no rules just enter
i need to read!!!!!!!
oh to as many poems you want to read and comment em ....pease id be so much happier for your opinion id like to reach 1000 poems soo enter them all and invite your friends please!!!!! lots of hugs and kisses on cheecks
jasmine
i need to read!!!!!!!
oh to as many poems you want to read and comment em ....pease id be so much happier for your opinion id like to reach 1000 poems soo enter them all and invite your friends please!!!!! lots of hugs and kisses on cheecks
jasmine
Closed for judging
- Closed for judging on November 9
- Rewards: Gold: 600, Silver: 300, Bronze: 220, Honorable mention: 5 people
Preliminary Finalists
As the editor reads entries, favorites are added to this list. (24)-
by runforrestrun 88 lines, 1 comment, on Sep 28 10:16 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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by PolarbearOpapatika 31 lines, 14 comments, on Sep 9 2:57 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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Mother, I beg you let that needle go!
My parched lips seek to feed again.by Travis Colon 8 lines, 12 comments, on Sep 16 11:11 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Stick and stones may break her bones
but words can make her bleed insideby starving4perfection 19 lines, 17 comments, on Oct 8 5:16 PM. In Sad, Personal, Pain, Angst, Thoughts, Eating Disorder, Anorexia• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
I come from you.
You and me, we are the same.by Marjorie Marie 10 lines, 4 comments, on Oct 6 6:58 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
she blew bubbles with her strawberry gum, popping them with each new brush stroke of her nail polish. cherry-bomb seemed to be the new in-c• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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by Antebellum 32 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 19 10:00 PM. In Noguest• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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If you sit for an hour or three by yourself upon the beach
The moon seems to slowly fall and the clouds seem in your reach
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The glass window was painted blue
I no longer make myself bleedby serenity silvermoon 10 lines, 5 comments, on Sep 8 7:29 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
"Death may take the ones we love, but it cannot take our memories."
by serenity silvermoon 78 lines, 10 comments, on Aug 31 8:25 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
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She thinks that no one understands of what she feels.
That nothing makes senseby The-punk-princess 28 lines, 13 comments, on Jul 17 12:32 PM. In Sad, Pain, Dark, Hope, My own style, Dedication, Friendship• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
The eyes of her,
Express her life.by xXShadowKissedXx 14 lines, 2 comments, on Oct 5 2:28 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Here I am,
Lonely again.by xXShadowKissedXx 19 lines, 7 comments, on Sep 21 1:59 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
I's just easier to blame me.
I'm the first vulnerable thing to life....by xXShadowKissedXx 17 lines, 1 comment, on Aug 17 12:32 PM. In Sad, Personal, Pain, Life, Thoughts, Teen issues, Teenage thinking, Depressed• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Time may heal all wounds,
But a small slit takes not long to kill.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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by Fallen-Thumper 12 lines, 19 comments, on Sep 20 2:24 PM. In Personal• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Tossing and turning in my heart
An undying love for you,by KnightOfTheRose 14 lines, 20 comments, on Oct 6 6:58 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Poppies painted in scarlet tones of passion
Sway in the rhythm of the draughtby smitaanand 29 lines, 8 comments, on Oct 6 12:16 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Alas, my dear friend, we meet again.
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deaths whispered invitation to dance
forcing reminiscence, reflection• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
He hit the ground running,
His star was brightly shiningby The-punk-princess 41 lines, 11 comments, on Jul 24 3:42 PM. In Lyrics, Thoughts, Life, My own style, Family• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Lord you know I’ve been hearing the bell toll
that bells been ringing since I don’t know when• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Sometimes life can pull you down
You can feel like no one wants you around• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Do I hear a spiteful voice-
of which silence causes great rejoice?by Travis Colon 18 lines, 4 comments, on Sep 22 11:07 PM• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite -
You kissed my lips, you touched my hair
You held my hand, you were always there• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I fell for you when I first saw you
No wait, it was your magic act• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Hark! This place is much to bright!
Crawl! Crawl!by Travis Colon 21 lines, 7 comments, on Sep 10 1:10 AM• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Watch those Eagles in the sky
Dropping fire from so up high.by Travis Colon 30 lines, 13 comments, on Sep 10 1:07 AM• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I’m sorry, sorry, sorry
I’m sorry, sorry, sorry• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite -
"Let me tell you where she went.
Your mother's love is sex for rent.by Travis Colon 18 lines, 10 comments, on Sep 10 1:06 AM• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite -
O-P-P---O-S-I-T-E
O-P-P---O-S-I-T-E• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite -
"Come with we; We'll fly away,
And walk again some other day.by Travis Colon 18 lines, 15 comments, on Sep 8 2:54 AM• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I miss you
I miss the way we used to be• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I am War and I am Peace.
Give Me Time and Time shall cease.by Travis Colon 16 lines, 8 comments, on Sep 8 2:15 AM• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I don’t wanna love you
Any way other than I do• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Let us remember the thrill of our fears.
Our lusts and our passions that drove us to tears.by Travis Colon 8 lines, 14 comments, on Sep 7 1:04 PM• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite -
You sent me a message at lunch time
Saying you’d come over after school• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Welcome to my life stalker
This is where I live• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I don’t know if I can do this
It’s so hard, too harsh• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I’m not even as loud as you think
You don’t even care, you go and yell back• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I am what I want to be,
But not what i can beby Misskaoz 35 lines, 5 comments, on Oct 6 9:32 PM• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite -
A Cereal Killers Wish List
Chapter 4 In Darkened Lair (The Asylum Orderlies)by BluesMan 253 lines, 8 comments, on Aug 13 4:31 PM
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In the year of our Lord 1841
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ashen tears seep from her
sleep crusted eyes as sheby Kathraina 17 lines, 6 comments, on Sep 21 9:10 PM• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite -
June in Florence
when the roses blush• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Play it like a card game
Making’ all the right moves• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite -
she whispered lullabies in his ears to hide the fear crawling under his dirt encrusted skin. the moon held a certain pallor against their s• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Apathy envies the Moon and the Sun-
Heavenly bodies at rest on their routes.by Travis Colon 21 lines, 16 comments, on Sep 26 9:58 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by PolarbearOpapatika 27 lines, 7 comments, on Sep 13 1:56 AM• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite
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he tasted of fur and rhubarb on the tip of his tongue. i guess his aftershave couldn't penetrate the walls of his mouth. i still don't know• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite
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you painted thick hues of life across my alabaster flesh
as rose vines crept down my arms, to my sensitive fi• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite -
florescent under new moon's glaze,
we hid in darkened passageways to paint the walls with the essence of life• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite -
It’s a long long road
And I’m running, running home• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite -
he was my September ~ both heat and fall leaves blowing by on a whistling breeze
by Kathraina 16 lines, 7 comments, on Sep 28 9:34 PM• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite -
The Nazi soilder-
by PolarbearOpapatika 43 lines, 12 comments, on Oct 3 11:07 AM• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite -
When you sung my name
When I first saw your smile• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite
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200 enteries thats a recorddddddd!!!
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almost 300 lol
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hehee.. i put in the ones that made it 1000!!!
i put in looooooooads. i wanna win!!
hehee.
it takes foooorrreeeevvvveeerrrr to judge. -.-
honestly,. I keep getting distracted.. actually, I should be juidging now.. sooo,, im gonna go....
byyyyeeeesss
p.s. good luck judging!!
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almost 300 lol
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almost 300 lol
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i entered a few... good luck reading them all..i hosted one like this and got over 800 entries.
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lol reading is the easy part its the commenting ill have issues with
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Are you planning on commenting them all?
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yeppers its a celebration contest for my bday and i would love comments on mine.
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Cool I'll get right on that! i love comments =]
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Not entries
Just for you to read, if you have time.
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http://allpoetry.com/poem/2307093
http://allpoetry.com/poem/2269516
http://allpoetry.com/poem/2269282
GBU,
MDJ. † -
I shall certainly try to comment on some of your poems at some time in the near future... However, at present I am under considerable stress - both personal and work-related, and I do not think it appropriate to assess people's work unless I am in a relaxed and receptive mood.
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its a ok i just gott out of hospital 2 days ago from being ill .. i cant wait thou for your opinion!
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That's a lot of entries per person!
I don't think I have that many GOOD poems! lol. I'll enter what I can though
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i want them allll!!!! hehe this is just to read i will award to the ones i hink are awsome and unsuspected even the ones that you would think suck are the ones that lighten my soul...hehe bestest of luck to ya!
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WOW
that's alot of entries you have
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So, what did I do wrong...
...to have my two pieces removed? DQ'd? Just wondering. Thanks, very much.
Sincerely,
Marvin J. †
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