prompt: suicide.
what I'm looking for: substance, oblivion, drifting, noise, the sky, disintegration, infinity, symphonies, a boundless ache in the chest, movement, silence, leaves down the street, driveways, Moonlight Sonata, the entwine of mystery and beauty.
Think Sylvia Plath, Ernest Hemingway, Hunter S. Thompson, The Virgin Suicides.
I want birds and beasts.
Rules:
No flaunting your attention whore spider-web.
Nothing about the abyss, please.
Oh, and suicide isn't revenge on the world so save your angst and your razor-blade kisses on the wrist and liek {b}R0;k;eN= ♥ for the diary you carry around in your backpack, secretly hoping to drop it and someone will read it and understand your "problems" and realize how fucking special and unique and beautiful you are. [by the way, asshole, you aren't.]
FREEVERSE AND PROSE ONLY.
IMAGERY.
If you fail to follow the rules, you probably won't receive a desired comment. That being said, don't whine to me because you're a rule breaker.
fill my veins with your last breath.
what I'm looking for: substance, oblivion, drifting, noise, the sky, disintegration, infinity, symphonies, a boundless ache in the chest, movement, silence, leaves down the street, driveways, Moonlight Sonata, the entwine of mystery and beauty.
Think Sylvia Plath, Ernest Hemingway, Hunter S. Thompson, The Virgin Suicides.
I want birds and beasts.
Rules:
No flaunting your attention whore spider-web.
Nothing about the abyss, please.
Oh, and suicide isn't revenge on the world so save your angst and your razor-blade kisses on the wrist and liek {b}R0;k;eN= ♥ for the diary you carry around in your backpack, secretly hoping to drop it and someone will read it and understand your "problems" and realize how fucking special and unique and beautiful you are. [by the way, asshole, you aren't.]
FREEVERSE AND PROSE ONLY.
IMAGERY.
If you fail to follow the rules, you probably won't receive a desired comment. That being said, don't whine to me because you're a rule breaker.
fill my veins with your last breath.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on November 12
- Rewards: Gold: 1000, Silver: 500, Bronze: 250, Honorable mention: 2 people
- Final notes: I don't have any "final notes" but I guess it's required to put something down. I guess "thanks for entering" works. even though I left that at the end of every comment...
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my lamp the only one alight
besides the stairwell between apartmentsby darc347 29 lines, 3 comments, on Oct 5 10:11 PM• Commented on by judge. -
Sitting on the concerete, my feet sit aloft
So many broken mirrors and doors.• Commented on by judge. -
Let's take a trip
Where?by twistedoreo0804 72 lines, 1 comment, on Oct 31 3:40 PM• Commented on by judge. -
by Domine Pestilentia 15 lines, 1 comment, on Oct 31 6:18 PM• Commented on by judge.
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I love you. Marry me
"Oh, and suicide isn't revenge on the world so save your angst and your razor-blade kisses on the wrist and liek {b}R0;k;eN= ♥ for the diary you carry around in your backpack, secretly hoping to drop it and someone will read it and understand your "problems" and realize how fucking special and unique and beautiful you are. [by the way, asshole, you aren't.] "
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you=awesome ♥
i second the motion.
to quote my 12-year-old alter-ego, xxxIslitmywristsxxx:
"lyk omGz im s3w dEep n 3mO cuz i slyT m3h riisTz wit pL@sTiC sP0oNz..."
what a joke. seriously, there are people out there with real issues, so the whiny wankers should give it up and stop tarnishing the dignity of those who actually need help. anyone who is offended by this can go cry too.
bookmarked.
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I shalth try me best, love, I get what you mean now, about how you were scared shit would come pouring in :]
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you got it, babe.
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I have a prewrite that fits the prompt. http://allpoetry.com/poem/5697123
is there any way I could enter it? -
hahahah. you're a ass. =3 LOVE IT. <3
Wish I could write a poem for your contest....maybe a few years ago I could have. It's almos sad, the progress we make; my mind doesn't work the way your contest calls for. However, this is one box I would love to try to fit into.
I do look forward to the winner though.
Cool idea, cooler name.
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