I am doing a rounds contest. Which will probably consist of five rounds as long as everything goes good. For this around I just want one of your works that you consider amazing!
Rules :
1. No Bashing
2. Swearing is fine
3. No Erotica
4. Have fun
Other then that chose one of your amazing pieces and put it here. I will comment on all entries. I will also let you know if you go to the next round. So come on and enter. Have fun....
Rules :
1. No Bashing
2. Swearing is fine
3. No Erotica
4. Have fun
Other then that chose one of your amazing pieces and put it here. I will comment on all entries. I will also let you know if you go to the next round. So come on and enter. Have fun....
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on November 6
- Rewards: Gold: 600, Silver: 200, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 5 people
- Final notes: This was a fun contest to host. I enjoyed reading all entries. Thanks to everyone for entering. Congrats to the finalists. I look forward to round 2.
Contest Winners
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You bring me sorrow
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by still.she.waits 17 lines, 16 comments, on Jun 19 3:40 AM. In Weird, Contemporary, noguest
Silver trophy winner
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You will make it through this day,
deep inside I know that you will.by Jeremy0826 62 lines, 109 comments, on Oct 15 1:48 AM 2008. In Inspiration, Motivation, Never Give Up!, Nature, Hope, Life, Love, Thoughts
Honorable mention
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Telephones, spreadsheets and ring bound folders,
mundane tasks to earn his bread and salt.by Behemoth-King 29 lines, 8 comments, on Jun 18 11:49 AM. In Work, Society, Sad, Life, Humanity, Lost in thought Honorable mention
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I remember that day on the bus
we were sheltered from the rainby bluecollarlove 49 lines, 11 comments, on Mar 24 12:55 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Behind these walls my deepest secrets lie
Boiling under my skin just waiting to arise• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
"Your eyes dance with love, glow in my heart"• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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My mind has gone through the night
where only you live,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
A young man is hanged because he took the blame for a killing
The woman he was with was royalty, she would have suffered if she told.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
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Traveling through me, reaching all those tear trigger parts. Eating at me, killing me inside, dying at every weak spot. Dulling down into nothingness as emotions over-take me and construct me into someone else. Drown me in saby Coloured Skies 6 lines, 13 comments, on Oct 22 3:02 PM. In Sad, Personal, Pain, Other, Love, Life, Hope, Thoughts, Weird• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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maybe legitimizing the people who draw rings of smoke inside their irises because they don’t want to see anymore- is going to get me in trouble. maybe giving them words instead of silence cracking its way up to lighthouse winby Writing0Freedom 33 lines, 2 comments, on Oct 12 5:46 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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When I go back to that dreaded place
with my thoughts everywhere• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
At the beginning you said
that you would never leaveby starving4perfection 26 lines, 17 comments, on Feb 5 7:04 AM. In Sad, Love, Thoughts, Friendship, Lost Love, Contest• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
What good is it going to do if you go round telling people life is hard? Because ten to one if you look for problems, problems will find yoby firefly star 33 lines, 5 comments, on Oct 25 6:09 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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There’s a certain silence in the Dark
And yet, valid voices that send up a sparkby Lonecat 40 lines, 4 comments, on Oct 11 9:11 PM. In personal life world spiritual• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
NO,NO,NO!!! I begged, I pleaded in a loud scream• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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Poison drips from your kiss
Killing me slowly as I love you• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Conversations unclear
Muddled thoughts and fears• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
Gold trophy winner
Bronze trophy winner
Entries [44]
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The crowed goes wild
The fans all cheer• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
You ask me why,
I let love die,by DontObjectifyMe 32 lines, 11 comments, on Sep 25 1:44 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
You’ve been my hell in a hand basket,
You’ve been my sanctuary,by Rasha Dark-Panther 43 lines, 1 comment, on Oct 19 5:27 PM. In Life• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
A persistence of memory
Leaves you in a quintessential stareby JustinReid 25 lines, 3 comments, on Sep 29 9:33 PM. In Thoughts, Spiritual, Contemporary, Progressive, Friendship• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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I watch the rain
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It’s two minutes till nine and five minutes till infinity,
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she soars through the creak-board,
arising her graceby Dysphoria 20 lines, 2 comments, on Oct 19 11:04 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Handsome, happy, Harry the hunchback hermit,
hospitalized, having a huge harvest ofby judmc 17 lines, 6 comments, on Oct 23 11:16 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Once beautiful
little peopleby ForestFaery 30 lines, 7 comments, on Oct 24 3:53 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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No Place in the World
there is no place in this world for a poet
a poet has no home in the hills or on the beaches
in vibrating crowds
in cozy homes
or beneath icy stars
there is no place in this world for the quiet longing
for the divine hunger
and haunted silence
reaching beyond peace
for an imminent almighty god
the voice of this world crushes meaning from the soul
as the thresher robs beets of all sugar
as time removes love of all but memory
shelterless
naked
destroyed
the desperate poet
can then only persevere
emerging beyond every failure
into the bright light of a god never worshipped
and true as blood
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