Express the pain you've felt from a male or female betraying you tell it in a story like matter sort of similar to what atually happened. PLEASE RHYME its more fun. doesnt have to be real but that always makes it easier to write.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on October 7
- Rewards: Gold: 600, Silver: 150, Bronze: 50, Honorable mention: 2 people
- Final notes: it was real tough between the top two. and number three was so well written and powerful that i could leave it out. very good job to everyone and thank you all
Contest Winners
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Once there was a time when we use to kiss,
And our bodies would ache for each others touch.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
/ / Should such a thought ever cross your mind / A politic distance I kept from you / Now you drift apart / But once it was he who filled your life / You must know after all these years / What has changed your• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
Gold trophy winner
Silver trophy winner
Bronze trophy winner
Honorable mention
Entries [18]
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Its aching
as the love inside roseby Why so serious 15 lines, 1 comment, on Oct 7 9:32 AM• Commented on by judge. -
At first I refused the reality
I lived in a dream not wanting to accept• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Hoped as always i would see a better day,
until heartlessly you just took my breath away.by fatizeh 35 lines, 8 comments, on May 30 3:54 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
She took my heart And then let go• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Barren hearts on nights of thunder
Just view the dark to which they blunder• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
As I walked across the school corridor on my way out,
The little girl inside me decided to turn around.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I have been replaced
That much I can tell• Commented on by judge. -
Do I hear a spiteful voice-
of which silence causes great rejoice?by Travis Colon 18 lines, 4 comments, on Sep 22 11:07 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Any rules on language or what type of betrayal?
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nope
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