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the embodiment of erotica -->take me now (final round)

image is Hajime Sorayama-Lithograph #40

Judging will take place in two weeks time. (November 27th, thank you).

Prompt is title or picture, but with a twist.

I want you to write it like you normally would, then in the author's note, I want you to flip it over, literally make your end your new beginning, and take it from there. Does that make sense? It doesn't have to be a Palindrome, just use the end you've just finished, and take it from there, either in your author's note, or to the very bottom of the original. .

 

I want the same amount of emotion invoked, (not necessarily the same emotion itself), in the second as in the first.

 

If this step seems too much just stick to writing for the original prompt.

 

I realize word restrictions confine-so if you cant stick with it, that's okay too. The trick is to turn in something wonderful and original and all you..

 

 

Sexual orientation is not important, body parts aren't either (well...they are, but not as much).

 

Go deeper into the picture than that, there's a reason I've changed it five times to bring you something inspiring.

 

50 to 100 words, no more.

 

I want to feel you.

 

Im not talking about real life, but in your write, you knew that, huh? lol.

 

Have fun and you have one week to reserve,

three weeks to complete.

best wishes, and of course, ~Thank You~

 

Love,

jin

Closed for judging

  • Closed for judging on November 16
  • Rewards: Gold: 2501, Silver: 1502, Bronze: 503
  • This is not an anonymous contest - the editors will be able to see your name.

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  • Cannonsfire
    October 30
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  • Solo Wisp gold member
    October 30
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    I don't understand what you want doll. Flip the wording around like mirror the words, but it must be the same emotion?

    'I am
    Sam'

    'Sam
    am I' type of structure?


    • JinSays gold member
      October 30
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      write the poem from your one original perspective-that'll be the entry itself, then take the end and make it the beginning. Think of it as a slow rewind of the actions and imagery played out above. Trust me, once you do it, you'll know what I mean, and it's helped my writing tremendously. (thanks Ben}

      • Solo Wisp gold member
        October 30
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        So, a rewind ... I now have people walking backwards and well .. other thoughts going through my head backwards. It doesn't make much sense to be redundant in what was created to me, but I'll give it a go. And when I give it a go, the redundancy will smack me in the forehead until thoughts of people walk forward as they rewind by pressing rewind on their camcorder that shows inverted images pausing to go back in time, forward frame-by-frame.

        • JinSays gold member
          October 30
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          you dont have to be redundant, I dont think. Just rewind-use different words if you want, but try it from another view, or be a wuss and just write from the picture...lol.


          • Solo Wisp gold member
            October 30
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            hmmmm ... different view. I was knee high, now my bust high ...


            • JinSays gold member
              October 30
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              you say that like it's a bad thing Steve
              now get busy

              • Solo Wisp gold member
                October 30
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                Busy doing what? Damn my mind wanders over to wonder, a total eclipse of forgetfulness only to be reminded by the reality of a touch .. tantalizing bliss.


                • JinSays gold member
                  October 30
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                  I will leave those details up to you darling.
                  and yes, something like that


  • Poetic-Theorem gold member
    October 30
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    Flipping fun if I don't go flipping nuts


  • whyspr gold member
    October 31
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    this sounds like a really hard contest jin, but oh so very interesting.. cant wait to see how it turns out


  • Nevel
    October 31
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    WW....good luck with your contest


  • tomisb
    October 31
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    I am so lost that I just got my head up...
    god help me.
    Tom B.


    • JinSays gold member
      October 31
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      take a deep breath my dear
      it's gonna be jes fine


    • JinSays gold member
      October 31
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      god said so, I heard him

      • tomisb
        October 31
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        I am going to do a palindrome then I will be safe in every case
        or maybe I won't
        Oh, I am so confused. I will have to go and consult the stars and maybe a starfish or two. Oh my, oh my I am sure that someone will be brilliant. But, I doubt it will be I.

        • JinSays gold member
          October 31
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          I would never have thought we'd all be ready for something that difficult. I've attempted one. once. never again, my head hurt for days. it's actually not as hard as I've made it sound. Just write your poem like you normally would-then in your author's note, make your beginning out of your ending. You do NOT have to use the same words, at all. Just use a different persepctive, whether time, space, seasons-location...those kinds of things. if its too much, just write for the prompt itself and dont even worry about it, darling.
          alright?

          • tomisb
            October 31
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            But then, ... I wouldn't be able to tease you. I can't reach out and tickle you so got to go with the next best thing. You know I do my level best to give you my best. anything else would be an insult. But, I couldn't resist. ...
            Love,
            Tom B.


  • whitecoffee
    November 2
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    Any chance you could provide a link to the one you did?? pwetty pwease.....

    • JinSays gold member
      November 2
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      if I could remember the name of it...lol, and I wouldnt have the first draft copy anyway.
      want me to do one for you?
      you have plenty of time, all I want this week is a reserve-
      give me a few hours, alright?

      I had a feeling I would get called to task this time 'round
      shoulda been ready for it.

      • whitecoffee
        November 2
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        awww jin, dont worry...I think I'm getting the idea from your explanations here, and it sounds really cool. I just want to do it it right...


  • Kathraina silver member
    November 19
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    When will you be judging this hun? I've yet to finish my entry =\


    • JinSays gold member
      November 20
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      you have until the 27th darling. I will not look at them until then.
      love,
      jin

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