Your best prewrite-

Rules are simple
1)Give me a prewrite. Your best!
2)No erotica
3)No glorifying rape (I've seen it! YUCK!)
4)Has to be a poem

Advice
1)I hate stickycaps
2)I dislike a majority of "woe-is-me" writes- depression: ok, suicide note because bf broke up with you? eh...
3)I dislike most rhyme schemes(if they seem forced)
4)I really like free-style
(Those are only suggestions. Think you made sticky-caps work for you? Prove it to me.A breakup really make you suicidal? Tell me why. Think your rhyme scheme rocks? Enter it. Hate free-style? Enter a structured. I am only warning that I dislike a MAJORITY of those first 3... but I obviously cannot say for a fact I dislike ALL!)

I comment on all poems before judging- its the least I can do for you all sharing your words with me!



Okay...

ready.
set.
ENTER!

Contest is Over

• Contest was judged on November 7
• Rewards: Gold: 400
• Final notes:
  Congrats to all

Contest Winners

1. Her Collection Of Dignity

   by Mr Jigs 13 lines, 12 comments, on Aug 1 4:42 AM. In Angst, Contemporary, Contest, Life, Love, Other, Pain, Loss, Sadness, Lost love
   Gold trophy winner

   • Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
2. you are frail.

   by lyrebird 27 lines, 46 comments, on Jun 19 11:16 AM. In Personal, Dedication, noguest
   Silver trophy winner

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3. Those blueberries.

   by perfectsunset 29 lines, 8 comments, on Sep 5 8:14 PM. In Thoughts, Life, Sad, noguest
   Bronze trophy winner

   • Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]

Entries [22]

• Borderline

  Watch how the borderline depression
  tears the heart apart

  by Max Alexandersson 14 lines, 5 comments, on Sep 25 12:15 PM

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• love is never just a cliche (gold)

  by Aussie Gypsy 30 lines, 10 comments, on Oct 2 6:25 AM. In Contest, Thoughts

  • Not viewed by judge. Prewrite
• He Stood There...

  I remember him.
  

  by ImOnlyATraveler 40 lines, 3 comments, on Sep 15 9:16 PM. In Personal, Thoughts, Life, Sad, Pain, Dark, Angst, Sadness, Depression, Anger

  • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
• Following Fools

  A Button is pushed and the sirens they roar
  the troops are gathered, we are heading for war

  by FransSteyn 20 lines, 13 comments, on Apr 4 4:03 AM. In Thoughts, Sad, Personal

  • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
• nightmares

  by Acqua Mossa 9 lines, 7 comments, on Oct 6 2:24 AM

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• Be Baby Be

  I said I can't wait 'til he can talk
  She said don't wish his life away

  by marandah 15 lines, 11 comments, on Sep 25 12:35 AM. In Personal, Life

  • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
• Holly's Smile Will No More See The Sun

  So happy in her place,
  She did so well in school,

  by freddiepoe 33 lines, 13 comments, on Oct 2 1:54 PM. In Death, Tribute, Change, Sad, Society

  • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
• The Beginning Darkness

  A stray bullet; the child is now alone. / Her mother, searching frantically for her. / The world falls into darkness about her. /

  by Ich bin das Ender 16 lines, 11 comments, on Jul 13 3:31 AM 2007. In Dark, Spiritual, Pain, Hope, Angst, Sadness, Death

  • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
• Our Fake Firefly

  by Mango Memories 16 lines, 7 comments, on Sep 30 8:48 AM

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• The Mask

  The mask lay upon my face.
  You see what only I allow.

  by Only-Speak-YourMind 38 lines, 10 comments, on Sep 21 3:42 PM. In Contest, Dark, Death, Pain, Other, Anger, Humanity

  • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
• Cunning Mistress Dejected

  Quiet nights bloody wrapped up in clover
  I there had a dream to sprucely pour over

  by spideracer 38 lines, 7 comments, on Sep 13 10:59 PM. In Dark, Life, Society

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• me, an old house

  demolishers descend upon me with chisel and crowbars
  strike me where i am vulnerable most

  by ratnaprabha raykar 16 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 3 7:12 AM

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• The Majestic

  The storm of virtue
  Alarms the youth's sentimental dreams.

  by Beanbiscuit 16 lines, on Sep 17 2:28 AM. In Thoughts, Romance, Abstract, Freewrite, Contest

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• Ode to Echo

  She haunts the alleys of the solivagant caves
  Like the solitary shadow of the solitude

  by smitaanand 48 lines, 3 comments, on Sep 29 12:20 PM

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• Touch You...

  I wish I was the rain, cause in my own crazy way,
  

  by Harun Abdulkareem 50 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 2 1:32 AM

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• we once were

  I've got my head in the clouds and my back in the sheets.
  

  by Eddie Ecstasy 9 lines, 5 comments, on Oct 1 4:05 AM

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• The Dream of Life

  Surrender myself to darkling sleep, a world of dreams and memories,
  Recalling now those hands that clasp and with love those lips that mee

  by justafeller 47 lines, 6 comments, on Aug 4 6:38 PM. In Spiritual, Thoughts, Weird, Life

  • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
• 3 a.m.

  by thasource 13 lines, 2 comments, on Aug 5 6:47 PM

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• That Day

  I lay here beside you night after night
  Reliving the happenings of that terrible day.

  by darlee77 56 lines, 5 comments, on Sep 11 8:34 PM. In Abuse, Angst, Hope, Life, Love, Pain, Spiritual

  • Viewed by judge. Prewrite

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  perfectsunset
  November 7
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  thank you so much for the bronze
  & for hosting
  
  congrats to all winners

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