rules
1. no bashing god or others
2. first come first serve
3. nothing to long
4. no part poems
i hope to comment on every poem, i have the right to dq any poem, not to comment, or even read the poem but i am not that way
1. no bashing god or others
2. first come first serve
3. nothing to long
4. no part poems
i hope to comment on every poem, i have the right to dq any poem, not to comment, or even read the poem but i am not that way
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on November 14
- Rewards: Gold: 400, Silver: 300, Bronze: 200, Honorable mention: 5 people
- Final notes: i will be posting round 2 up today so be looking for it
Contest Winners
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Mum's gone
and Susan tooby words-n-stuff 16 lines, 7 comments, on Jul 13 6:24 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
I'll fall off the cliff
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Frozen solid
Beneath the groundby Ruby Demona 13 lines, 2 comments, on Nov 2 10:40 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
She wears a moonstone upon her finger,
A single moonstone because of love,
by Green Stars 33 lines, 4 comments, on Oct 31 10:46 AM. In Life, Love, Thoughts, Pain, Longing, Depression, Sadness, Lost love• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Burn me
Hurt meby Ruby Demona 11 lines, 3 comments, on Nov 2 10:31 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
The first time i met you
was over 8 years agoby Sadistic klown girl 29 lines, 5 comments, on Oct 28 3:50 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
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in this box holds the key
to immortal capacityby Ruby Demona 16 lines, 3 comments, on Oct 31 10:09 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
by Intricate Wordsmith 29 lines, 2 comments, on Aug 24 9:51 AM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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I always waited for you
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She dances and swirls,
Across the garden once moreby TheCSIgurl 19 lines, 8 comments, on Sep 15 2:59 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
by Intricate Wordsmith 23 lines, on Sep 7 8:19 AM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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NO,NO,NO!!! I begged, I pleaded in a loud scream• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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I see her dancing across the floor,
Every detail about her has me begging for more.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
There are so many things
That I forgot to say• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
i have neveR wanted you
Eventually you stop callingby foreveryourslove 26 lines, 29 comments, on Sep 30 12:53 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
by Intricate Wordsmith 19 lines, 2 comments, on Aug 24 10:06 AM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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by Intricate Wordsmith 19 lines, on May 4 6:36 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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He lost her love to everyone.
He lost her dreams- she chose to run.
He can't compete with all the rest.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
O' Stranger
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Sometimes at night I lay awake,
Wishing I could take a break,• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
You captured my heart
I told myself I loved you• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
by Intricate Wordsmith 18 lines, 3 comments, on Aug 24 10:12 AM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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There was a time when you noticed me, when my life was just another normal life.
Now, you're all i have and you are just the shadow of who i once was.by Behind.These.Eyes 7 lines, 2 comments, on Sep 25 10:51 AM. In Sad, Longing, Depression, Sadness, Emo, Freewrite, Depressed• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
by Intricate Wordsmith 18 lines, 1 comment, on Aug 24 10:00 AM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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by Ruby Demona 17 lines, 42 comments, on Oct 3 10:01 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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Could you survive with a loving heart
And a crafty and clever mind• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
I see the light
Spreading around• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Ever read a letter in the dark?by TheCSIgurl 14 lines, 3 comments, on Oct 8 3:13 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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Stars guide me through the night.
They gleam and shine bright.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
I tried to forget
About everything we had• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
The leaves are falling to the ground
Upon the frozen floor they layby VampireKitty- 7 lines, 4 comments, on Nov 3 1:45 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
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here tonight
this charcoal sky
holds sway ....by words-n-stuff 37 lines, 10 comments, on Jul 17 5:49 PM
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Through rough times and troubles, I'll always be here.
I really love you I hope that's clear.by Behind.These.Eyes 11 lines, 5 comments, on Oct 6 10:40 AM. In Love, Thoughts, Dedication, Happiness• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
As i lay here on the floor,
my thoughts of you are evermore.by Sounds-Like-This 66 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 10 12:35 AM. In Unclassifiable• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
The things you did,
I cannot say.by Sounds-Like-This 49 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 17 8:52 AM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
& I burned within that sour memory.
I'm still twisted from that page of agony.
& Somehow I saw it comin, as I sat there in that chair,• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
by foreveryourslove 18 lines, 4 comments, on Oct 5 5:59 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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life is so beautiful
it can be hardby foreveryourslove 11 lines, 15 comments, on Oct 6 4:57 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
the way you whisper to me
you give me airby foreveryourslove 17 lines, 12 comments, on Oct 6 4:03 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Cant stop pretending
Resistance is not a choiceby foreveryourslove 7 lines, 13 comments, on Oct 2 4:01 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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When Spring`s slim sunbeams crept across the land,
fulfilling the season`s first demand.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Silver Lies...by Donna Earle
you tell me silver lies and i believe youby Green Stars 16 lines, 7 comments, on Oct 12 5:18 PM. In Thoughts• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
You Called at Midnight
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In the deep woods leopards prowl
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There's an old motel down there
And even though no one believes in haunted housesby Tinselpool 27 lines, 4 comments, on Aug 16 11:39 PM. In Haunted House, Creepy, Dark, Ficiton, Weird, Contest• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
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Everyone gives you a disgusted look
If they give you a look at allby Tinselpool 23 lines, 1 comment, on Sep 2 5:43 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Without you there is no meaning in my life
Without you the night stars don't seem to shineby Tinselpool 24 lines, 3 comments, on Sep 2 5:54 PM. In Love• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I know it's very frustrating
But that is what they are awaitingby Tinselpool 33 lines, 2 comments, on Sep 6 8:12 PM. In Song I made up, Fighting, Determination, Discipline, Life• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
With silvery white strands of hair
And a snowy white gownby Tinselpool 18 lines, 5 comments, on Sep 9 4:13 PM. In Fantasy, Winter, Beauty, Nature, Inspirational• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Autumn leaves from the stroll
Heals what grieves inside my soul• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
The streetlights were dim
A subtle glow was the only illuminationby Tinselpool 24 lines, 12 comments, on Sep 17 3:29 PM. In Love, Life, Sad, Thoughts, Forgetting, Streetlights• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I've held it in for so long, now let me give you my heart
I'm telling you now, that I hope we never partby Tinselpool 11 lines, 1 comment, on Sep 19 12:25 PM. In Love• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Sometimes I can be
The autumn leavesby Tinselpool 41 lines, 2 comments, on Sep 26 7:16 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
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third person to reserve!!! word bank please!!!by Tinselpool 24 lines, 6 comments, on Oct 11 2:01 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Do you know what?
You can have your love back.by Tinselpool 41 lines, 3 comments, on Oct 11 1:49 PM. In Love, Pain, Sad, Life, Teenage thinking, Teen issues, Longing, Lost love, Contest• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I want to wrap myself in your arms
Feel your breath on my cheek• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
breeze whispering• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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by Tinselpool 49 lines, 4 comments, on Oct 21 6:05 AM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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And it's got me in a craze
And I don't know how to phaseby Tinselpool 31 lines, 7 comments, on Oct 29 5:33 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Why do they flirt
They're already taken• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
This is dedicated to my friend- or at least someone I thought was my friend. But sometimes she avoids my gaze, maybe I'm just too "uncool".by Tinselpool 34 lines, 1 comment, on Nov 3 2:59 PM. In Friendship, Life, Sad, Thoughts, Personal, Other• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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sitting alone in my bedroom singing
turned off my phone so i don't hear it ringingby Tinselpool 48 lines, 11 comments, on Nov 3 5:20 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Do you see me looking at you?
Watching every move you make?by Tinselpool 45 lines, 8 comments, on Nov 4 4:47 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I strode through the autumn evening
Past shadows cast by the treesby Tinselpool 25 lines, 3 comments, on Nov 5 8:02 AM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
a wolf howls somewhere in the distance
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he's on my mind
he won't go away• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
My little child is
growing in my tummy.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
How many have come & gone;
All in a grand procession of failures.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Sweet Temptress,
Hearken unto my plea.by JadedSparrow 14 lines, 16 comments, on Sep 13 12:58 AM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Happiness...
I have finally found you.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Each moment I spend without you is as a lifetime of agony.
In my solitude, I ache for your embrace.by JadedSparrow 15 lines, 3 comments, on Oct 22 11:14 AM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Waves crash against the shore,
The eerie peace of twilight hangs over the world,by JadedSparrow 47 lines, 6 comments, on Oct 6 5:23 AM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Judgment day is the day when the cards are laid down to the table
i have a flush you have a straitby Massacringchainsaw 12 lines, 1 comment, on Oct 2 11:06 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
The stillness of the night
is brokenby God of Thunder 14 lines, 2 comments, on Aug 11 6:54 PM. In Pain, Personal, Life
Honorable mention
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I am that of which started the great Trojan war
I have separated individualsby Massacringchainsaw 11 lines, 4 comments, on Oct 2 11:35 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I am from across time and that of space
i am from a world undefinedby Massacringchainsaw 7 lines, 1 comment, on Oct 3 12:07 AM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
This key fits to only one slot out of many
This key has its own purposeby Massacringchainsaw 10 lines, 1 comment, on Oct 4 5:38 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I have one title but I have been given many
I have been said to be said to be schizophrenicby Massacringchainsaw 9 lines, 2 comments, on Oct 8 9:20 AM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Bodies move in time
To beautiful melodies• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
The wonder of you
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Beautiful brown eyes that
Reveal to me the• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I never had the chance to know you
as I would have liked• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
never will you run into my arms
when I come home from workby God of Thunder 37 lines, 7 comments, on Dec 30 3:38 PM 2006. In sad• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
A lettter home sent from over-seas
A relay of hope to the ones that he loves• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Love, a simple word
That we, beings, show through motionby albinoblacksheep720 24 lines, 5 comments, on Dec 22 10:20 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
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by kiwibird 35 lines, 2 comments, on Nov 7 2:39 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Love is a nice feeling you just can not ignore,
when your spine starts to tingle like never before.by judmc 17 lines, 13 comments, on May 29 10:09 AM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
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Ehat do you mean by "part poems" - extracts from longer works, or writings that are bartly in prose and partly in verse?
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You are really doing some reading. Is your head hurting?
I am going to post some prewrites in your contest.
GrandPa Joe
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