Hey all yeah as the title reads broken hearts, now here is the challenge:-
I would like you to use the poem ... :-( ... by me (link below) or aspects of it (listed below also) to write a poem that will be able to totally impress me.
The poem has to be somewhat personal and about an internet/sms relationship that turned to physical relationship then distanced till you and the person seperated.
The aspects that I want used if that option is chosen:- (all of these have to be used as is in the poem)
physical affiliation
Distrorted visualisation
relisation conceded
supervised and critised
http://allpoetry.com/poem/5805541
I am not going to be overly generous when it comes to giving points for this contest because these points are the last of what I have.
I would like you to use the poem ... :-( ... by me (link below) or aspects of it (listed below also) to write a poem that will be able to totally impress me.
The poem has to be somewhat personal and about an internet/sms relationship that turned to physical relationship then distanced till you and the person seperated.
The aspects that I want used if that option is chosen:- (all of these have to be used as is in the poem)
physical affiliation
Distrorted visualisation
relisation conceded
supervised and critised
http://allpoetry.com/poem/5805541
I am not going to be overly generous when it comes to giving points for this contest because these points are the last of what I have.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on November 24
- Rewards: Gold: 1100, Silver: 618, Bronze: 400, Honorable mention: 5 people
- Final notes: Thankyou for all the entries, I admit I didn't get the number that I wanted but I did like the ones I got. Sorry if I didn't comment on your poem it was nothing personal about your poem I've just very busy and haven't had any time to do anything thats why I kept extending this competition so I had the time to judge it. Thankyou all again for the entries.
- To judge this contest, you need to have at least as many finalists as you have rewards. You have 4 awards but only 3 finalists.
Contest Winners
Gold trophy winner
Silver trophy winner
Bronze trophy winner
Entries [6]
1 - 6 of 6
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I will never forget the days we once had
The days when you were everything to me• Commented on by judge. -
You were there when I first learned
how to kiss - tongue twistedby midnight51 1 lines, 13 comments, on Oct 21 10:58 PM• Viewed by judge. -
Never really wanted to meet you
figured you were someone from back home to talk to• Viewed by judge.
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I can't enter this contest Michael, as I can't relate to it, especially now with how happy in love I am, but I wish you luck on your contest, your friend, Josie
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Mine was
As you described
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