OK... For this contest... I am just looking for all different kinds of pre-writes OR new writes... Don't matter ... Can be ANYTHING! I will comment on every single entry. I am thinking about making this a rounds contest... So make sure you enter......
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on October 16
- Rewards: Gold: 400, Honorable mention: 5 people
- Final notes: I had alot of great entries on this one. Congrats too all the winners.
Contest Winners
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I'm heading home
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After so many times of being hurt
my heart has finally gave upby Suffer-in-silence 13 lines, 4 comments, on Oct 3 6:25 PM. In Personal, Sad, Pain
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I snuck out of the house
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To whom it may concern,
My life feels like its over.by Leanna-bean 28 lines, 10 comments, on Jun 22 6:40 PM. In Thoughts, Lost in thought, Personal, Life, Depression
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Blood runs through these viens
That I'm used to everydayby Isolatedsouls17 87 lines, 4 comments, on Aug 26 3:09 PM. In Life, Pain, Personal, Sad, Dark, Contemporary, Society, Thoughts• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
I was too young to remember
the way you drankby AllenPoeIncarnate 68 lines, 1 comment, on Dec 10 10:02 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
by Princess Derge 16 lines, 6 comments, on Sep 24 4:22 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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behind my many layers
is a girl you never knew• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
come home tonight,come stay the night
Its empty and echoes your name• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Is it love?
Or just another fickle?• Commented on by judge. [remove] -
A soldier's dogtags
A young girl's heart• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
In a barren dead forest, where silence resonates broken only by the incesant cackle of ravens
Lie the ruins of a once glorious castle, lon• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
your sad eyes
haunting everything within• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
but my wretched mind
won't stop it's aching
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I am what I am
Nothing can change thatby One Step Behind 14 lines, 3 comments, on Oct 7 8:16 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
my father died this week.
i've hated him for years.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
she spends her days alone
she's broken and full of pain• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
you sit in my mind
in the middle of the floor• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Nibblin' on a Big Mac
Right out of the sack,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
I wrote this for a loved one. I hope that she understands what i feel for her, and i hope that she will enjoy more than words can be expressed.by Sounds-Like-This 48 lines, 7 comments, on Jul 4 11:40 AM. In Love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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As i lay here on the floor,
my thoughts of you are evermore.by Sounds-Like-This 66 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 10 12:35 AM. In Unclassifiable• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
You give me someone to talk to,
And help me through my days.by Sounds-Like-This 28 lines, 3 comments, on Sep 27 8:44 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Candy coated rain drops,
Are falling from the skies.by Sounds-Like-This 33 lines, 5 comments, on Sep 29 9:14 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Outside in the autumn fields,
Where springs have lost and summer's yield.by Sounds-Like-This 23 lines, 5 comments, on Oct 3 8:25 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
We were close friends,
Though she did not knowby Lionheart 63 lines, 91 comments, on Dec 11 8:07 PM 2007. In Love, Sad, Friendship, Lost love, unrequited• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Sitting here watching the rain
running down the window paneby troubleinthenight 30 lines, 10 comments, on Aug 16 11:22 PM. In Life• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Little by little by little by high,
The freckled mongoose flew to the skyby Tranquillis-P.T.R. 22 lines, 2 comments, on Sep 30 11:49 PM. In Humor, Nature, My own style, Weird• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Those who abuse power sit from a lofty precipice,
a high overreaching cliff in the darkness...• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Passionate nights.
Whispering without the lights.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Last night we went to bed all horny,
Cause you already turned me on,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
I speak this out into the abyss; the gulf that has come between us
I'm breaking down walls, only to build bridges...by Never-Better25 12 lines, 16 comments, on Sep 28 12:46 PM. In My own style, Personal, Longing, Bisexual, Lesbian• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Blood dripping on the floor• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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Hoping you will never leave
Hoping you will stayby VampireKitty- 14 lines, 9 comments, on Apr 30 1:26 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] - Error: Unable to find finalist item 5773975, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
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Stick and stones may break her bones
but words can make her bleed insideby starving4perfection 19 lines, 17 comments, on Oct 8 5:16 PM. In Sad, Personal, Pain, Angst, Thoughts, Eating Disorder, Anorexia• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] - Error: Unable to find finalist item 5773139, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
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i would swim the largest ocean
climb over the highest mountainby foreveryourslove 25 lines, 8 comments, on Oct 6 2:48 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
i have neveR wanted you
Eventually you stop callingby foreveryourslove 26 lines, 29 comments, on Sep 30 12:53 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
a pleasant reminder of mindfullness, and the beauty of our imaginations• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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i want to die
i hate my lifeby serenity silvermoon 16 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 24 12:44 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
i will be back soonby serenity silvermoon 12 lines, 3 comments, on Sep 14 5:05 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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you were my friend
you were the cat of my dreamsby foreveryourslove 24 lines, 5 comments, on Aug 27 7:38 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
lets light a candle,
lets cast a spell,by serenity silvermoon 16 lines, 2 comments, on Aug 9 4:11 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
You go right and I go left,
I listen to your footsteps and watch mine in pale moonlight.by Rasha Dark-Panther 64 lines, 3 comments, on Dec 7 1:05 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
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by Spectre of Serenity 23 lines, 16 comments, on Sep 29 3:06 PM. In general• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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You're scared of letting go
but you already know,by halfpast4ever 31 lines, 7 comments, on Oct 4 6:25 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Oh well, my heart’s broke- inside there’s a big hole,by Sweet-Sins 32 lines, 5 comments, on Jul 21 4:19 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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As I walked across the school corridor on my way out,
The little girl inside me decided to turn around.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Black Woman
strong intelligent• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Blood running down my arm
Dripping off my fingertipsby VampireKitty- 13 lines, 11 comments, on Jun 11 8:18 AM 2008. In Love, Teenage thinking, Teen issues, Depressed, Emo• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
i try to figure what your about,
now that i know you, i don't think i could go on without.by savemysoul 42 lines, 19 comments, on Oct 11 4:26 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
The moon's light breaths
The terror to life• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
Entries [357]
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A gothic bride in crimson
walking down• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Paint brush
scrapes colour, oh what colour onby OhNoChastity 53 lines, 2 comments, on Sep 17 7:27 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Out of the foggy forest
he takes a stride,by AllenPoeIncarnate 45 lines, 1 comment, on Oct 7 12:28 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Fishing on the edge of a small boat.
Casting the line out each timeby AllenPoeIncarnate 31 lines, 3 comments, on Sep 25 12:25 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
This is the sole lesson
of my soul’s confession.by AllenPoeIncarnate 35 lines, 4 comments, on Sep 22 5:34 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
this land is strange, alien it seems.
Mountains so large they surpass the sky's seam.by AllenPoeIncarnate 24 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 25 12:23 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
college drop out
teenage junkieby AllenPoeIncarnate 44 lines, 4 comments, on Jan 10 3:44 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
an old man sits on a stool;
wrinkles tell of his acquired wisdom.by AllenPoeIncarnate 29 lines, 2 comments, on Jan 3 4:12 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Roses are red
And violets are blue• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
love is love
until someoneby Suffer-in-silence 19 lines, 5 comments, on Aug 24 12:20 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Street lamps bring light to the darkness
Where hidden in the shadow there lurksby AllenPoeIncarnate 32 lines, 3 comments, on Jan 3 1:24 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
There is this girl I know
She thinks she is so freaking greatby Leanna-bean 15 lines, 9 comments, on Sep 3 7:07 PM. In Contest• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
In my mind I can twist reality to how I want it
In my mind reality becomes something of the past• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
little girl
with such joy in her eyes• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
brooklyn is like a river
never stopping• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by Leanna-bean 34 lines, 5 comments, on Aug 26 1:24 PM. In Personal• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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You
are still; like rippling stoneby OhNoChastity 32 lines, 4 comments, on Oct 7 7:21 PM• Commented on by judge. -
A poem for my wife to be...xoxox
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Throw a limb can any fool.
One who has no reasoningby AllenPoeIncarnate 42 lines, 1 comment, on Jan 9 7:00 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Can't think of a poem..
but i know i like cheese,by gypsywitch0187 10 lines, 1 comment, on Oct 7 7:22 PM• Commented on by judge. -
Casting its mesmerized nonflickering gaze above
It stares in lovelorn ecstasy from dusk to dawn• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Ruby always sat around in sunlight
Drinking tea from orange china cupsby Green Stars 24 lines, 8 comments, on Oct 3 10:39 AM. In Fantasy, Hope, Life, Love, Thoughts, Sad, My own style• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
god shine o please shine
weve come to places now where we say one word and its a crime• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
In this world all hearts are for rent
But hers was soldby hend shaheen 44 lines, 16 comments, on Aug 26 10:01 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
5:00 a.m., a scratching wakes me
at the window, and continues.by Judith Chandler 14 lines, 9 comments, on Sep 16 1:14 PM. In Contest• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
A puddle of ink formsWhere my quill has been left to restUpon a paper devoid of my lifeblood And therefore lacking life The eyes do not bli• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Your eyes
So glossy• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
They bow to you with no resistance
You are all they live and thrive• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Chained to a temporary home.
More and more everyday she becomes a drone.by AllenPoeIncarnate 25 lines, 1 comment, on Jan 17 3:00 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Fractured
We have become• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Once he had a home.
by AllenPoeIncarnate 52 lines, 1 comment, on Jan 27 11:18 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I wept a lot tell my tears dried
Over those who were injured and those who diedby hend shaheen 33 lines, 5 comments, on Aug 19 1:23 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I hide inside reality
Wirling world around• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I told you you’re more beautiful than the moon
I found I was wrong way too soonby hend shaheen 40 lines, 15 comments, on Oct 2 5:09 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Bleed for me [A song]
How dare you lie to my face?by AmberWearsPrada 39 lines, 1 comment, on Aug 29 7:33 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Tainted snow, bloody tears..by vampireintherain 33 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 9 9:35 PM. In sadness• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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You cover my flaws
So perfectly• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
But it's not that great
but its all I got to give...• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
A white room filled with colors outside our spectrum
Paint I cannot describe despite my best intentions to.by bam03c 30 lines, 2 comments, on Oct 7 8:56 PM. In I will not catagorize my work, that is for you to do.• Commented on by judge. -
As I stand with the wind blowing around me,
The leaves spin and twist through the air.by RainShatteredDreams 23 lines, 6 comments, on Oct 7 6:41 PM. In Contest• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
As soon as the car pulled up i knew something was wrong.
I looked at my baby brothers face as he asked "Katie, why are there some many people in front of our house."by RainShatteredDreams 16 lines, 2 comments, on Oct 4 6:42 PM. In Contest• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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