This for poems that are filled with tons and tons of emotion. I wanna hear about your problems, ones that you have overcome, wish to do, or in the process of. I'm going through some pretty hard times right now, so I'd like to hear how others are coping. Give me a bit of idea (:
Rules:
Nothing too specific, just try to keep your thoughts under 60 lines unless they are really short lines. No big paragraphs please!
FOR THE PEOPLE WHO HAVE BEEN BREAKING THIS RULE ^^^ i did not even bother to read your poems! sorry ! waste of an entry.
Tips:
If it is really sad, and I cry, expect to be moved to the top of the list. By the way, it's not hard to make me do so (:
I also love rhyming, so try your best. It's not required, but will help a lot.
Picture poems are also acceptable.
Try to limit the profanity to a little please. It gets annoying seeing dancing bunnies all over the screen.
Please leave your name also, i'd like to read more of everyone's work.
Goodluck!
~~ allie.
Rules:
Nothing too specific, just try to keep your thoughts under 60 lines unless they are really short lines. No big paragraphs please!
FOR THE PEOPLE WHO HAVE BEEN BREAKING THIS RULE ^^^ i did not even bother to read your poems! sorry ! waste of an entry.
Tips:
If it is really sad, and I cry, expect to be moved to the top of the list. By the way, it's not hard to make me do so (:
I also love rhyming, so try your best. It's not required, but will help a lot.
Picture poems are also acceptable.
Try to limit the profanity to a little please. It gets annoying seeing dancing bunnies all over the screen.
Please leave your name also, i'd like to read more of everyone's work.
Goodluck!
~~ allie.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on November 27
- Rewards: Gold: 400, Silver: 125, Bronze: 100
- Final notes: Wow, let me say, this was a really tough judging! Some poems brought me smiles, others tears. I loved them all, and i'm sorry to whom did not place! I will be doing more contests in the near future, and i hope you all to enter again! Congrats to the winners ! (:
~~allie.
Contest Winners
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tear down the walls of insecurity
stand up and testifyby heyelizabeth 73 lines, 2 comments, on Aug 25 1:44 AM. In Contemporary, Personal, Thoughts, Inspirational, Humanity
Gold trophy winner
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A late night drive, swerving to the side
a swig here and there, submitting to a dareby irishbtch 22 lines, 2 comments, on Feb 2 12:24 AM. In death, drinking and driving, sad
Silver trophy winner
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This moment in time I feel so alone
though so many people are around meby starving4perfection 26 lines, 8 comments, on Sep 9 8:02 PM. In Personal, Anorexia, Eating Disorder, Sadness, Depression• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Thank you for taking away
everything that ever meant to meby Perennial Plague 65 lines, 13 comments, on Oct 22 11:11 PM. In Sad, Pain, Lessons learned the hard way• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Sometimes at night I lay awake,
Wishing I could take a break,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
We were very sad
when our mom diedby lovlilmystery 36 lines, 4 comments, on Nov 3 6:57 PM. In Contest, Personal, Family, My life, My own style• Commented on by judge. [remove]
Bronze trophy winner
Entries [48]
1 - 48 of 48
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You can't take my voice from me
You tried to take my dignityby heyelizabeth 33 lines, 2 comments, on Aug 25 2:22 AM. In Personal, Thoughts, Inspirational, Hope, Angst• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
of progress in the 21st century—
it will be more like 20,000 years of progress.by k e ll e n 89 lines, 18 comments, on Jul 13 11:41 AM. In Death, Technology, Lost love, Sad, Humanity, Pain, Personal, Sadness, Family
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Insomnia, nausea, and fierce body aches,
Sweating then chilling causes the tremors, the shakes.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
On the way to some place
watching the world pass me byby ThePerfectFlaw 40 lines, 1 comment, on Nov 1 3:12 AM. In Lost love, Longing, Death, Loss, Dedication, Goodbyes• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
While I strolled around in a dejected view,
in the middle of desolate, countryside wood;• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
A deserted place
Divided by a fence,by Freelance writer 31 lines, 16 comments, on Jul 1 5:30 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
If forgetfullness is what you seek,
Then I will sing you softly off to sleep,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
i've been acting so pathetic
tangled inside a memory, not wanting to escapeby carospellman 25 lines, 3 comments, on Nov 4 2:25 PM. In Personal• Commented on by judge. -
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by HaleighGrace 53 lines, 32 comments, on Oct 27 9:39 PM 2006. In Personal• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Last night was the worst night of my life.
I hardly slept as visions of you continuously crept into my mind.by Jeremy0826 35 lines, 60 comments, on Dec 18 8:54 AM 2007. In Dark, Life, Personal, Sad, Thoughts, Depression, Sadness, Pain• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
When overcast depression surrounds my mind,
I find no pleasure at all anywhere,by Freelance writer 32 lines, 30 comments, on Feb 4 3:18 AM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
A prayer and pills;
another start to the day.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
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They told me not to play with knives
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alone and frightened
quivering in the coldby NoseRingGirl 20 lines, 9 comments, on Apr 8 3:06 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I was addicted to the dream demons,
taking solace in the ash-covered wastelandby NoseRingGirl 11 lines, 6 comments, on Jul 21 11:16 AM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Conversations unclear
Muddled thoughts and fears• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
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From vain complain move on again see sea's brim full of fish, go take your pick as lips you lick so wickedly delish.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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It took a while to awake,
from that self-induced state,by Roland Welles 101 lines, 7 comments, on Oct 19 5:08 AM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
There's an angel resting by her bed,
Watching, waiting.by ShotInTheDark 36 lines, 1 comment, on Nov 24 9:54 AM• Commented on by judge. -
I march on looking for storms
I feel the ground waiting for a quake• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
The only words that were spoken,
Were the ones that would win.by Joshua DePesa 28 lines, 4 comments, on Nov 26 5:05 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
it started with a sip
burning, scarring, bubbling on the way downby ruthie fallen angel 32 lines, 2 comments, on Nov 10 5:46 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Please my dear just let me have one more?
Its just one little sipby ruthie fallen angel 79 lines, 3 comments, on Nov 19 10:29 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
i just don't want to believe it
your mistakes always cause you to cry• Viewed by judge.
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well its unfortunate that i didnt win but i guess you cant win them all.
good contest
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