Ok a contest for prewrites (new excepted but not needed), anything and everything
i love prose
and freewrites
dirty pretty is good
and anything else you can think of
Rules:
no swearing (unless to a mininum)
No StIcKy CaPs
And no adult or abuse, if it is dont tag or i cant read it
Nothing over 100 lines please, ive only got so long on the computer at the moment
Have Fun!
Good luck and enter up too three times
Lots of points!
-Penguin-
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on November 13
- Rewards: Gold: 400, Silver: 400, Bronze: 400, Honorable mention: 5 people
- Final notes: Thank you for all those who entered and im really sorry that i havent commented on all of the pieces and im sorry that i haent had time either, i have lost internet at home so im at school. Well done to all those that have entered and the finalists i congratulate. I wish i could have more trophies, congratulations again and well done
-holly-/ - penguin-
Contest Winners
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I know it must be hard for you
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She is all that *g*l*i*t*t*e*r*s*
In her (world)by fairy princess k 93 lines, 13 comments, on Sep 22 6:52 AM. In Contest, Dark, Fantasy, Love, dirty pretty, Romance
Bronze trophy winner
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wind me up
like the beautiful china doll• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
the chain drawn tight and blood begins to drip
until once more the one it holds is dead
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Fire fills his eyes
Which lights up my pyro-heart.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
about a boy who defied gravity• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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Please tell me, I am done lying to >>myselfby A m b r e a 28 lines, 12 comments, on Sep 18 2:34 AM 2008. In dirty pretty, Pain, Love, Sad, Personal• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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by A m b r e a 6 lines, 8 comments, on Aug 28 6:41 PM. In False Love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
Gold trophy winner
Silver trophy winner
Honorable mention
Entries [184]
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Take away my words
leave me in silenceby ElectricStarrySkies 18 lines, 3 comments, on Oct 10 11:26 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
When you caught my eye, the very first time.
I couldn't get you off of my mind.by hershey101 27 lines, 15 comments, on Nov 5 7:06 PM. In Other, Personal, Thoughts, Life, Love, Romance, My own style, My life• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
All I want to be the smile you put on your face
All I want to be the healer to make your pain go awayby hershey101 27 lines, 17 comments, on Oct 16 9:59 PM. In Fantasy, Hope, Love, Life, Thoughts, Romance, My life, My own style• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
He has dark sly eyes and a smart stare
Shaved at the sides is his slicked back hair• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Carressing the clouds
Atomizing the ground.by TearsOnHerCheek 33 lines, 4 comments, on Oct 23 3:25 PM. In Life, Love, Other, Personal, Thoughts, My own style• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
he holds me in his arms
like he never wants to let go of me.by TearsOnHerCheek 24 lines, 8 comments, on Jan 26 9:02 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Brittle, in tatters,
appearance of a depleted being,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
'Plain Jane', that's what they called her
who knew what was beneath the skin?by ElectricStarrySkies 35 lines, 10 comments, on Oct 27 1:38 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
"Looking over the port, yonder -
a deep dark ocean lay beneath
the cold, silver steel hull..."by Valerien Raven 36 lines, 11 comments, on Aug 31 5:39 PM. In War, Memorial, History, World War II, World War 2, World, Bismarck, Atlantic• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
let's dream of summer• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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When I wake up in the morning all I want to see is you.by ElectricStarrySkies 13 lines, 14 comments, on Nov 19 2:45 PM 2007. In Love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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.asdfasdf.fhgjghjfgjhk.qwerqert.yuipyuioyuio.zxcvzxcv.nbm,bmn.by sighingflosser. 109 lines, 6 comments, on Nov 4 4:08 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I may not say I love you in a thousand of words,
or say anything different that you haven't heard,by Rele anmwe 42 lines, 53 comments, on Oct 5 1:52 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I undid the tangles in my mother’s yarn
in the unraveling of afternoons,by Man of Harlech 15 lines, 11 comments, on Apr 7 2:17 PM 2008. In Thoughts, Personal, Angst, Contest• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
There's a wood nymph in my bathtub
and I wonder why its there.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
standing all a-tremble
at the knife-edge of inevitability --by intoothandclaw 33 lines, 6 comments, on Nov 7 6:45 AM. In Thoughts, Spiritual, Abstract, Free verse, Personal, Metaphor• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Lead with the right, follow with the left
do this a few times without talking,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
You rekindle me when i break into pieces
'cause your love reigns over meby Gauravrulz 30 lines, 14 comments, on Oct 18 8:17 AM. In Love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
A fairy tale with a thunderous bolt
struck from the skies apart• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Professor John Cosgrove just couldn’t believe it,
after years of accepting the “light years” theory,by judmc 21 lines, 3 comments, on Oct 27 3:39 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
This is written in a guys point of view...just to let you know
by McFlurryAngel 28 lines, 6 comments, on Jun 11 1:05 PM. In Hope, Love, Life, Fall, Angels, My own style, Lost love, Thoughts• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by sighingflosser. 84 lines, 10 comments, on Nov 6 3:25 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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The muse of the poet has vanished
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Gentle whispers through the willow,
as I lie beneath her shade.by Sunshine Always 14 lines, 19 comments, on Nov 24 2:13 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Don’t raise your voice / Lest it be heard by others / And cause you inconvenience. / If something happens / In your presence / Don’t be a witness. / Asked to depose, say, / “O.K. I was there that day• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by fairy princess k 38 lines, 5 comments, on Sep 25 8:38 AM. In Contest• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Thepriest had arrived to administer extreme unction,
to the dying woman. Candles were lit whilstby judmc 40 lines, 9 comments, on Oct 15 1:37 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
O! for those autumn days of fun
When jack frost came upon the sceneby judmc 16 lines, 27 comments, on Jan 16 11:14 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
From the first time I saw them they fascinated me
Their world seemed powerful, amusing and freeby fairy princess k 47 lines, 4 comments, on Sep 26 6:53 AM. In Contest• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Regurgitated lies spoon-fed to me as if a craving baby bird. Swallowed like poison that ran through my veins in search of vulnerabilities.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Imprisoned by intoxication – a self-made holding cell of fetid walls impervious to peripheral manipulations. Encrusted with the filth of defilement, I stand bare in my crypt. Desensitized to the monstrosities of man, I am but• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Bang- it's done. I'm on my way.
Heaven's now my place to stay.by xXShadowKissedXx 49 lines, 5 comments, on Oct 7 2:58 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I am blind because I saw you,
My lips are numb because I kissed you,by Xx-Aaron-Forget-Xx 33 lines, 4 comments, on Sep 4 8:19 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Floods of unending love seen after
drenches your absence in my painby Gauravrulz 24 lines, 9 comments, on Oct 23 8:21 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I really think I love you.
by Max Alexandersson 17 lines, 5 comments, on Oct 17 5:07 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
so hallowed are these walls we run between,
screaming at the top of my lungs repeatedly.by icarus-ryan 27 lines, 3 comments, on Nov 7 1:49 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by xXShadowKissedXx 14 lines, 8 comments, on Oct 14 4:50 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Here I am,
Lonely again.by xXShadowKissedXx 19 lines, 7 comments, on Sep 21 1:59 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
And I blew cold hard lies into your frosty lips, pleading you to awake and deminish each fear that racked my freezing and delicate body.by MoonlitRoses 18 lines, 11 comments, on Oct 8 4:02 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Darkest night lays on this haunted country
This house being the only source of light• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by sighingflosser. 82 lines, 13 comments, on Oct 16 8:10 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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~♥~Enjoy~♥~by Daxteriana 23 lines, 11 comments, on Oct 31 12:05 PM. In Other, Contemporary, Contest, Dark, Fantasy, Weird, ~Dax~• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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When we are born from our mothers
We leave her nameby LesbianOfLove 88 lines, 4 comments, on Oct 8 11:01 PM. In Name, Birth, Labor, Intention, Children, Mother, Motherhood, Pregnancy, baby• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Bright red, yellow and blue
licking at the tips of the log• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
The ink of the poets pen caressed the sky, writing them a story for them to live.
A story that couldn’t just be a story of the ordinary.by fatizeh 19 lines, 12 comments, on Sep 24 1:43 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
It happens so suddenly when
your close friend/family• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
On the road to heaven I tread on my toes,
I keep walking, but I can’t see where I go.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
She's lonely,
if you cannot tell,by Bleeding Roses 34 lines, 2 comments, on Nov 3 4:33 PM. In Dark, Sad, Pain, My own style, Personal., Depressed, Sadness, Teenage thinking• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
So this is me,
Once again.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by e m i l y 29 lines, 3 comments, on Sep 26 4:33 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Heart wounded with drab desires
accelerating dreams of libertyby Why so serious 13 lines, 2 comments, on Nov 6 7:42 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
And now tomorow comes, and tomorow goes
As the distance between us grows and grows• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
When the wind is warm, and the crickets sing, I dream…
Only about how we could have been,by Sweet-Sins 19 lines, 4 comments, on Sep 16 12:36 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
While everyone is sat
Chatting with their friends,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
A circle of light
blanketed her withby Lionheart 33 lines, 16 comments, on Dec 11 6:10 PM 2007. In My own style• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Congrats to all the winners!!
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Thank you for the HM and congrats to the winners! Blessings to all, FAH
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Wow this was a huge contest and it is so beautiful that you read all those increadible poems on here. I just wanted to Thank You so much for the Honorable Mention and also making it to the finalist list.
Congradulation to all the winners in this contest.
Wishing You Many Blessings,
Kelle Marie 
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hey
Thankyou for the honor of winning the bronze trophy =) , thanks again .
fairy princes k k
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