I am looking for dark & Depressing pieces. Please enter. I need to read something too get some stuff off my head. If you are wanting too write about something in particular just ask I am sure that I will let you! NO RULES! I will comment on every single entry!
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on October 17
- Rewards: Gold: 400, Honorable mention: 5 people
- Final notes: This was a real hard contest too judge. I had alot of great entries. Thanks all that entered. Congrats too the winners.
Contest Winners
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I want to hit you, just to see if you would cry.
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We are but an insignificant speck on this planet we call Earth just as Earth is but a speck in the universe...• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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I used the questiom from the picture. Sorry it doesn't rhyme. i'm not very good at writing poems that way. I hope you like this anyeay.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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The stench of burning flesh
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Last night was the worst night of my life.
I hardly slept as visions of you continuously crept into my mind.by Jeremy0826 35 lines, 60 comments, on Dec 18 8:54 AM 2007. In Dark, Life, Personal, Sad, Thoughts, Depression, Sadness, Pain
Honorable mention
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I ask you all while you sit there and judge,
by whom are you empowered,the devil I put it to you.by poeticpresumption 24 lines, 2 comments, on Oct 11 4:57 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
today was alright; today was okay.by black-phenoqu 17 lines, 10 comments, on Sep 3 3:28 PM. In Personal, Thoughts, Life, My own style, Lost in thought, My life, Emo, cutting• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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Upon a death, a seal is broken,
whispered on a wind unspoken.by darkyinsoul 73 lines, 27 comments, on Jul 1 10:50 AM. In Darkwrite• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
I watched as you walked out of my life.
My heart shattered into pieces at that moment.by XxLoverOfDarknessxX 28 lines, 8 comments, on Sep 14 4:50 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Being without you,
Is like living without a heart,by Love Is Heartless 29 lines, 28 comments, on Jun 4 7:55 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Your fingers that caressed me,Now nibbled to the bone,
I told you not to bite your nails, .....• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
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Sticks and Stones won't break my bones,
As blades will never hurt me.by xBloodPromisedx 19 lines, 3 comments, on Sep 17 4:28 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
She was going through the motions
her life seemed such a waste• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
by ifonlyyouknew 33 lines, 6 comments, on Oct 3 9:54 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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by ifonlyyouknew 33 lines, 6 comments, on Oct 12 7:35 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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To whom it may concern or reader,
there's nothing in this world,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Let me take a moment of your time,
for a story you don't hear every day,by FinalWhisper 125 lines, 15 comments, on Oct 25 12:51 PM 2006. In Fantasy• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
To pay for what they did to me, they need to suffer my same pain,
the voices in my head seem to agree, perhaps I will use a chain!by FinalWhisper 54 lines, 8 comments, on Jun 2 8:23 AM 2006. In Dark• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
everday its my life on the line
as i draw that blade across, just one more timeby spiritual wolf 19 lines, 4 comments, on Oct 2 9:08 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Blood running down my arm
Dripping off my fingertipsby VampireKitty- 13 lines, 11 comments, on Jun 11 8:18 AM 2008. In Love, Teenage thinking, Teen issues, Depressed, Emo• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
She screamed at you
Said "she couldn't do this anymore"by Ah-mazing Angel 34 lines, 15 comments, on Oct 14 3:46 PM. In Pain, Sad, Personal, Suicide, Self, Teenage thinking, Teen issues, Escape, Goodbyes• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
As I Sit Here And Take The Pills
I Start To Feel A Little Numbby Ah-mazing Angel 34 lines, 6 comments, on Jul 30 5:10 PM. In Pain, Personal, Sad, Suicide, Depressed, Teenage thinking, Teen issues, Emo• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
she shows you a smile of a lie , to all of those who dont watch her cry.....by missin-my-Marine 28 lines, 4 comments, on Feb 27 8:17 PM 2007. In sad• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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Sulking sleeping in my cave
above the world and all it's gravesby Jack of Blades 14 lines, 2 comments, on Oct 15 7:52 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
After I've heard that you broke up with me
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Entries [116]
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I can't sleep, my mind won't let me
Ideas, thoughts, memories...by Little Miss Mental 82 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 21 12:03 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
a darkness hangs over me
a dark cloud with rainby poeticpresumption 28 lines, 5 comments, on Jul 8 4:03 PM. In depression• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
A cross to heavy to carry
the shadow cast over the light,by poeticpresumption 13 lines, 2 comments, on Sep 28 5:35 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Running through my veins quicker than my blood,
flooding within my like a tense river.by Marty-McFly 24 lines, 3 comments, on Sep 7 3:59 PM. In Life, Pain, Personal, Sad, Depressed, Angry, Family, Depression• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Coffin
awaiting meby Kathleen a Nazarene 14 lines, 5 comments, on Oct 13 3:49 PM. In Rictameter, Life, Hope, Thoughts, Spiritual, Inspirational, Message• Commented on by judge. -
Behind these hazel eyes
Lies the sorry and my pain• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
My heart,
it's roughly delicate.by Horrific Hollis 63 lines, 8 comments, on Sep 18 4:42 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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Tonight is the worst night of my life.
You are leaving me,by i vomit sunshine 49 lines, 1 comment, on Oct 1 4:12 PM. In Personal• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Erasers burn my skin and this acid corrupts my DNA
My deformed being is put in glass and now I'm on displayby Blue-Rose Beauty 18 lines, 31 comments, on Sep 22 3:51 PM. In Dark• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Aggravated... fit to burst, tension set to snap
Challenge me... I dare you• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
The beautiful stars in the sky they shine
Like your soul which is oh so divineby XxLoverOfDarknessxX 23 lines, 11 comments, on Sep 17 4:27 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Your brilliant blue eyes full of intelligence I love.
That megawatt smile always brightens my day.by XxLoverOfDarknessxX 19 lines, 30 comments, on Jun 30 7:40 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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Her silk, heels and hose--her peaceful repose...make ever more tortured this lost soul's death throes. To be trapped here in this half-afteby Black JaPanther 9 lines, 3 comments, on Oct 6 3:39 PM. In Angst, Contest, Dark, Fantasy, Life, Love, Other, Pain, Spiritual, Weird, Beauty• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Elongated anxiety slaughters my blackened mentality• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I’m seeking a peace in this bleakness, or at least release from this chasing what cannot be caught. What havoc was wreaked I can’t speak, h• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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A mist advances across the land, the sea, the sky, the globe. And, yes, human hearts and hands. It clouds our spirits. It shrouds our soulsby Black JaPanther 31 lines, 24 comments, on Apr 9 11:17 PM 2007. In Pain, Sad, Society, Spiritual, Thoughts, Death, Anger, Sadness, Longing, Historical• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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And, now I know angels live, and they love, but not in my arms—and when they fly far away, God will send more angels to take their place.by Black JaPanther 23 lines, 11 comments, on Sep 20 9:37 AM. In Angst, Contemporary, Dark, Fantasy, Hope, Life, Love, Lyrics, Pain, Personal, Sad, Spiritual.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Now, I don’t like to speak clichés, but there’s not much else I can say. And if God’s ways work in mystery, then our ways should be plain..by Black JaPanther 18 lines, 8 comments, on Sep 20 11:57 AM. In Angst, Contest, Dark, Life, Love, Lyrics, Pain, Personal, Sad, Spiritual, Thoughts• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Panic attack I can feel it coming, I start to
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In the dead silence
I listen to her silent scream• Commented on by judge. -
Heart thumps in my chest when he speaks.
I feel a blush paint my cheeks crimson red.by TecumsehRoz 27 lines, 6 comments, on Sep 19 2:06 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Bang- it's done. I'm on my way.
Heaven's now my place to stay.by xBloodPromisedx 49 lines, 5 comments, on Oct 7 2:58 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
If you opened up to me,
And let me in your arms,by xBloodPromisedx 23 lines, 3 comments, on Aug 22 8:34 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Comments
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Wow got alot of favorites how will you choose. Contest does not close for a while.
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It is going too be a tough one. I had alot of amazing entries so far. I am sure that I will get alot of more entries. So yeah this is going to be hard.
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