool contest.
"Writing is a therapy all it's own stay strong keep writing" -
OKay i seriously think that this is the best contest ever, because SacredRose wrote hers about me and it touched my heart more than i would ever know if this contest wasnt here to tell me! thnx for creating it and i hope that she gets some kind of trophy cause this contest is what brought her true feelings to me and thats just yeah, it really makes me think and her poem touched my heart i was like cryin.. thnx for allowing her to write it and tell me! lov eyou lots~ psycho fro girl!
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good luck to all... may we meet again in another contest soon... this was a GREAT CONTEST... mine was wrote for my son who died at 21 from a drowning accident... so much was left unsaid cuz he left to soon... never exspected it to happen... again good luck to all... this is my 1st time ever entering in a contest...st
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great poem
hey tazz, good luck chic... hope you win..... great poem i love it -
GOOD LUCK
hey all i wish we could all win but that can't happen. i wish you all the best of luck.... there are alot of great poems and alot of great poets and again good luck -
when will we know the results starshine
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good
hey tazz is this better i'm looking in my name now and sending you a comment lol... again good luck chic... star -
I check everyday for results.....
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Im sorry I havent been around.. great judgements though!
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