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Internal Rhyme and quote prompt

I'm in the mood for some good internal rhyme.



the prompt is this quote

"I listen to the knock from my soul.
It pushes me to put my feelings in poems." - Meles Niguse



No profanity or erotica.
Keep it between 15 to 30 lines

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on November 11
  • Rewards: Gold: 600, Silver: 300, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 1 people
  • Final notes:
    I don't expect anymore entries so I'm judging now.

    I appreciate the 4 who did pen for this contest. I enjoyed each poem.

    I was pleased with the variety of styles.

    Thanks so much for entering and I wish the best to each one of you.

Contest Winners

  1. Serenity
    As time and tranquility coexist
    manifestations traverse abyss
    by Howard Manser 25 lines, 2 comments, on Nov 8 5:54 PM. In Thoughts
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  2. Knocking!
    Triquatrain -------------------------------------------
    by Amera 26 lines, 91 comments, on Nov 3 3:36 PM. In Personal, Weird
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  3. Amusing?
    Three entries for this contest I wrote and had to scrap.
    The best that I could muster was just a load of crap
    by jimmy20johns 12 lines, 5 comments, on Nov 4 4:32 AM
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  4. Soul Knock.(Essence)
    by Billbard 3 lines, 1 comment, on Nov 3 6:07 PM. In Personal
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]

Entries [4]

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  • jimmy20johns gold member
    November 11
    Edit | Reply
    Hi. Thanks for the bronze award. But I thought by "internal rhyme" you meant the kind of mid-line 'mirror rhyme' I used in my piece. Apparently I was wrong (as noone else employed it) and I'm wondering what you actualy did mean. I like to learn. Cheers, jimmy