I've always been sort of obsessed with people's eyes... the stories you can see behind them, the way they reflect so blatantly a person's feelings and memories and basic being. So I'm putting a bunch of pictures on of people's eyes... be inspired. You can write focused on the eyes, or simply by the story you see in them. Make it beautiful, make it emotional, make it intense. Put your prompt in your author's notes. I only want one piece per prompt, so once a prompt is picked and used I will remove it. Except for the first one, which is my favorite... and I'd love to see what anyone used it for. It's called Near To Her Eyes. You may enter one poem from each of the following categories:
Pictures of Women:
http://gallery.photo.net/photo/9786319-md.jpg
http://dfotografia.deviantart.com/art/Eyes-67843852
http://hannahhavoc.deviantart.com/art/green-eyes-129876432
http://fairystories.deviantart.com/art/The-sun-is-still-shining-100969708
http://eyeseewell.deviantart.com/art/Egypt-eyes-124654320
http://sabocchia.deviantart.com/art/Behind-Blue-Eyes-134917561
http://emmajeanjumpingbean.deviantart.com/art/Age-Old-Life-109678202
http://shanaji.deviantart.com/art/What-big-eyes-you-have-121036115
http://eidomen.deviantart.com/art/My-eyes-have-seen-a-lot-139650844
http://terryfrank.net/wp-content/uploads/2006/12/45884586000D2B6E00004808220076230205020E9D00979D9D0A9B0B020E0A0A04.jpeg
Pictures of Men:
http://thumbs.dreamstime.com/thumb_108/1167215483M5Dry4.jpg
http://xladydaisyx.deviantart.com/art/eyes-61447750
http://toyan.deviantart.com/art/Into-the-blue-77583631
http://unomak.deviantart.com/art/Tough-Life-39347964
http://deviousclown.deviantart.com/art/Samir-110131802
http://kmfiske13.deviantart.com/art/Man-51116028
http://xfact.deviantart.com/art/the-LOVE-man-97006100
Pictures of Children:
http://anthonyasael.deviantart.com/art/Emerald-Eyes-23100494
http://josketh.deviantart.com/art/The-Eyes-43776331
http://nhung.deviantart.com/art/Telescope-Eyes-53256117
http://miss-deathwish.deviantart.com/art/eyes-like-sea-glass-112681527
http://kub4s.deviantart.com/art/eyes-98506532
http://muszka.deviantart.com/art/little-mexican-girl-97176351
http://media.photobucket.com/image/sad%20eyes/Cheeriotown/sadeyes.jpg
http://k41.pbase.com/o6/32/468932/1/71237626.ataDVXAw.Soulful2.jpg
http://uwsci.org/images/sadeyes.jpg
http://kyliegoesggrrrr.deviantart.com/art/Sad-Eyes-118142002
http://nickilroy.deviantart.com/art/World-In-My-Eyes-107256732
http://s-t-r-a-n-g-e.deviantart.com/art/Don-t-cry-47714939
http://targetyousuf.deviantart.com/art/Smile01-94452347
Suggestions:
1) Capitalization, punctuation and spelling isn't important to me as long as you're using it wisely. I DoNt' wANT ToO SeA Th1S. If you're mis-using it to make a point, fine. Just not in excess or I'll DQ
2)I don't want cheesy rhymes. If you can rhyme and make it QUALITY without a bunch of random words picked because they end the same, fine. If I see any roses -are-red-violets-are-blue crap I won't even read through it.
3)I like vivid imagery and innovative styles. Abstract poems impress me a lot as well, but I love gut-wrenchingly honest pieces to death (see people like Richard Brautigan)
4) Please put your username s p a c e d o u t < like this in your author notes.
5)I will be critical, and I will be honest. If you can't handle constructive suggestions than please don't enter.
6)Did I say imagery already?
7) Please make it emotional. No cliché crap. I want to FEEL it.
8) If you enter a pre-write that is not relevant at all to the prompt, I will remove you from the contest. Add an explanation with your author's notes if you don't think I'll get it the first time around.
Favorites Please Enter!!!
Pictures of Women:
http://gallery.photo.net/photo/9786319-md.jpg
http://dfotografia.deviantart.com/art/Eyes-67843852
http://hannahhavoc.deviantart.com/art/green-eyes-129876432
http://fairystories.deviantart.com/art/The-sun-is-still-shining-100969708
http://eyeseewell.deviantart.com/art/Egypt-eyes-124654320
http://sabocchia.deviantart.com/art/Behind-Blue-Eyes-134917561
http://emmajeanjumpingbean.deviantart.com/art/Age-Old-Life-109678202
http://shanaji.deviantart.com/art/What-big-eyes-you-have-121036115
http://eidomen.deviantart.com/art/My-eyes-have-seen-a-lot-139650844
http://terryfrank.net/wp-content/uploads/2006/12/45884586000D2B6E00004808220076230205020E9D00979D9D0A9B0B020E0A0A04.jpeg
Pictures of Men:
http://thumbs.dreamstime.com/thumb_108/1167215483M5Dry4.jpg
http://xladydaisyx.deviantart.com/art/eyes-61447750
http://toyan.deviantart.com/art/Into-the-blue-77583631
http://unomak.deviantart.com/art/Tough-Life-39347964
http://deviousclown.deviantart.com/art/Samir-110131802
http://kmfiske13.deviantart.com/art/Man-51116028
http://xfact.deviantart.com/art/the-LOVE-man-97006100
Pictures of Children:
http://anthonyasael.deviantart.com/art/Emerald-Eyes-23100494
http://josketh.deviantart.com/art/The-Eyes-43776331
http://nhung.deviantart.com/art/Telescope-Eyes-53256117
http://miss-deathwish.deviantart.com/art/eyes-like-sea-glass-112681527
http://kub4s.deviantart.com/art/eyes-98506532
http://muszka.deviantart.com/art/little-mexican-girl-97176351
http://media.photobucket.com/image/sad%20eyes/Cheeriotown/sadeyes.jpg
http://k41.pbase.com/o6/32/468932/1/71237626.ataDVXAw.Soulful2.jpg
http://uwsci.org/images/sadeyes.jpg
http://kyliegoesggrrrr.deviantart.com/art/Sad-Eyes-118142002
http://nickilroy.deviantart.com/art/World-In-My-Eyes-107256732
http://s-t-r-a-n-g-e.deviantart.com/art/Don-t-cry-47714939
http://targetyousuf.deviantart.com/art/Smile01-94452347
Suggestions:
1) Capitalization, punctuation and spelling isn't important to me as long as you're using it wisely. I DoNt' wANT ToO SeA Th1S. If you're mis-using it to make a point, fine. Just not in excess or I'll DQ
2)I don't want cheesy rhymes. If you can rhyme and make it QUALITY without a bunch of random words picked because they end the same, fine. If I see any roses -are-red-violets-are-blue crap I won't even read through it.
3)I like vivid imagery and innovative styles. Abstract poems impress me a lot as well, but I love gut-wrenchingly honest pieces to death (see people like Richard Brautigan)
4) Please put your username s p a c e d o u t < like this in your author notes.
5)I will be critical, and I will be honest. If you can't handle constructive suggestions than please don't enter.
6)Did I say imagery already?
7) Please make it emotional. No cliché crap. I want to FEEL it.
8) If you enter a pre-write that is not relevant at all to the prompt, I will remove you from the contest. Add an explanation with your author's notes if you don't think I'll get it the first time around.
Favorites Please Enter!!!
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on November 21
- Rewards: Gold: 500, Silver: 500, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 5 people
- Final notes: This was a great contest to judge.. and everyone did very well so thank you. Gold and silver are actually both gold.. if only there was a "tie" trophy. I gave them the same amount of points, however... there was no way in hell to judge between those two -they were that amazing. Great job everybody!
Contest Winners
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And that thick layer of goldilocks curls
Prevents anyone from feeling sympathy towards her.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
You wouldn't see it, I don't think you could understand,
the fake smiles. The heartless laughs. I don't think you can hear it,• Commented on by judge. [remove] -
your eyes
snatching me from the real world• Commented on by judge. [remove] -
Wait for the moment when you are depleted
And you feel that no help will come.• Commented on by judge. [remove] -
A simple flash,
A beep beep beep;• Commented on by judge. [remove] - Error: Unable to find finalist item 5866075, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
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Thy will lose if her beautiful eyes
morning starlit shine• Commented on by judge. -
Her deep stare into space
Illudes the gazer of her stare.• Viewed by judge. -
Tears pouring across my soul
Forever fogged, my windows will remain• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
her eyes twinkle in the sunlight as she looks into the sun, each second pondering the life she has begun, her eyes have seen the pain of tragedy and distress, the loss of a loved one and a father that doesn't know how to copeby bloody wizard 2 1 lines, 1 comment, on Nov 10 10:03 PM• Viewed by judge.
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Sapphire eyes look anxiously
for answers to this life.• Viewed by judge.
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Comments
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are reserves okay?
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Yeah! =]
I'm so happy you're entering, lol.
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You can often tell alot by looking into/at a person's eyes. It intrigues me. However, I am one who doesn't like it when a child's eyes can tell such a big story. I don't like it. Children witness too much. Pictures of eyes are beautiful and thought provoking. Nice contest
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definitely bookmarked, but i'm at school on my school-issued compueter, so everything is blocked here
but i'll come back, most definitely
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Bookmarked!!!!! I want to enter but I might not because I'm busy, but I'll try, I hope you get good entries!!

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Yay! I hope you do enter!
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Seems like an interesting contest... Hmmm.
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Blue Eyes
Which one of your sacred commandments did I contravene necessitating the immediate removal before the ink was dry of my relevant "Blue Eyes" poem from your contest J u d m c -
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I asked for both the prompt and the user name in the author's notes. Perhaps I'm mistaken but it seemed from your author's notes that you were not planning on changing this...? I'm sorry if I offended you, it's just that I don't have that many rules and I appreciate when people respect them.
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thanks! and congrats to all winners : )
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