Darkness Within

Contest is Over

• Contest was judged on October 10
• Rewards: Gold: 400, Silver: 100, Bronze: 50, Honorable mention: 2 people
• Final notes:
  Honestly, Ever poem that was entered was great. I had a very hard time judging this as everyone was soon becoming favorites. I wish I had enough points to give to everyone or at least give everyone claps, but sadly I did not. Thank you all who entered and sorry if you did not recieve a trophy.

Contest Winners

1. Two-Faced

   That shattered mirror mocks me
   A thousand faces all the same

   by Cr187 48 lines, 2 comments, on Oct 10 3:43 PM
   Gold trophy winner

   • Commented on by judge. [remove]
2. Little Did They Know II

   by Paloszoo 36 lines, 8 comments, on Oct 6 3:24 PM. In Sad, Pain, Dark, Angst, Abuse, My life, Sadness, Miscarriage
   Silver trophy winner

   • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
3. Like mother like daughter.

   All I remember is tears and fear
   From the one who is meant to protect and love

   by G-y-p-o 31 lines, 3 comments, on Oct 10 4:13 PM
   Bronze trophy winner

   • Commented on by judge. [remove]
4. The Unnamed one

   The Unnamed One
   By: Star of Atlantis

   by Star of Atlantis 27 lines, 4 comments, on Oct 8 1:26 PM. In Dark
   Honorable mention

   • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]

Entries [18]

• The Abyss

  Deep into my turmoil
  the blackness does now creep

  by Topaze 32 lines, 4 comments, on Oct 10 3:04 PM. In Contest, Life, Thoughts, Dark, Sad, Pain

  • Commented on by judge.
• The Man I See Before Me

  Staring silently at the mirror in front of me
  I don't see the same person you seem to see

  by Great Puppett V 22 lines, 11 comments, on Feb 12 2:52 PM. In Other, Personal

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Never

  'Cause I'll never see my home again.
  And I'll never feel the same again.

  by breannawilliams 28 lines, 5 comments, on Oct 10 3:15 PM. In Life, Lyrics, Pain, Personal, Sad, Thoughts, Memories, Yesterday, Past, Longing

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Why Bother?

  Why give a shit when others don’t?
  Why try so hard when others won’t?

  by mgmc 13 lines, 7 comments, on Oct 10 3:51 PM. In Spiritual

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Shadow Side

  For many years I have lived with my intensifying rage
  My dark heart has grown year upon year

  by twelfthknight 23 lines, 11 comments, on Sep 2 4:31 PM. In Thoughts, Dark, Contest

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Caging the Beast into Little Lyrics

  Sonnet about pain. Yeah...

  by GinryuStargazer 16 lines, 1 comment, on Oct 10 7:09 PM

  • Commented on by judge.
• doom is coming

  i see it the faces of the races as he stands patient,
  eyes so vacant makin his statement to the nation,

  by cadaver 10 lines, 1 comment, on Oct 10 4:47 PM

  • Commented on by judge.
• That day

  That day
  When you died

  by Isolatedsouls17 100 lines, 7 comments, on Aug 5 2:43 PM. In Lost love, Loss, Pain, Personal, Love, Life, Sad, Dark, Contest, Death, Society, Self

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Love Slaughter

  Cupid hit me with his arrow
  now i hit him with my fist

  by Dark Shadow 43 lines, 16 comments, on Oct 10 5:04 PM. In Other, Dark, Angst

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• the other side of me

  a drunk father taught me
  lessons of anger and hate

  by isaacokumu 43 lines, 22 comments, on May 31 3:04 AM. In Pain, Sad, Society, Personal, Life, Dark

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Abandoned Alliances

  I follow a youthful forest path,
  Leading me to unknown lands,

  by Spirit of the Water 32 lines, 6 comments, on Sep 21 4:49 PM. In Pain, Sad

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• dark confessions of an annoying person

  From time to time,
  There’s a tragic darkness rising in my mind;

  by rrw 32 lines, 6 comments, on Oct 10 6:03 PM. In darker than dark... a plaid like dark

  • Commented on by judge.
• Blacken Hearts of sorrow

  FOR CONTEST!!!! AND SOMETHING THAT REALLY HAPPENED TO ME!!!

  by RazorbladeKiss14 25 lines, 5 comments, on Sep 23 11:42 PM. In Dark, Sad, Pain, Personal, Thoughts, Anger, Hate, Lost love, Emo, Depression, Longing

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Death bed at 13

  This is about me and my boyfriend when I got hit by a semi. damn drunk driver.

  by StarOfDreams23 33 lines, 12 comments, on Jun 4 9:13 PM 2008. In everything, Pain, Love, Life, Hope, Sad, Personal, Longing, My life, Almost-Death

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite

Comments

• By me, right now

  Adding your comment:
• 
  Misskaoz
  October 10
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  If I didn't leave a comment or claps it is not because I did not, I could not afford to do as many claps as I wanted, because I used my points for this contest.
• 
  GinryuStargazer
  October 10
  Edit | Reply

  Hey

  Hey, sorry about the sudden revserve; I'm doen with it, by the way. It's a sonnet; I just didn't want the contest to fill up while I was working on it, you know?
• 
  Night Hope
  October 11
  Edit | Reply
  
  Thank you for hosting a great contest and for the HM. Congrats, one and all. Be well, Poets and Scribes.
  

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