Let memories flood from your pen,
I want love, sadness, heartache, hope.....just feed my muse
Must rhyme.
I want love, sadness, heartache, hope.....just feed my muse
Must rhyme.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on October 31
- Rewards: Gold: 400, Silver: 100, Bronze: 50
- Final notes: Ok everyone I took a long time to judge this contest because I wanted to be sure everyone received feedback, thanks for your patience. In the end I went for the poems that made me look at situations or love in a new way. I thank-you all for entering and I wish I could have given you all a trophy! Hope you found my feedback constructive I try to be honest and fair, look out for more of my contests thank-u xxx
Contest Winners
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Are you sure my dear that rose is red?
Because all I can see is that my love is dead.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
I wanted to be a showgirl wearing sequins round my waist
And sexy fishnets on my legs and panstick on my face,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Trapped inside a dreamers world
I find no means of flight,• Commented on by judge. [remove] -
I am taken by your very essence
as you sit and gently strumby darkyinsoul 39 lines, 21 comments, on Oct 14 7:54 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
Gold trophy winner
Silver trophy winner
Bronze trophy winner
Entries [36]
1 - 36 of 36
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You Called at Midnight
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Its hard that theres so many people who deserve the love I give / I dont know why so many people want this broken life I live / I know each• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Her life is a fort knox, a safe without bars
with empty eyes hard pressed to stand as prison guardsby Nohbody 32 lines, 3 comments, on Oct 29 6:13 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Mine eyes view but never see
walled veil thou kept for me.• Commented on by judge. -
He smiles. He has to trap you.
The thrill runs up and down his mind.by lindaburns 25 lines, 9 comments, on Oct 26 3:16 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
When I look into my darkness
there I see your face.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
As I walked across the school corridor on my way out,
The little girl inside me decided to turn around.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
In all this time I've always saught
Someone to help me see,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Bricks upon bricks.
Stone upon stone.by Misskaoz 29 lines, 7 comments, on Oct 28 12:03 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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I guess you would call it the high school sweethearts
Everyone around me is one• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Worlds wait for us
time flows, gods watchby darkyinsoul 35 lines, 11 comments, on Aug 10 11:45 AM. In You choose• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I love you yeah every day
and every day I want,by Jayde1 65 lines, 8 comments, on Oct 20 5:43 PM. In Love, Personal, Life, Lyrics, Friendship, Dedication• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Anxious panting as I stood breathless behind the door
My best girl beside me shielding my dress from the floorby Layne 88 lines, 7 comments, on Oct 28 10:24 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Hands lock around veins that flow with each others names
Wrinkles turn into love lines as our skin becomes the same• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Hope brings a leap of Faith,
and with Grace, she has amazed us all.by A m b r e a 26 lines, 4 comments, on May 17 3:36 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Reflecting back on Spring
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My friend from the north forget the snow
We have our lips now let us growby Lady Nightshade 44 lines, 7 comments, on Oct 29 5:12 PM. In Lyrics, Love, Life, Hope, Contemporary, Personal, Spiritual, Thoughts• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
There's something in the air tonight
Something showing that I'm worth the fight• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Lost in your words you have shouted day after day
You never spoke the truth in those words that you say• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
It’s nearly 9 am, I didn’t sleep again,
I don’t want to go home.by Genevieve79 30 lines, 4 comments, on Oct 14 8:18 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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heyy!! can you please comment on all of ours because i'd like to know what you think of my poems and it's only fair to everyone else. thankyou!!!
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Okay guys just to let you know I will comment in length at every entry, if you haven't received a comment yet you will do. I like to reflect on some so I don't always comment immediately. thanks
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i just want to let you know you are an absolute angel to promise to comment all of these,and in length.You see you are gonna get ALOT of entries,i promise you that,because you have no entry limit and allow pre writes.Some people will just deposit anything,i hope i dont fall into that category.Anyway,im rambling a bit.Your a gem,cant wait to read my own comment.
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