OK.. Ive changed my contest. I want you to write something and make me cry..
It can be tears of joy, tears from laughing too hard, or tears of pain nothing too long my attention span is short and nothing too short.. previously written poems ARE accepted good luck and you may enter up to 2 poems.. no more though
Ill try and comment on all poems.. If I can.. if not I assure you Ive read all of them
Thanks much!!
It can be tears of joy, tears from laughing too hard, or tears of pain nothing too long my attention span is short and nothing too short.. previously written poems ARE accepted good luck and you may enter up to 2 poems.. no more though
Ill try and comment on all poems.. If I can.. if not I assure you Ive read all of them
Thanks much!!
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on June 20, 2003
- Rewards: Gold: 260
- Final notes:
Malz: Well we had some problems before but thanks to a couple people I got this reopened so I can rejudge it and hopefully things will show up as planned.. Id like to thank you ALL for entering you did a wonderful job and I tried to comment on all the poems but its hard, but I can promise you I read each and every poem and this was a really hard decision.. a few poems made me cry then some just made me think about things. Wildflame03 wrote a poem that really hit home, I mean for a minute I thought it was me writing that poem I related to it and yes.. I cried :( so thats why I chose that one as first. Second place was by fadedshadow0 and third was one where I cried tears of happiness because it was so sweet and that was by kilo936. All of you did a great job and I want to thank you for entering my contest and I hope if you read this youll check out the other poems that didnt win, a lot of great poems and poets here
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I look to these poets, with cups to their namesby Just For Today 34 lines, 7 comments, on Jun 10 4:49 PM 2003. In Other• Commented on by judge. -
A silent rumble. I'm beyond this.
Or at least I should be.• Commented on by judge. -
Upon her grave my figure falls
As I hear a distant call• Commented on by judge. -
Sometimes I often sit here and think
Why our relationship is a one way streetby WildFlame03 41 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 15 11:34 PM 2003. In Love, Hope, Angst
Gold trophy winner
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I look at you,
tears in your eyes.by Twosoulsasone 25 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 16 12:04 AM 2003. In Angst• Commented on by judge. -
Through all the
Paths that lay• Commented on by judge. -
Look deep into her clouded eyes
And imagine the spark that was thereby Just For Today 20 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 16 6:55 AM 2003. In Other• Commented on by judge. -
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She was a little girl
who was already hopeless• Commented on by judge. -
Dark was the plot of the universe's scheme
Dark was it's plot to rip my heart at the seems.• Commented on by judge. -
I love you, I love you, I love you
with my last dying words• Commented on by judge. -
I will never be able to
touch your sweet face again,• Commented on by judge. -
When will you leave my mind
I have deleted you from my heartby P. W. Blackwell 8 lines, 1 comment, on Jun 18 9:37 PM 2003. In Dark• Commented on by judge. -
so keep the tears flowing,
go ahead, drain me.by CrazedBrownEyes 34 lines, 1 comment, on Jun 18 9:50 PM 2003. In Angst• Commented on by judge. -
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I don't want to let go
I don't want to say goodbye• Commented on by judge. -
I don't want to let go
I don't want to say goodbye• Commented on by judge. -
Laying next to you
On your hospital bedby xburgundycrushx 27 lines, 1 comment, on Jun 19 12:04 PM 2003. In Other• Commented on by judge. -
The cold, moist taste
Of my lips upon hisby xburgundycrushx 32 lines, 1 comment, on Jun 19 12:06 PM 2003. In Other• Commented on by judge. -
As I sit here and watch
These tears fall from your eyesby PoetGirlRavioli 30 lines, on Jun 19 12:32 PM 2003. In Personal• Commented on by judge.
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Hehe emBisacre has won second place... i thought the contest was
for the trophy-less ones? I can't enter anyhow
hehe luckily
Jen
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ah, i guess i should be disqualified too then, i won a bronze once under a different screen name. i thought we could enter if we hadn't ever come in first place. i took the liberty of deleting my entry to save you the trouble. cheers!
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Hi Malz
id just like to thank you for your comment, good luck with the judging and have fun! x
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What if i have won a bronse? But i have many poems that i should have won... my poems were better then the others *stamps his foot and goes into a tantrum*
Could i do one about this type a thing?
Even though i won one... and that one sucked that i did win.?
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I didn't know this was only for those who havent won anything, guess i shouldnt have entered then, well if that is true then just rid of it,sorry, i didnt see it in the rules. you really should put that in the rules, i dont think it is there.
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I didn't write these two poems for any contest. It's just that you said to make you cry, and these made my girlfriend cry, so I thought I'd enter them and see what happens. Nice contest by the way...I've read some of the other authors' works...they're hard to beat. Good luck with the judging...I hope to see some of your work in a contest of mine...if I ever get the chance to make one.
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Hmm a changed contest? ill give it a go :)! x
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Ohh, P.S could you please discount 'what if', if was for your previous contest
x
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