**Points will go up with the number of entries.**
Today the love of my life would have been 18 but his life was taken in a car crash.
Two years before that I was hit by a truck on 6-6-6 (June 6 2006).
Then I flipped three and a half times in an SUV...
I can go on. My life has not been unblemished.
I want you all to just write either about your life trauma and make me really feel how you feel or write about anything at all.
Rules: 1. No WrItInG lIkE tHiS
2. No cursing (it doesnt make the poem any better)
3. HAVE FUN!!!!
ENTER AS MANY AS YOU WANT- ABOUT ANYTHING- PW's ALLOWED.
Good luck!
Today the love of my life would have been 18 but his life was taken in a car crash.
Two years before that I was hit by a truck on 6-6-6 (June 6 2006).
Then I flipped three and a half times in an SUV...
I can go on. My life has not been unblemished.
I want you all to just write either about your life trauma and make me really feel how you feel or write about anything at all.
Rules: 1. No WrItInG lIkE tHiS
2. No cursing (it doesnt make the poem any better)
3. HAVE FUN!!!!
ENTER AS MANY AS YOU WANT- ABOUT ANYTHING- PW's ALLOWED.
Good luck!
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on November 10
- Rewards: Gold: 400, Silver: 100, Bronze: 100
- Final notes: I am not going to lie and say that all were good but some that even didn't get to the finalists list were great. I wish I could give you all trophies but I dont have the points for that. Gold winner don't forget to PIF and send me the link.
Contest Winners
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My Damn Rose / I deafen me against your call / I close my mind to thoughts of you / I dam your all but still your spell / will manage toby billpoet 27 lines, 211 comments, on Jun 10 2:14 PM 2007. In I have no hope to cast aside• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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The House on Dark Street
Every window had a curtainby Green Stars 24 lines, 16 comments, on Oct 8 7:11 PM. In Fantasy• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
In an old apartment building up on Elm Street,
Where the north wind cried and moaned through ancient halls,
by Green Stars 22 lines, 5 comments, on Oct 25 4:55 PM. In Dark, Life, Thoughts, My own style, Friendship, Longing, My life, Lost in thought• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
by Be Cold 41 lines, 4 comments, on Nov 3 9:11 PM. In Adult Love• Commented on by judge. [remove]
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Hello Marijuana
My forever best amiga• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Rainbow dies
Black is the color everyone wears.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
A poet in its feeble breath
Feels not his heartbeat but grips his penby Perennial Plague 12 lines, 1 comment, on Sep 15 3:13 AM 2006. In Other• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] - Error: Unable to find finalist item 5704633, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
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Voices not my own pull at me
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These clouds are like my cloudy eyes
Both hide their suns
Yet in the sky I sense one will returnby billpoet 44 lines, 70 comments, on May 15 9:45 AM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
With Candlelight / Burn little flame / brighter slowly / you have a whole candle to explore / lots of time and / thousands of dances to fliby billpoet 17 lines, 106 comments, on Jun 10 2:10 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Hello, my name is Alessandra,
I was a fourteen year old girl when my mother passed away,by Only-Speak-YourMind 73 lines, on Oct 27 5:37 PM. In Pain, Drug Abuse, Sad, Dark, Thoughts, Contest, Hate, Anger, Teenage thinking, Other• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
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Harkin, loves end
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So tender your arms
As they enfold this precious beingby Dark-Ecanus27 12 lines, 6 comments, on Nov 3 6:06 PM. In Love, Life, Contest, Happiness, Dedication, Family, Children• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
of progress in the 21st century—
it will be more like 20,000 years of progress.by k e ll e n 89 lines, 17 comments, on Jul 13 11:41 AM. In Death, Technology, Lost love, Sad, Humanity, Pain, Personal, Sadness, Family
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Love and passion, a true Dark infatuation
by DamageDone 11 lines, 3 comments, on Nov 4 6:56 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
by Lady Nightshade 50 lines, on Sep 10 4:30 PM. In Lyrics, Love, Life, Personal, Society, Contemporary, Pain, Thoughts• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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You were always mulling around the house• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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in the wrong place
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In the middle of my path
I wonder no light is there,by Freelance writer 23 lines, 15 comments, on Feb 25 5:57 AM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
A life quite tremendous is a life indeed
It will be surely wondrous if the end is reachedby Perennial Plague 11 lines, on Sep 23 9:27 PM. In Life• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I still love to bathe in rain
Chocolates still work to ease my pain• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Her middle name is Cherie
She's full of concealed insecurity• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Isn't it funny
When a tough assassin like me• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Who really gives me life?
Who really is my GOD?• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
In your tender sleep, thy child cries
Bullied and tortured by ruthless foesaby Perennial Plague 15 lines, 1 comment, on Feb 12 8:03 PM 2006. In Sad• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
She would often cry her tears
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I don’t want to live without you.
I don’t want to breathe without you• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
some call it a habit, i call it my addiction.
it makes me feel alive, the scissors forcing friction.by savemysoul 10 lines, 13 comments, on Oct 21 4:51 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
i try to figure what your about,
now that i know you, i don't think i could go on without.by savemysoul 42 lines, 19 comments, on Oct 11 4:26 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
okayy, and before i say it, my grandma left me a note when i was little, and she attached 10 dollars to it and it said go buy some chocolatby savemysoul 47 lines, 11 comments, on Nov 4 6:07 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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The kiss of betrayal I gave my lord
Dismantled the Grand Canyon of my soul.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Now you have to go and find the light of your own
While I, the mother you’d never have, will forever mourn.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Maybe there's just no come home,
Only a future all alone,by TheCSIgurl 44 lines, 6 comments, on Oct 9 4:15 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Thank you for deeming my humble entry worthy of the Bronze against so many worthy entries, I appreciate it. Congrats to the other winners... Scott
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