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Steal from yourself to create a new poem

I stole this idea from one of Melodies' contests ( http://allpoetry.com/contest/2395813 )

I had fun with it, perhaps you will too.


This is how it works: Go to your poems and take the first line from your most recent write. That will be the title of your poem.

Go to the second poem and take line number one. That will be the first line of your poem.

And so on and so on until you have taken the first line from 17 poems. Your poem is now completed.
Your poem will be sixteen lines long. Obviously it will not rhyme.


Just have fun with it, perhaps it may not make much sense, but who cares.

This is how mine ended up:

Time seems unending, yet ever changing


She left his heart in pieces
My beautiful soul of the ocean,
Standing alone under amber skies
Crystalline raindrops cascading down.

Long has my journey been, on this road of life
Beautiful Emerald of the sea
My foundation is turning to dust in places,
Why does my heart bleed for you ?

Oh how the hours seems to slip by
What we had was magical,
For weeks I have watched you
Though sometimes gloomy and dim.

Is it so wrong to hate the things that brought joy in the past
Shadows of hope fade into the darkness
How does one feel the right
Forever I'll love you she said ...whispered it softly in my ear.

 

Good Luck , and have fun

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on November 7
  • Rewards: Gold: 600, Silver: 300, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 2 people
  • Final notes:
    Congrats to all

Contest Winners

  1. by Nobody Royale 21 lines, on Sep 29 6:48 PM
    Gold trophy winner
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  2. by Alittle2lost 20 lines, 2 comments, on Sep 21 12:37 AM
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  3. Painted smile, eyes won't tell
    Heart releasing fears
    by GuiltedShadow 34 lines, 1 comment, on Sep 19 3:19 PM. In Personal, fun, Other, Contest
    Bronze trophy winner
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  4. by Diminished Capacity 18 lines, 4 comments, on Sep 19 2:46 PM
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]

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  • Diminished Capacity gold member
    September 19
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    It won't rhyme, and it won't make sense either lol.


    • Sanguinarius
      September 19
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      but that is the fun of it all, things do not always need to make sense. I mean, when does life itself really ever make sense ? LOL

  • Diminished Capacity gold member
    September 19
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  • Griswold silver member
    September 19
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    Good lord, my writes are all over the place, it would be so disjointed it'd seem like I was stoned or something. Come to think of it, all my poems are like that so it might work.


  • tsukiyo
    September 19
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    If it's written in prose, do you just want us to take ## words?


  • islekine gold member
    September 19
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    I started to enter..

    But due to the contests I've entered lately, it was way too disjointed...Best wishes to all who enter!

    and


    • Sanguinarius
      September 19
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      You never know, my mind itself is a bit "disjointed", so in the end it could end up as something that makes perfect sense to me LOL


      • islekine gold member
        September 19
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        Believe me...mine is more than disjointed!

        lol...even though I agree with Griswold...that stoned effect...mine doesn't work at all!
        Best wishes...have fun!


  • Heroesrox
    September 19
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    OMMMMMMMMMG!

    This sounds delightfully fun!

    But I tried it and my pieces do not form whole sentences in the first line, so I cannot do this.

    Now I am sad.


  • Spiritual Soul
    September 19
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    Great Idea! Theres actually a name for a poem that is all written with borrowed lines, and it's called a Cento. If you wanted to know


  • Melodies
    September 19
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    LOL


  • GuiltedShadow gold member
    November 7
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    Thank you for the bronze.

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