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Make Me Feel

Okay everyone. this is my first contest and here is the deal:

i just got my heart broken by someone i really care about because of my petty insecurities and need of attention.(no hard feelings to this person at all) so, here are you're choices:

1) write me a poem telling me how to get through this
2) share an experience of how you overcame something
3) pretend you are a superhero and write how you plan to save the day

or on a completely different topic

1) write about an inanimate(sp?)object that makes you happy
2) pretend i am blind and write to me about something I'd want to see
3) redo your favorite song

you have 6 broad topics. i expect this to be hard because i know of many excellent poets on this site.

Rules are:

1) if you choose one of the first 3, no negative remarks about the heart breaker or i will beat you with a stick!
2) no more than 2 submissions please
3) if you re write a song, tell me the song
4) pre writes are okay but if you put it 2, i want one to be just written for the contest

other than that, have fun and make me have a tough time choosing! make me proud!

-Jessie

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on September 22, 2003
  • Rewards: Gold: 250
  • Final notes:

    Jay-Piksie: Thank you so much for entering my contest. I had a really touch time deciding the winners. Thank you so much to all that entered! I loved every one. Seriously you guys are amazing. :)

Entries [10]

1 - 10 of 10
  • The Comfort You Need
    Heartbreak from true love
    has no cure
    by Samplette 42 lines, 4 comments, on Sep 16 3:06 PM 2003. In Love
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Moving On With Love
    An emotion you can't explain
    Sending pleasure through out your veins
    by SternBlinkin 32 lines, 2 comments, on Sep 16 8:28 PM 2003. In Spiritual, Love, Hope
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Favourite Place
    Sitting here, watching the sunset
    The green grass
    by LadyLover 16 lines, 1 comment, on Sep 16 8:51 PM 2003. In Nature
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Heartbreak
    i think i'll have to avoid you
    for seeing you makes my heart go weak
    by mistletoe 24 lines, 4 comments, on Sep 19 8:11 PM 2003. In Angst, Erotica
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Nighttime's Fantasy
    Have you seen the moon tonight?
    He lights our way with glowing pride,
    by Starstruck 17 lines, 2 comments, on Sep 19 11:18 PM 2003. In Other, Nature
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Don't let this feeling end
    Don’t let this feeling end
    It might not come again
    by Rubicar 60 lines, on Sep 20 7:49 AM 2003. In Hope
    • Commented on by judge.
  • To:You From:Me
    Yeah you were nice and you changed my life,
    but little did I know love was gonna feel like a knife,
    by Mystique 20 lines, on Sep 20 4:59 PM 2003. In Love
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Dear ...
    Tears running down my pale white face,
    Seeing you walk away,
    by Frozen Fears 21 lines, on Sep 20 5:54 PM 2003. In Personal
    • Commented on by judge.
  • My Heart Took a Tumble
    I tried to say the right things
    On my words I did stumble
    by Baterboy 22 lines, on Sep 20 8:50 PM 2003. In Love
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Thank You
    You left me totally lost and unprepared for life. I trusted you completely. My world revolved around you. I waited for your calls, I was willing to do anything
    by Emeraldreamer 36 lines, 1 comment, on Sep 20 10:33 PM 2003. In Personal
    • Commented on by judge.

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  • Honesty Abounds
    September 17, 2003
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    Dear Jay-Piksie~

    Make Me Feel

    I've got an idea of which one I may write about...Give me a day or so and I'll post it. By the way, I really do like that you have given some creative ideas to work with.

    Good luck to all that enter! I look forward to commenting on the other writings...I'm going to try to enter a poem worthy of recognition. Good luck on judging, it's going to be a difificult task.

    If I wasn't entering then I'd offer my help to you! But, I better get some ideas flowing for your contest. And I better get going, huh?

    I'm glad I'm ahead in my college courses...two week vacation is coming up on the 28th of September until October 11th.
    So I'll be here much more often=Yayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!

    Always, ^j^Honesty