rules
1. no bashing god or others
2 poems per person every poem will be read and commented on this is a first come first serve
please join quick so i can start commenting
1. no bashing god or others
2 poems per person every poem will be read and commented on this is a first come first serve
please join quick so i can start commenting
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on October 22
- Rewards: Gold: 400, Silver: 266, Bronze: 155, Honorable mention: 5 people
- Final notes: since there were so many good poems i am turning this into a round contest stay tone for round 2
Contest Winners
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My mind has gone through the night
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An August night waits,
For the setting of the sun.
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The theatre is empty, the stage void;
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They congregate in the cemetery, shedding tears of loss
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The burning metallic flames
Blackened me with painby submarine93 19 lines, 2 comments, on Oct 19 8:56 AM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
The heart rains blood
Through the body it floodsby submarine93 18 lines, 4 comments, on Oct 1 12:29 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Did you remember that day many years ago
Back then it wasn't different but now doesn't it show?by DancingStar 54 lines, 2 comments, on Oct 10 1:19 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
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Deep beneath the surface, imprisoned in this cell
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Stripped of
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Oh, how new this chiming clock
resonates against the wind.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Sticky sweet with kisses
Lollipop that the mouth missesby FallenAngel09 5 lines, 3 comments, on Mar 8 9:52 AM. In Other• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
Gold trophy winner
Bronze trophy winner
Honorable mention
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1 - 61 of 61
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A song about a soldier's life and death in the war, with the hope to make it home to his loved one(s) commentt• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Never forget,
They will always say,by snolan 31 lines, 1 comment, on Oct 20 2:12 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Today I seen your face,
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Don’t raise your voice / Lest it be heard by others / And cause you inconvenience. / If something happens / In your presence / Don’t be a witness. / Asked to depose, say, / “O.K. I was there that day• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Behind these walls my deepest secrets lie
Boiling under my skin just waiting to arise• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Trying to work out what she thinks
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Every hand tells a story
Every line on every faceby Lonesome Dove 24 lines, 7 comments, on Mar 31 5:18 AM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
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I heard the words
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Cindy was only four years old
When her daddy passed away.by darlee77 65 lines, 21 comments, on Oct 16 8:11 PM
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The door bell rings, I hear it loud and clear,
My heart starts pounding although I have no fear.by darlee77 37 lines, 9 comments, on Oct 19 10:28 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
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All of these abnormal absurdities are absolutely true
But my brain barely blemish’s, if you only knew.by Superstarjod22 53 lines, 52 comments, on Jun 10 9:51 PM. In Personal• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Still in the night air, chill as a breath, bare skin wears thin we're in a trance as the snow does a dance; twirling, unfurling, revealingby pumpykin 4 lines, 6 comments, on Oct 4 6:02 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Neoplasm, this ruinous affliction,
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Restricted to the unwritten laws of time and faith, we were misinformed by the media
Indirectly taught how to process and conform, we hesitate before we doby Laizia 48 lines, 1 comment, on Oct 22 5:19 AM• Viewed by judge. -
Brimming eyes of stone,
Overflowing with great joy:• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Surrender myself to darkling sleep, a world of dreams and memories,
Recalling now those hands that clasp and with love those lips that mee• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
The smile stretched over thy lips
Held irresistible glee which everyone seeksby Perennial Plague 23 lines, on Jan 15 7:22 PM 2006. In Love• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Clarissa
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So I stay invisible behind their reflection
Cautious to remain myself and avoid detection• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
Silver trophy winner
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Thank you for the bronze trophy and HM.xx
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Not a snipe at your judging abilities, but a fair observation and question:
i submitted a piece titled "The Mockingbird" which consists of 18 stanzas that all contain 6 long lines of text. You read it and judged it in less than 3 minutes, yet it takes most people a good 10-15 minutes to read & absorb. How did you judge me fairly if you didn't read passed stanza 2? -
OMG !!
Thank you so much for Gold and Silver!
I am truly honored!
Congrats to all the winners!
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