I want as much pain as possible...
And I know that for some people is hard to write poems when you have pressure on making sure you write about an EXACT topic so I'm not going to put that pressure on you
Rules:
Sad
DoNtWrItElIkeThIs
Make as long as possible (its ok if its short but your most likely to win if its longer)
Make the background as dark and painful as possiable and...have fun with it love you lots
xxx,
Kaylee (Scene Queen----)
And I know that for some people is hard to write poems when you have pressure on making sure you write about an EXACT topic so I'm not going to put that pressure on you
Rules:
Sad
DoNtWrItElIkeThIs
Make as long as possible (its ok if its short but your most likely to win if its longer)
Make the background as dark and painful as possiable and...have fun with it love you lots
xxx,
Kaylee (Scene Queen----)
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on November 7
- Rewards: Gold: 400
- Final notes: congrats to all
Contest Winners
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Forced into solitude by my own insanities.
The pain of heartbreak and loss.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
Gold trophy winner
Silver trophy winner
Bronze trophy winner
Entries [61]
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my Grandpa died today and i just found out. im crying• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Being without you,
Is like living without a heart,by Love Is Heartless 29 lines, 28 comments, on Jun 4 7:55 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Wafting through the silence
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Never got to cry
Never got to laughby Blue-Rose Beauty 33 lines, 32 comments, on Jun 12 9:17 AM. In Abortion• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by NoseRingGirl 44 lines, 17 comments, on May 14 5:05 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Watch those Eagles in the sky
Dropping fire from so up high.by Travis Colon 30 lines, 13 comments, on Sep 10 1:07 AM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Lonely Little Ocean Rain Cloud
I feel so deep so full of emotion with so much to give lifted right of the ocean. Not knowing where I may end up, as the wind blows anything goes. I have so much to give I am overflowing with loby dammneighbor 2 lines, on Aug 15 5:51 PM. In Thoughts, Pain, Nature, Friendship, Depression, Sadness, Depressed
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she keeps trying to breathe but hes holding on....by missin-my-Marine 82 lines, 3 comments, on Feb 21 1:46 PM 2007. In angst• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I never realy got to know her,
Everyone tells me she was beautifull,• Viewed by judge. -
These are the things I go through,
just so i'm able to forget you.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
God, how could you
Let this happen to her?• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I'm my mommy's angel,
That's what she said to me.by LovingAngelForever 43 lines, 1 comment, on Sep 17 6:56 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
What you perceive is my wetness
is just another opening for my soul to cry.
by Ziola 42 lines, 57 comments, on Oct 19 11:06 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
the lies that you tell yourself,
do they make you feel like someone else?• Viewed by judge. -
you sit there
you stare at meby foreveryourslove 40 lines, 13 comments, on Sep 28 2:17 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
The clock has frozen on 9:15 for hours, and the clouds tower their congregating against the icy blue,
the shadows swim across my face and a waterfall has leaked along my eyelashes, clinging for dear life against my irises, sby LaCkOfCoLoUr 24 lines, 1 comment, on Sep 28 5:51 AM. In Pain• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
In the shade of tragedy
She shines like a visionaryby Njwalker 37 lines, on Oct 6 2:48 AM• Viewed by judge. -
its so much easier to open old wounds than to keep them hidden I've realised. Or I think so...• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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This was written as a letter to a family who lost their little one year old girl this morning. 7/22/08 at approximately 0730 this morning.by UnManned4Ever 39 lines, 6 comments, on Jul 22 11:03 AM 2008. In Thoughts, Life, Sad, Dark, Pain, Death, Longing, Sadness, Message, Loss• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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The underground is creepy,
its always dark and gloomy,by emogurl101 31 lines, on Sep 30 7:44 AM. In Dark, My own style, Death, Lost in thought, Hate, Angry• Viewed by judge. -
There are three words I fail to believe in
Their constant use has made their meaning thin,by moy 68 lines, 12 comments, on Aug 17 3:46 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Dear [Dezzy26],
by AloneForever- 77 lines, 2 comments, on Sep 27 6:54 AM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
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weird and prose-like.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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You need to start going to church is what you said
How the hell am i suppose to wake up out of my bedby Shannon62875 106 lines, 34 comments, on Nov 7 6:22 PM 2005. In Dark• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Through the day’s hours,
I feel in bliss.by babyseal 46 lines, 9 comments, on Sep 2 10:12 AM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I never got to say good bye to my precious little girl
I miss playing with her hair and her golden soft curl• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
How do you share your heart?
With someone you know can tear it apart• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
What had just happened?
What the fuck did you just do?• Viewed by judge. -
Come on in and lock the door
I can't feel pain anymore• Viewed by judge. -
I'm letting go.
though I need to hold on,by AnnieBaabyy 18 lines, on Sep 29 2:47 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Cry the pain of one thousand lives
Constricting fear within these eyesby Fenrir Rising 46 lines, 22 comments, on Mar 4 4:43 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
by Vera Rich 66 lines, 20 comments, on Aug 3 11:35 AM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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En-route to the park, stressed out, in pout
An elderly man, too, down and out• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Everyday my heart continues to be broken
wishing it had said things, its stilll not spokenby starving4perfection 24 lines, 14 comments, on Sep 15 12:33 PM. In Sad, Personal, Anorexia, Eating Disorder, Life• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Blood running down my arm
Dripping off my fingertipsby VampireKitty- 13 lines, 11 comments, on Jun 11 8:18 AM 2008. In Love, Teenage thinking, Teen issues, Depressed, Emo• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
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We had a lovely dinner tonight
My steak and potatoes came out just rightby uldiah 26 lines, 2 comments, on Oct 9 3:10 PM• Viewed by judge. -
by sfgiants452 58 lines, 1 comment, on Oct 7 10:17 AM. In Adult, Personal, Thoughts, Society, Contemporary, Dark• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I sit in this room with fear in my heart
Trying not to scream, but I’m afraid of the dark• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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