Come on people...we all have them. So tell me about those really bad break-ups. I know they suck...but we write about them. It helps ease everything. So just tell me about what happened. I know some are hurtful but some are helpful. So share with me and if you would like advice message me. I will try to get to comment on EVERYONES!! I ususally do if I dont I am terribly sorry its nothing personal sometimes I just dont have the time. I am sure they will all be great. So good Job and Good Luck!! 
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Preliminary Finalists
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I close my eyes and recall the day I found out that my grandmother had died
I feel almost the exact same emotions as the day you left meby LesbianOfLove 86 lines, 2 comments, on Oct 8 3:21 PM. In Death, Loss, Grandmother, Lost Love, Heartbreak, End, Angst, Dark, Goodbyes• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
I fell in love with this amazing woman
The prom queen actuallyby LesbianOfLove 456 lines, 3 comments, on Oct 8 7:26 PM. In Cheating, Infidelity, Romance, Love, Revenge, Rant, Vent, Relationship, Story, Moving On• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
And, now I know angels live, and they love, but not in my arms—and when they fly far away, God will send more angels to take their place.by Black JaPanther 23 lines, 11 comments, on Sep 20 9:37 AM. In Angst, Contemporary, Dark, Fantasy, Hope, Life, Love, Lyrics, Pain, Personal, Sad, Spiritual.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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There haven't been many
nights like it.by Sweet Love My Labor 67 lines, on Oct 9 1:13 AM• Not viewed by judge. -
so close to drifting
off into a dreamless wonderby Celestialsfire 26 lines, on Oct 9 1:47 AM• Not viewed by judge. -
I hope you can fill
those empty holesby Celestialsfire 32 lines, on Oct 9 1:50 AM• Not viewed by judge. -
Turning through the leaflets of my life
Searching in them a bright light!by ahmed-19 29 lines, 1 comment, on Aug 18 10:35 AM• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite -
There are three words I fail to believe in
Their constant use has made their meaning thin,by moy 68 lines, 12 comments, on Aug 17 3:46 PM• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Summoned by your light
Chase Rabbit Chase• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite -
My curves and your angles, I guess they fit together, and I guess they still would.
If only our brains did.• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite -
by Roland Welles 84 lines, 15 comments, on Sep 27 1:48 AM. In Adult• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite
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by Roland Welles 41 lines, 12 comments, on Sep 24 4:48 PM. In Adult• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Slamming her keys upon the table,
The tears still gleaming in her azure eyes,by dybiw16 44 lines, 2 comments, on Feb 24 3:25 PM. In My own style• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Why by Rob M. Amaral Jr.by Xerq granite 38 lines, 5 comments, on Jun 5 11:20 AM 2008. In Love, Life, Sad, Pain, Hope, Depression, Lost love, Dedication• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite
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i don't know why i first said i loved you,
i think i was simply lonely and you caught my attention.• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite -
My heart,
it's roughly delicate.by Horrific Hollis 63 lines, 8 comments, on Sep 18 4:42 PM• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite -
My Damn Rose / I deafen me against your call / I close my mind to thoughts of you / I dam your all but still your spell / will manage toby billpoet 27 lines, 212 comments, on Jun 10 2:14 PM 2007. In I have no hope to cast aside• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Deeper i sleep,like an impromptu dance,its rythem careless but sighted,at times overwhelming.
I dream of your beauty,carrresed by memorys of you,your soft velvet touch,the warmth of your silken smile.by therapybrent 4 lines, 2 comments, on Mar 20 1:32 PM. In love• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Seems like just yesterday
I spent every waking moment with you,• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite -
The days have turned into months, and months into years.
My last memories of you still to this day, put me to tears.by marvo 40 lines, 4 comments, on Sep 20 7:09 PM• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite -
"Inside this bag you will find"
"All My Love for You"• Not viewed by judge. -
I was with someone and I thought I could never love someone until I met this one guy. I love him more than I've ever loved anyone. He has sby spot49 45 lines, 2 comments, on May 3 8:34 PM• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite
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For better, for worse
For richer, for poorerby Blue-Rose Beauty 27 lines, 43 comments, on May 19 5:56 PM• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite -
& slowly
but surelyby Shatter.Me.Fast 27 lines, 2 comments, on Aug 22 7:58 PM• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite -
by Shatter.Me.Fast 38 lines, 1 comment, on Aug 4 2:46 PM• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Now, I don’t like to speak clichés, but there’s not much else I can say. And if God’s ways work in mystery, then our ways should be plain..by Black JaPanther 18 lines, 8 comments, on Sep 20 11:57 AM. In Angst, Contest, Dark, Life, Love, Lyrics, Pain, Personal, Sad, Spiritual, Thoughts• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I don't even know why I miss you
Maybe it is the way you sucked• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite -
What would you count as a mistake,
Falling in love and then heartbreak,• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Oops, not to MY ex. To a different ex.
by Phoetiquette 10 lines, 4 comments, on Sep 9 11:05 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Here's a letter to you....by spiritual wolf 26 lines, 1 comment, on Sep 25 10:35 AM• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite
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She was so lost in him
She didn’t know how• Not viewed by judge. -
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I ask to be forgive each and every day ,
But im afraid of what she will say;• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite -
You'll see me in the window and you'll kick me out the door
We'll have a fight and I'll call you a broken down whore• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite -
by just sam 25 lines, 1 comment, on Mar 20 8:44 PM• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite
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today has brought back so much pain.
today he made me re-live his good-bye.• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I'm tired and cold
I can't sleep• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Everything has changed
But• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I don’t think it matters that I’m at home. It’s the fact that she’s not here that’s bugging me. I could say I’m agonizing over the fact thaby sidaul 24 lines, on Nov 7 1:55 AM• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I pray for forgiveness
For all I put you through• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite -
A fairy tale with a thunderous bolt
struck from the skies apart• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Harkin, loves end
Thats what i said• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite -
the man in the mirror,
soviet star upon his chest,by sergei nabokov 38 lines, 1 comment, on Nov 8 11:44 AM• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I invite you to breakfast.
To be nice.• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite -
one day after breakfast i left the milk on the counter
i regret that day because that was the day that both our milk and our love curdledby lil emo girl 16 lines, 1 comment, on Apr 18 12:35 AM• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Why did I try to ignore everything
and yet at the same time cope with it by cruel childishness?• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite -
by Allyson.Lashae. 34 lines, 2 comments, on Aug 28 2:48 AM. In Heartbreak, Lost Love, Love, Thoughts, Life, Dark, Angry, Sad, Pain• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I kept my elbows painted to my waist
so your arm could never snake around me.by stef-witt 38 lines, 3 comments, on Nov 2 7:13 PM• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite -
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Sitting in class,
i'm thinking of youby JustSam 16 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 6 10:07 AM• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite -
memories of a careful mind
fragile in the subconcious• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite -
It's nice when
you see someoneby DeadlyTurnip 39 lines, 2 comments, on Nov 4 5:04 PM 2007. In Love• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite -
she hides her pain in layers of gold
with nobody to help her cope• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite
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looks like the lesbians have it ... lets me out I'm afraid.
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souless greed for lust
my soul my hart my love
my bitter souless partner did i ever do to you what you have done to me, Am I this crawl that you that you have to cawere on your phone that evil text thatfractued my hart and ripped my soul you took from me what i could never have taken from you and yet you wonder why my eye's are hard pebbled green. Now I ask you why did you tell me what my hart wanted to here and not mean it a million times I ask myself did you mean anything you said even when your with her I see you looking at me that crafty smile that you place on your devil face. Why do you do this to me even now when we are far apart with you right next to me and her why did you tell me that you did not love her do you want me to be the way i used to be with only a razor for company that reached out to me when I peirced the soft skin of mine and yet I wonder I you just using me just to prove a point. what happened to that careing man that you had once been why have you replaced it with a minipulated child. that will never grow up. Are you not a shamed of what you have done dont you not have no respect for those once happy memories that we created as we kissed so pasionatly. I look at you nad think to myself how could I have been so blinded by your souless greed for lust
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