What if:
*You are face-to-face with God, and
*You are given the chance to tell Him everything you want to tell him, but
*You have to tell all of that only in five lines.
Yes, folks! Five lines!
I want to see creativity , emotion and a lot of other things in five lines.
Have the courage. Have a heart. Enter this contest.
The Disaster Herself,
DRAY
*You are face-to-face with God, and
*You are given the chance to tell Him everything you want to tell him, but
*You have to tell all of that only in five lines.
Yes, folks! Five lines!
I want to see creativity , emotion and a lot of other things in five lines.
Have the courage. Have a heart. Enter this contest.
The Disaster Herself,
DRAY
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on November 9
- Rewards: Gold: 400, Silver: 40, Bronze: 35, Honorable mention: 5 people
- Final notes: This contest was harder to judge than I thought. Almost all of the entries were no nonsense-writes and not a few have really stunned me. The winning pieces were the ones that either touched me deeply or simply blew my mind. I thank everyone for participating in this contest. And congratulations to all the winners!
Contest Winners
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My Almighty,You are my groom and I am your bride
I burnt the lamp of waiting immersed in the oil of faith which I did carryby rinzurajan 7 lines, 1 comment, on Nov 6 8:01 AM. In SPIRITUAL, RHYMING POETRY
Bronze trophy winner
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Your world is painted and written by your own talented hands,
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Please forgive me father in heaven
For mine are the greatest of sins• Commented on by judge. [remove] - Error: Unable to find finalist item 5858731, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
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Oh our lord above, I speak not just for ones suffering,
For I am lucky, filled with happiness and grace,• Commented on by judge. [remove]
Gold trophy winner
Silver trophy winner
Honorable mention
Entries [28]
1 - 28 of 28
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Forgive me for not loving you the way you have loved me.
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Free will is not working.• Commented on by judge.
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Doubting, my namesake, forgive me.
The things in life lead me astray.by CrazySanity123 5 lines, 2 comments, on Nov 5 11:45 PM. In Contemporary, Hope, Pain, Spiritual, Inspirational• Commented on by judge. -
God, You are the one all knowing
and nothing can get past you,by Poetess12 5 lines, 3 comments, on Nov 6 12:19 AM• Commented on by judge. -
Wow! You are for real!
Hey.. it's kind of nice here..Do I get to stay?by whyspr 6 lines, 3 comments, on Nov 6 12:56 AM• Commented on by judge. -
Hey, I knew you once, when I was a child, do you remember me?
Do you remember how you stood by and watched the Devil take me from your armby Scarlet x Stone 5 lines, 8 comments, on Nov 6 2:20 AM• Commented on by judge. -
You know God, I had a really hard time believeing in you.
No affence, but can you really blame me?• Commented on by judge. -
If I was given a moment with the Lord my thoughts and prayers would be passed to the children of the world .by storiesuntold 6 lines, 3 comments, on Nov 6 5:06 AM. In Love• Commented on by judge.
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All along the eventful years, carefully built the bastion of desires,
frenzied actions, thoughtless aspirations, no time to notice the abundance,• Commented on by judge. -
Hey dude
what gives you the rightby bluecollarlove 5 lines, 1 comment, on Nov 6 12:52 PM• Commented on by judge. -
My dreams don`t fit your destiny for me.
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What could I say to you God,
That my soul cannot express?by LesbianOfLove 5 lines, 1 comment, on Nov 8 3:10 AM. In God, Religion, Death, Judgement, Spirituality, Personal• Commented on by judge. -
Forgive me for not feeling like i'm beautiful when you made your face shine upon me.
You are holy and magnificent you deserve for everyone to worship you.by XRainbowliciousX 8 lines, 2 comments, on Nov 8 2:17 PM• Commented on by judge.
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Hm... Five lines. That'll be tough for me though I have something in mind. I've never written a poem that short. NEVER. Well, except for the two line poem I had to write in class last year. However, I'll find a way to write a poem that short.
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Thank you for the silver.
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Thank you for deeming my humble write worthy of the Gold, I appreciate it greatly. Congrats to the other winners... Scott
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