1. no bashing god or others
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i will try and comment on all poems
what i am looking for are poems that have won gold or have won nothing or poems you have written today
November 10th, 2009
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i will try and comment on all poems
what i am looking for are poems that have won gold or have won nothing or poems you have written today
November 10th, 2009
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on November 14
- Rewards: Gold: 400, Silver: 300, Bronze: 20, Honorable mention: 5 people
- Final notes: thank you all for sharing round to will be up
Contest Winners
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I can’t see outside my window
For the numbing cold reflects no shadow• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
This world is futile and my thoughts are but falling leaves
Changing pink on good days and blue when I grieve• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
i remember,
three years ago,• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
okayy, and before i say it, my grandma left me a note when i was little, and she attached 10 dollars to it and it said go buy some chocolat• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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Her eyes, my friend, were as deep as lake
But now everything to me seems fake• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Dedicated to my grandmother on my mother's side.by songstress80 17 lines, 16 comments, on Nov 9 7:28 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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I want to be able to get through a day
a whole dayby songstress80 34 lines, 8 comments, on Nov 9 12:51 AM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
look into my eyes
be one within meby songstress80 10 lines, 8 comments, on Nov 4 1:41 AM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
before you go
you must knowby songstress80 21 lines, 14 comments, on Aug 15 3:39 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
you're a monster, you're a whore
you keep crawling to men for moreby songstress80 26 lines, 12 comments, on Dec 28 4:09 AM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
we're waiting, nothings changing
my heart is brokenby savemysoul 10 lines, 3 comments, on Oct 9 3:12 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
everyday i have an urge,
it can consume mind to the point where i'm a blank canvas,by savemysoul 25 lines, 4 comments, on Oct 27 7:45 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
you give the illusion that you care,
i'm always hopeful that when i wake up you'll be there.by savemysoul 16 lines, 14 comments, on Nov 2 1:30 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
Gold trophy winner
Silver trophy winner
Bronze trophy winner
Honorable mention
Entries [37]
1 - 37 of 37
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maybe i don't know
what i'm made up of,by youhadme-athello. 60 lines, 10 comments, on Oct 19 4:47 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
the wind is blowing westward tonight and i hope that maybe i'll get a piece of you because a piece is all i really need to be happy. my higby youhadme-athello. 19 lines, 14 comments, on Oct 11 6:16 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Spring is in the air And my heart begins to stir• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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How do I love my brother? / Sometimes I think I can’t. / He does things I don’t like, / To me he likes to rant. / How do I love my brother? / When he forgets that I am there. / He only comes to see me, / Whby goalsv 19 lines, 7 comments, on Jun 22 8:24 AM 2007. In Personal, Love, Life, Thoughts, Spiritual, Friendship, Inspirational• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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A lump of clay upon the wheel,
Waiting for the potter’s hand,by goalsv 14 lines, 19 comments, on Nov 4 6:47 AM 2008. In Personal, Thoughts, Spiritual, Inspirational• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I love being a woman
of superior character and styleby jacbgd2 42 lines, 8 comments, on Dec 15 6:06 PM 2007. In Contest, My own style, Lost in thought, Self• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Sympathy and tenderness are always in
Your embraceby songstress80 23 lines, 6 comments, on Nov 8 12:25 AM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Again has come this special day...
When our Freedom was born;• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Ten times we bet our dimes and
ten times we lost them.by superl337sauce 11 lines, 1 comment, on Oct 10 5:55 AM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
When you were not far away
I liked to see you everyday;• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
why do I feel like such a failure?
I can't do anything rightby songstress80 22 lines, 12 comments, on Nov 8 4:11 AM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
another poem dedicated to my grandmother, my Nanaby songstress80 22 lines, 13 comments, on Oct 25 2:22 AM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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She’s robbed my soul…
All my desires,by Parth Sawhney 44 lines, 37 comments, on Mar 6 3:11 AM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Why to curse those windows now…
That are now speechless?• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
The blow of words..
Gives wounds which can't be healedby Parth Sawhney 15 lines, 6 comments, on Jun 30 1:22 AM 2005. In Sad• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
i'm living in a world of fakers,
i'm living in a world of liars,by savemysoul 15 lines, 5 comments, on Oct 26 7:00 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I have entered my three poems.
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I did.
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darn....none for me? lol. good luck to all! let me know when you have another contest up that I may enter? please :0)
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would you put some poems in here i would love you to
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my name is not on the list. i would be glad to enter some! thanks!
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thank you so much for the honorable mention..congratulations to all the winners!
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Thank you for HM. Congrats to all.
Steve
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