A poem about love. I don't want sexual erotica. I want a poem that portrays love in an appropriate manner. It can include love of animals, God, ect… You just need lto incorporate love. I can stretch it to good deeds but try to tie it into love. If it is a good poem, chances are you will get in. I am very critical. Just have a loving mannerism Thankyou,
1500 is what to fight for!
AtiVan
1500 is what to fight for!
AtiVan
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on November 8
- Rewards: Gold: 1000, Silver: 300, Bronze: 200, Honorable mention: 1 people
- Final notes: Good Job to All! Thankyou for entering
Contest Winners
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If you were a teardrop
I would never cry• Commented on by judge. [remove] -
sapphire bejewelled
mocha silken heavenby Sheli 39 lines, 3 comments, on Oct 17 5:03 PM. In Love, Life, Nature, Friendship, Dedication, Happiness, Family
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How much of love have you to spare for dreams
which others have, or you have dreamed yourself?• Commented on by judge. -
I don't count your love by the roses you bring,
or the times you remember our anniversary.by islekine 18 lines, 3 comments, on Oct 16 8:09 PM• Commented on by judge. -
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If you call on me I will come
with the swiftness of an eagle.• Commented on by judge. -
I love it how you smile at me when we are alone,
I love the way your voice sounds when we are talking on the phone,• Commented on by judge. -
Finally my animal is set free for you to see...by CutsThatDontBleed 32 lines, 2 comments, on Oct 16 10:48 PM. In Dark, Love, Personal, Pain, Thoughts, Longing, Humanity, Romance, My own style• Commented on by judge.
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Softer skin I have never caressed
Under my hand on yours, our fingers entwined• Commented on by judge. -
Rainbow showering colors,
knowing the tactics of my dreams,by Why so serious 22 lines, 2 comments, on Oct 17 7:39 AM• Commented on by judge. -
my daughter is all grown up now
it's almost time to fly• Commented on by judge.
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I will go though each poem and rank it. Because I am not perfect I will do his three times and take the average score. I will be harsh and nice. Do not get mad.
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You threw out my poem on my lov for my AP daddy? I am so hurt and shocked. My heart was in that.
*tear*
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Sam, Honey as you know the world is not always fair, I am sorry that you had to be treated so poorly,
Others hide behind critical actions and remarks,
We can only pray for them,
God Bless You,
G-Ma
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yup that's me
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how come sams was dq shes all upset so wots wrong with it
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You can throw my poem out but you can never throw away my love for my AP daddy like garbage. We love each other like real dad and daughter. He took his poem out too. May God bless you and your contest.
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oh commmon
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I am glad to hear that
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well thankyou... god bless you too
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Hi, I am a concerned AP Member, who really would like to know why you did not allow Sam's poem to stay in your contest?
Even if you did not like it, why be cruel to a young child who is very ill with cancer? I read your rules and I did not find any where that she violated your rules.
Perhaps it was an error, The difference between being critical and cruel are two separate things.
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what does cancer have to do with anything?
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My comment was deleted and thus, how am to judge?
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I tosse out two. One because my comment was deleted and the other one because I did not think it belonged in the contest
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please read the title of the contest
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I did not delete your comment. I would never do that. You know that's not true.
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well it somehow mysteriously vansihed.
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THANKS!!!
way cool! Thanks for honorable mention!
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