Ok this is my way to reconnect with AP after having a bit of leave there for a while.
what I'm after is a poem that uses metaphors effectively to create a dark outlook.
I'm allowing prewrites simply because I understand how hard it can be to think of things on the spot but I don't want anything entered. If i find things that have nothing to do with the TWO things i have asked i will remove you. I also remove poems from contests if i feel they have not put in their best work.. eg. spelling mistakes, bad punctuation etc.
I look forward to your entries and giving you a proper review
i advise if you don't like constructive critism don't enter my contest
Cheers,
Em
"I sort of enjoy the fact that I'm misunderstood most of the time. That's fine."
- Billie Joe Armstrong
what I'm after is a poem that uses metaphors effectively to create a dark outlook.
I'm allowing prewrites simply because I understand how hard it can be to think of things on the spot but I don't want anything entered. If i find things that have nothing to do with the TWO things i have asked i will remove you. I also remove poems from contests if i feel they have not put in their best work.. eg. spelling mistakes, bad punctuation etc.
I look forward to your entries and giving you a proper review
i advise if you don't like constructive critism don't enter my contest Cheers,
Em
"I sort of enjoy the fact that I'm misunderstood most of the time. That's fine."
- Billie Joe Armstrong
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on November 11
- Rewards: Gold: 400, Silver: 200, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 3 people
- Final notes: thanks for all your wonderful entries! i apologize for the time it took me to judge.
however good luck with all future writing and ill look forward to having entries from all of you in other contests i host.
Em
Contest Winners
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It hangs on hip
dragging heels• Commented on by judge. [remove]
Gold trophy winner
Silver trophy winner
Bronze trophy winner
Honorable mention
Entries [16]
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Slipping so far into the darkness last night I think I'm gone
Nope, I'm still breathingby Blue-Rose Beauty 35 lines, 33 comments, on Jun 27 8:04 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
The day I agree to bathe and succumbed
to your intoxicating aroma• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Now I can see that it’s not the pain I was shattering...• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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With her stiletto nails
She scrapes dried blood from woundsby submarine93 17 lines, 7 comments, on Jul 4 4:09 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
it got 11 lines and im afraid yu r gonna dq it!by Why so serious 10 lines, 2 comments, on Oct 19 7:23 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Dance, little spirit
On a line of a silken webby Tarashannon 18 lines, 2 comments, on Nov 2 8:37 AM• Commented on by judge. -
laying on my bed
i feel the descomposure,by spiritual wolf 27 lines, 1 comment, on Nov 2 9:02 AM• Commented on by judge. -
I'm running deep into darkness
not knowing where i'm at. Hearingby Daughter Of Night 24 lines, 2 comments, on May 9 3:27 PM. In Sad• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Dance little soul against that azure sky,
sing your woeful song• Commented on by judge.
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Hey!
Nice quote
"It's not how you pick your nose, it's where you put the booger that counts" - Tre Cool
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Thank you very much for the bronze award!
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Thank you so much for the Silver! Had fun writing a poem for this contest. LL
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Thanks so much for the HM. Congrats to everyone else as well.
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Thanks so much for the gold! And congrats to the other winners!
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