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Leaving

Okay I want a poem about leaving the one you love for whatever reason
~Cant be prewritten
~Any length
~Rhyme or no rhyme(doesn't matter)
~Put some time and effort into this
~Enter up to 3 poems
~Let me feel how you're feeling

~Ill try and comment on all poems if I can, if I didnt comment on yours before the contest ends I will eventually~

Contest is Over

Contest was judged on July 27, 2003
Rewards: Gold: 250
Final notes:

Malz: I must admit this was a hard one to judge.. you all did a good job and as you all know I cant give out a trophy to everyone but these people did an exceptional job thanks for entering!! Congrats Nikihayami,PoetryGirl26 and Brandell!

Entries [11]

1 - 11 of 11

I Will Not.

I will not cry, should you walk
out the door.

by Twosoulsasone 20 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 13 10:57 PM 2003. In Angst

• Commented on by judge.
Leaving me

How about a goodbye, a quiet farewell,
before you leave my life forever?

by Skittlesmcafe 32 lines, on Jul 14 9:45 AM 2003. In Love

• Commented on by judge.
Leaving My Baby

Baby,
oh darling, beautiful baby,

by Skittlesmcafe 74 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 14 9:46 AM 2003. In Love

• Commented on by judge.
Loves Last Breath

I'm packing my bags,
Still thinking of you,

by brandell 29 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 15 11:14 PM 2003. In Love
Bronze trophy winner

• Commented on by judge.
GO NOW

Leaving...it’s never easy

by Milli 13 lines, on Jul 17 5:02 PM 2003. In Hope

• Commented on by judge.
Till Death Do Us Part.

Till death do us part, a promise we made
And it was kept, for forever we stayed

by Nikihayami 16 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 23 10:49 PM 2003. In Love, Dark
Gold trophy winner

• Commented on by judge.
High School Sweet hearts

Together They grew
into a couple

by PoetryGirl26 35 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 25 2:59 PM 2003. In Love, Angst
Silver trophy winner

• Commented on by judge.
A Forever Goodbye

When I think of you
my heart grows with pain

by KeepingTheStars 26 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 25 7:49 PM 2003. In Angst

• Commented on by judge.
I'm Leaving

There used to be a time
when all I could think about was seeing you.

by Twosoulsasone 35 lines, on Jul 26 12:30 AM 2003. In Angst

• Commented on by judge.
Brand New Day

I left you without a goodbye
Covered my face when I heard you cry

by LordOfTheFallen 32 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 26 3:28 PM 2003. In Personal, Love

• Commented on by judge.
You Seem To Know

I was in love but who cared?
Certainly not you

by emojunkie543 22 lines, on Jul 26 11:15 PM 2003. In Love

• Commented on by judge.