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Goin' Against Your Mind

When I was a kid, I saw a light
floating high above the trees one night.

Thought twas an alien-
turned out to be just God.

If you're not sure who not to believe
who has better reasons to decieve?

http://www.purevolume.com/builttospill
(^cause there are no good videos for this song, sorry guys. It's for reference anyway, really.)


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(P.S. See 'P.S.' in this contest --> http://allpoetry.com/contest/2462503)

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on October 19
  • Rewards: Gold: 400
  • Final notes:
    thanks guys.

    its an interesting thought no?
    this whole "God" thing seems like it could be kinda off.
    and this whole "live by your own rules" is iffy as well.
    It comes down to motivations.
    why you do what you want.

    we want to follow one of the two, but the other goes against what our minds say.

    I guess its up to you do decide what side of that line you're on.

Contest Winners

  1. Disorder
    by piggyback 34 lines, 3 comments, on Oct 5 3:58 PM. In Personal, Adult
    Gold trophy winner
    • Viewed by judge. [remove]
  2. murky waters deep.
    lost in murky waters deep
    where i can't breathe and i can't sleep
    by SpydurPoet 18 lines, 3 comments, on Oct 14 7:35 PM. In noguest, contest, self evaluation, spiritual
    Silver trophy winner
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