Ok so here it is, I have been accused of having a love affair with Death. Some of my friends seem to think that I think of, and write about death a bit much. I must admit that they might be right. But I don't think I am the only One! So I am looking for others like my self. Kindred spirits so to say. So what do you need to do to win this one? I'll tell you. I want you to show me that your like myself. Enter at least two poems with death being your inspiration. Now that sounds easy right, Wrong I want different views with each poem you submit. The easiest way to explain what I mean by that is this. Below is a list of my poems dealing with death and how I have seen it through my years of writing. Read them! see what I mean about my love affair with death.
My Poems
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The Illusion http://allpoetry.com/poem/1433614
Death http://allpoetry.com/poem/2720098
Death's Companion http://allpoetry.com/poem/2884174
Eternal Love http://allpoetry.com/poem/4139195
Now the boring Part.
RULES
1. No sticky caps
2. You must put your name in your A.N.
3. You must read the above poems, comment if you like but I want you to understand what I want and the only way to truly do that is to read them and see what I mean.
4. They must have backgrounds that i can read.
5. Just have fun writing should be fun or why are we poets at all?
My Poems
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The Illusion http://allpoetry.com/poem/1433614
Death http://allpoetry.com/poem/2720098
Death's Companion http://allpoetry.com/poem/2884174
Eternal Love http://allpoetry.com/poem/4139195
Now the boring Part.
RULES
1. No sticky caps
2. You must put your name in your A.N.
3. You must read the above poems, comment if you like but I want you to understand what I want and the only way to truly do that is to read them and see what I mean.
4. They must have backgrounds that i can read.
5. Just have fun writing should be fun or why are we poets at all?
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on November 17
- Rewards: Gold: 1500, Silver: 1000, Bronze: 500, Honorable mention: 2 people
- Final notes: It was hard to judge these poems for they were all great and I believe that I have found some kindred spirits. Sorry I didn't comment on alot of them but I just didn't have the time this contest.
Till our words meet again in the darkness that spawns our thoughts and words. Laters
Darkest Thoughts Always
D.C.
Contest Winners
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but my love,
death,• Viewed by judge. [remove] -
Come then cowled end
I await you with greater glee• Viewed by judge. [remove] -
Is life strife rife where favoured few waste privileges rare, compared to most who struggle through misfortunes most unfair ?
by Jonathan ROBIN 52 lines, 585 comments, on Mar 17 5:35 AM 2005. In Sad, Society, Life, Thoughts, Pain, Dark, Depression, Sadness, Depressed, Suicide
Bronze trophy winner
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in dreams and in nightmares• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
Gold trophy winner
Silver trophy winner
Honorable mention
Entries [26]
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Lips with a hint of cherry blossom, so innocent, pursed tightly in an upward camber. I’ve never wondered why her faint smile didn’t reach a• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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i burn with passion
as the daylight fadesby spiritual wolf 30 lines, 11 comments, on Nov 6 9:32 AM• Viewed by judge. -
when where two played but one remains, cheeks grey -
what then … when there is nothing more to say ?• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Rewarding worth the spirit shines to free
THe self for new dimensions, - learns to be ...
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Deadened by my own chemical warfare, yet still I languish, unable to sedate my darkest thoughts. No drug reaches the pit of my desolation.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I wish I had missed him
He came in the night• Viewed by judge. -
I open my eyes and hear a scream
as i realize that I'm no longer in a dreamby wickedclown 26 lines, on Nov 11 9:13 PM• Viewed by judge. -
I was not alone today...• Viewed by judge.
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The dead breathe not / the sweet taste of night air. / Silence betrays their presence /• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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In the eyes of death
I am a being full of hateby Fr33BirdFaLLin 24 lines, 15 comments, on Jan 28 4:17 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I wonder why creation at all happened,
No answer comes ever since it is not known.by Freelance writer 21 lines, 9 comments, on Sep 6 3:03 AM 2006. In Spiritual• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Nothing in this world is complete dark,
No matter whatever it may be,by Freelance writer 17 lines, 10 comments, on Sep 4 7:03 AM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
My heart is speaking, currently, languages I can't understand.
It's like...trying to communicate with the dead,by Lady Juliet 28 lines, 5 comments, on May 7 6:17 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Biting away your strawberry lips,
Tearing at the flesh of lies,by Lady Juliet 48 lines, 8 comments, on Nov 5 3:35 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I have sat beside the riverby Maldronah 26 lines, 51 comments, on Sep 6 9:58 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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My heart has been worn out, a shade of gray
Too many heartaches, downfalls of life• Viewed by judge. -
Death, I know we havent met yet,
and gawd help me, I hope we never willby superbanana 35 lines, 1 comment, on Nov 6 7:05 PM• Viewed by judge. -
Darkest night lays on this haunted country
This house being the only source of light• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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So What Do You Think?
So every one do you think my friends are right do I love death a bit much? And do you like this kind of contest?
Darkest Thoughts Always
D.C. -
Ok People
You Guys have to put your name in your A.N. if you do not I Will have to DQ them. I would hate to loose some great poetry because you did not fallow the rules. So please Put your name in each poem you submit I will give you guys two days to do it then if they are not there I Will DQ them.
Darkest Thoughts Always
D.C. -
i could only put one poem on here what should i do you wanted two
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are you going to judge any time soon?
thanks
xx
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