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Prompt For You #3

 

 

 

Take the following prompt and finish it:

 

 

 

In a perfect world...

Minimum of 15 lines.

 

 

 

 

 

RULES

 

1.  Use spell check
2.  Use proper grammar
3.  No sticky caps or all caps
4.  No chat lingo

5.  No Dirty Pretty/Chat Speak
6.  Keep it clean, no Erotic or profanity

7.  Be creative, brilliant, and interesting.

8.  Imagery and metaphors please.

9.  If you use a picture or graphics in your poem, please remember

     to give credit to the artist.

 

 

Reservations are allowed, just please remember to come

back and finish them!

 

 

 

 

 

GOLD-  1,000 Points

SILVER-  600 Points

BRONZE-  300 Points

 

 

 

 

 

 

Good luck to you all and thanks for your entry!

 

 

Jeremy0826

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on November 24
  • Rewards: Gold: 1000, Silver: 600, Bronze: 300
  • Final notes:
    Thank you very much for all of your wonderful entries! This was such a difficult contest to judge because of the fact that you all pretty much had the same thoughts in mind when you wrote for this. It's really interesting and you all wrote from your hearts. I learned that one of you somehow lost some beloved family members and that really hit a nerve in me. It's a terrible feeling to be without those that you love especially, during this time of the year.

    Thank you to all of you and I really enjoyed your works. It was a pleasure to read you and I hope to see you in my next contest! Take care and stay inspired!




    Jeremy0826

Contest Winners

  1. ~ In A Perfect World ~
    In a perfect world there would be no hate ...
    by Ez Writer 24 lines, 34 comments, on Oct 26 9:12 PM. In Contest, Life, Hope, Thoughts
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  2. If We Try
    If I try I can imagine
    how a perfect world would be...
    by ShaShay 29 lines, 6 comments, on Nov 8 9:20 AM. In Contest, Contemporary, Life, Hope, Society, Thoughts
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  3. In a perfect world
    In a perfect world little kids wouldn't be starving
    Grown men and women wouldn't be standing on the corner with a cup asking for a quarter
    by krystal111 18 lines, 4 comments, on Oct 26 8:40 PM. In Sad, Reality, Thoughts, Earth
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  4. Idealistic Imaging
    by darell 41 lines, 3 comments, on Oct 26 12:48 PM. In Hope, Love, Spiritual, Inspirational
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  5. In A Perfect World
    by WarmHeartedGeisha 20 lines, 5 comments, on Oct 27 9:40 AM. In prompt inspired
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  6. In A Perfect World
    In a perfect world
    I always do what’s right
    by Topaze 32 lines, 2 comments, on Oct 26 9:23 AM. In Contest, Love, Life, Thoughts, Fantasy
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  7. My Thoughts
    In a perfect world
    there would be no pain
    by spiritraven 17 lines, 6 comments, on Oct 26 9:02 AM. In Contest, Hope, Life, Love, Thoughts, Spiritual
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  8. Utopia
    In a perfect word
    there’d be more love than hate,
    by penman 39 lines, 5 comments, on Oct 27 10:51 AM. In Other, Spiritual
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  9. In a Perfect World
    Mornings would be easy,
    come without four cups of coffee,
    by Randomly Beautiful 29 lines, 4 comments, on Oct 27 11:18 AM
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  10. Broken Perfection
    I pull my car into the driveway
    Park and take out my keys
    by LesbianOfLove 41 lines, 2 comments, on Nov 8 6:02 PM. In Greif, Loss, Mom, Husband, Family, Mother, Lover, Friend, Greiving, Memory, Miss
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  11. Private Moments Aren't Perfect
    by SteveandSon 28 lines, 7 comments, on Nov 9 1:11 AM. In Angst, Contest, Life, Love, Pain, Other, My own style, Noguest, Longing, Loss
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]

Entries [13]

1 - 13 of 13
  • Rain
    In a perfect world, there still is pain,
    Thunderstorms and falling rain.
    by ozma 9 lines, 3 comments, on Oct 29 6:58 PM
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Dreaming of Utopia
    The guns are silenced, melted down
    or rusted lying on the ground.
    by williamstown 20 lines, 4 comments, on Nov 6 1:38 PM
    • Commented on by judge.

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  • Psychotic Moon
    November 8
    Edit | Reply
    I would enter, but all I can hear are the lines of Simple Plan's song

    "In a perfect world
    This could never happen
    In a perfect world
    You’d still be here
    And it makes no sense
    I could just pick up the pieces
    But to you this means nothing,
    Nothing at all"