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Rhyme Me A River Of Tears


This is where you come in, I want to wallow in something deep and beautiful.

MUST RHYME
MUST BE EMOTIVE
MUST COMMENT ON ONE OF MY POEMS EITHER FROZEN/ABANDONED
http://allpoetry.com/poem/5849333
http://allpoetry.com/poem/5847181
SPACE OUT YOUR USER NAME IN AUTHOR NOTES LIKE THIS: B E A C H B U M 1

I'm keeping entries limited to 20 so I can give lengthy feedback to all. In return I ask you comment on one of my poems either Abandoned or Frozen.

I don't usually ask this but I would very much like your opinions on my style, and you may seek some inspiration for your own.

I judge fairly and honestly, now....make me feel

points may go up

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on November 10
  • Rewards: Gold: 1000, Silver: 173, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 5 people
  • Final notes:
    Thank-you all for entering, I bumped up prizes so you could all receive a trophy I truly loved the entries. Please look out for my future comps ...keep writing all.. congrats to the gold

Contest Winners

  1. Nameless
    The city lights call her name with the vain sounds of bliss,
    His busy flights on corporate planes with golden chains around his wrists.
    by Forgotten truth 46 lines, 4 comments, on Nov 6 10:08 PM
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  2. Taking Life By The Throat(silver)
    by AliceinPoetryLand 36 lines, 5 comments, on Nov 4 5:44 AM. In Contest, Sad, Hope, Rhyme
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  3. Forgiven
    Flipping through pages of petals long lost,
    Under mountains of kisses and hugs long forgot,
    by truelover 17 lines, 2 comments, on Nov 5 7:27 PM. In Life, Love, Pain, Personal, Sad, Thoughts, Sadness, Lost love, My life
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  4. What is a tear?
    What is a tear but an unspoken word
    when words will not comply,
    by SilverQ 14 lines, 4 comments, on Nov 5 8:12 PM. In Sad, Thoughts
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  5. Things They Say
    by UrbaN PlaguE 40 lines, 4 comments, on Nov 6 10:45 PM
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  6. To me
    He was my opiate
    Mixed up dream
    by unveiled 30 lines, 3 comments, on Nov 3 10:21 PM. In Love, Life, Thoughts, Pain, Personal, Sad
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  7. Poetic Tragedy
    by xpowder 14 lines, 4 comments, on Nov 6 8:13 AM. In thoughts
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  8. A Tree Of Eternal Love!
    Long ago o'er a century past
    there stood a Mighty Oak tree
    by lonestar 152 lines, 1 comment, on Nov 4 5:59 PM. In Life, Pain, Death, Sadness, Lost love, Hate
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  9. Sleep
    He's gone
    Not to be found
    by Nezzera 35 lines, 1 comment, on Nov 3 9:49 PM
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]

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  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    November 11
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    Thank you so much for the silver. Congratulations to the other winners and thank you for hosting.
    Gaylene