I have someone that I care a great deal about who has been betrayed by those that he thought he could trust. If you have ever had been betrayed by somone that you thought you could trust please enter here.
Usual ap rules apply
Don;t molest your shift key
NO chatspek I HATE IT!!!
I will close this contest if I don't get enough entries.
I will DQ you if you're just going to bash
I may increase points if I get enough entries
I may add honorable mentions if I get enough entiries.
Now have fun
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on October 26
- Rewards: Gold: 400, Silver: 200, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 5 people
- Final notes: It has been a while since anyone has entered a poem in this contest so I think it is time to judge it. You have all done exceptional work and I wish thta I could give you all points and trophies but I can't nor do I have the points to do so lol The ones that ended up in the finalist lists were the ones that struck me deeply. I know that there are more then the trophies or points allow but they all were very good. Not saying that the rest of you didn't do great jobs because that would be untrue. You have ALL done a great job. Congratulations though to the iwnners and keep writting all of you.
Contest Winners
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Growing up I had a friend
we did everything togetherby Sarin Darktree 53 lines, 4 comments, on Oct 19 8:53 PM. In Angst, Contemporary, Contest, Life, Pain, Personal, Sad
Silver trophy winner
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Never come back
You know who you are• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] - Error: Unable to find finalist item 5605141, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
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Endless questions, deafened ears
Never answered• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
by Note The Sarcasm 38 lines, 2 comments, on Oct 19 8:22 PM• Commented on by judge. [remove]
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She was so disheartened
She just seemed so downby MysteriousWhisper 115 lines, 2 comments, on Sep 18 10:06 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
Gold trophy winner
Bronze trophy winner
Honorable mention
Entries [36]
1 - 36 of 36
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I knew from the moment she was introduced
By the way you looked at Herby Never-Better25 89 lines, 18 comments, on Sep 9 3:36 PM. In Sad, Pain, Abuse, Personal., Bitterness, Bisexual, Lesbian, Cheating• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Blinded by the truth
I refused to see.by Misskaoz 69 lines, 12 comments, on Oct 3 5:44 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I have betrayed you once more,
my dear friend.by Horrific Hollis 12 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 5 6:16 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Before you woke up,
From your fantasy.by cg-frogz 53 lines, 4 comments, on Nov 9 4:04 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
The girl turns from longing and sad to angry. I would like for someone to write a sequel to this, from the boy's point of view. Maybe, if iby Tinselpool 24 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 23 9:47 PM. In Anger, Lost love, Rain, Tears, Angry, Lost in thought, Sad, Pain, Life, Longing• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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engraving linoleum into my bones and joints
and praying to stand but never having the heart.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
stab me full of holes in the dark
stab me like the illuminatoby cover fire hero 5 lines, 1 comment, on Oct 19 7:17 PM. In noguest• Commented on by judge. -
ive build up a wall
and i am keeping you out• Commented on by judge. -
Give me strength,
my dark avenger,by Gay-Militant 41 lines, 5 comments, on Oct 20 12:20 AM• Commented on by judge. -
by grin and bear it 33 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 25 9:37 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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What if you treated me better
I might learn to like myselfby AussieQueen94 9 lines, 5 comments, on Sep 19 9:59 AM. In Personal., Longing, Depression, Sadness, Pain• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
My hate for you
Comes from my heartby VampireKitty- 14 lines, 23 comments, on Oct 15 10:55 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
left so completely hollow, I ask you to fill me
with the yet unbroken promise, I sustain myselfby Acidbath 36 lines, 8 comments, on Apr 25 1:58 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
You came too soon
In my life still covered with snow• Commented on by judge. -
Friends act like they care, but when you need them there not there.
They promise to keep, every secret that wont let you sleep.by Stolen memories 24 lines, 1 comment, on May 19 6:47 PM. In Abuse, Sad, Pain, Depression, Sadness, Loss, Dedication, Self, Freewrite, Personal.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
no one to trust around
which way do we go?by Snow-Flake 38 lines, 1 comment, on Oct 22 4:22 PM• Commented on by judge.
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