The holidays are approaching and my family is very close knit but my brother is holding a grudge over something so small and wont be around.. this will be the first year in the 20 years I've been alive write me a poem about it, how to deal with it, how to make the holidays feel as wonderful as they should be. Give me something beautiful!
Rules
1. DoNt TyPe LiKe ThIs
2. No erotica it really doesn't fit
3. I'm not gonna say not swear because i feel like screaming ever curse word but use just were it fits and not every other word
4. Most importantly have fun!!
Rules
1. DoNt TyPe LiKe ThIs
2. No erotica it really doesn't fit
3. I'm not gonna say not swear because i feel like screaming ever curse word but use just were it fits and not every other word
4. Most importantly have fun!!
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on November 6
- Rewards: Gold: 400, Silver: 150, Bronze: 100
- Final notes: Thank you for all of your writes alot of poems really weren't what i wanted i wanted something sad or some kind of advice but thank you all for writing great job!!! Keep on writing!
Contest Winners
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All the while wishing you were here
So I am wrapping each little gift• Commented on by judge. [remove] -
Not matter what time of year
wipe away that painful tear• Commented on by judge. [remove] -
As much as you will miss him there
his loss will be even more• Commented on by judge. [remove]
Gold trophy winner
Silver trophy winner
Bronze trophy winner
Entries [8]
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My Dad has passed, Dave has too my big Brother,
there'll be no more Christmases with either.by everyone1 15 lines, 2 comments, on Nov 1 10:15 AM• Commented on by judge. -
The cold does not bite,
It only gnaws• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Stille Nacht
Copyright © 2009 By Curtis Meyerby K-Dense 87 lines, on Oct 11 2:44 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
fireplace crackles warmth
smiling faces of loved ones• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
The heavy Christmas snow turned everything white.
by BlaCkEyedSuzie 26 lines, 1 comment, on Nov 4 6:53 PM• Commented on by judge.
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Comments
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I am so sorry to hear your brother won't be around for the holidays...Life is just far too short I will pray for you...Hazel
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This has got to be so heart breaking for you dear. I just couldn't imagine not having my kids here for the holidays.
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oops!
oops i'm sorry i don't think i read the prompt well enough at all before i submitted "Vermont." sorry about that!
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