Hey, it's SmartBrick. Hmm....I want to have a contest...My last one was like...a year ago! So, I figured that I'd give out points and read some awesome(or it better be) poems!
Here's what I want. (Please, shut off the groaning. You're making me sound boring. And making me feel like my math teacher. SO spare me, I really really don't want to be... a kajillion years old....jk. he's only a million.)
Anyway, I'm 13, so I think that rules out adult subjects, plus you shouldn't write about them anyway. Some thoughts are better left UNSPOKEN.
No, it doesn't make it better if it rhymes, just LEAVE IT THE HECK AWAY FROM MY CONTEST.
Back to what I was saying, you may write about ANYTHING, except no adult stuff, as I said....UNSPOKEN...And no cussing, or substatute cussing. Leave the bunnies in the medow, guys. No, I'm not being sexist. When I say guys, it adresses to EVERYONE. So, bunnies in the medow, are we clear on that.
OH, and by anything, I really mean anything! BLOW ME AWAY!(Stories allowed.)
~Topics that will enhace your chances of WINNING!~
-Poems about me. I assume that you are a genuis, and can either clicky-clicky on my name, or get enough info from my text up above.
-funny poems
-unique poems
-Rhyme(But I like free verse, as long as it flows...No flow, no go)
-Unexpected endings, shockers.
-SmartBricky poems(I hope you can figure it out. Bonus for those who can make me say 'that says smartbrick ALL over it)
-Literal poems, poems that take my words literally. Such as if I said, Chuck me an idea. You could write a poem about you litterally chucking me an idea, as if it were a baseball.
-umm....ya....
MAKE the poems good, make me think you READ my words up above. MAke me PROUD,
♥'s Smarty☼
Here's what I want. (Please, shut off the groaning. You're making me sound boring. And making me feel like my math teacher. SO spare me, I really really don't want to be... a kajillion years old....jk. he's only a million.)
Anyway, I'm 13, so I think that rules out adult subjects, plus you shouldn't write about them anyway. Some thoughts are better left UNSPOKEN.
No, it doesn't make it better if it rhymes, just LEAVE IT THE HECK AWAY FROM MY CONTEST.
Back to what I was saying, you may write about ANYTHING, except no adult stuff, as I said....UNSPOKEN...And no cussing, or substatute cussing. Leave the bunnies in the medow, guys. No, I'm not being sexist. When I say guys, it adresses to EVERYONE. So, bunnies in the medow, are we clear on that.
OH, and by anything, I really mean anything! BLOW ME AWAY!(Stories allowed.)
~Topics that will enhace your chances of WINNING!~
-Poems about me. I assume that you are a genuis, and can either clicky-clicky on my name, or get enough info from my text up above.
-funny poems
-unique poems
-Rhyme(But I like free verse, as long as it flows...No flow, no go)
-Unexpected endings, shockers.
-SmartBricky poems(I hope you can figure it out. Bonus for those who can make me say 'that says smartbrick ALL over it)
-Literal poems, poems that take my words literally. Such as if I said, Chuck me an idea. You could write a poem about you litterally chucking me an idea, as if it were a baseball.
-umm....ya....
MAKE the poems good, make me think you READ my words up above. MAke me PROUD,
♥'s Smarty☼
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on October 5
- Rewards: Gold: 400
- Final notes: OK, let's get to the point here. Ninja won because well...I seem to be a lil obsessed with ninjas. Only because stick ninjas are the beastly-est of all stick figures, and you don't get in trouble for drawing them on your homework.
Let's be realistic here. We have ALL drawn a stick ninja SOMETIME in our history.
Anyway, congratz whoever wrote Ninja! As I still don't know.
I'm not going to lie here, some entries were just better than others. Hey, it happenes. Although I was pretty dissipointed at some 'cussed' in there masterpieces, and I couldn't finish their poem because.
Try to follow directions in the near future.
OK, enough of that. I really did enjoy how I was reading about a Ninja in one poem and an old camera in another.
I kept telling myself that I had only 'XXX' poems left to read, and I forgot how unique each poem is.
So, I went back and reread poems that I think diserved my second and more careful thought.
I LOVES YA ALL!
(You have been a contestant of a smartbrick contest, I hope you will come back, and enjoy the rest of the day in SmartBrick's Adventrure Park. Remember to watch for the birds and buckle your seat belts, this will be a bumpy ride. That is all)
Smarty♥
Contest Winners
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by AlexandraHamilton 28 lines, 4 comments, on Sep 17 4:34 PM. In Contest, Humor, My own style, ninja, stick ninja, stickninja
Gold trophy winner
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Entries [36]
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Faded into the memory
I feel the coldness of your handsby Only-Speak-YourMind 66 lines, 7 comments, on Sep 16 9:25 PM. In Angst, Dark, Life, Personal, Pain, Thoughts, My own style, Lost in thought, Death• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Today, I feel as if I am a five year old girl again,
A girl that age sitting on her daddy's knees,by Only-Speak-YourMind 32 lines, 7 comments, on Sep 17 3:46 PM. In Angst, Hope, Love, Life, Personal, Pain, Sadness, Teenage thinking• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
night fall arrives and the stars start to come to sight
golden sun shine changes to silver moon lightby fairy princess k 27 lines, 3 comments, on Sep 4 1:11 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I’m a fashion ***top model*** and you’re a Rock .. super star .. ,
• Together in lo♥ve and fame we will go far •by fairy princess k 38 lines, 1 comment, on Sep 17 8:05 AM. In Contest, dirty pretty, Love, Contemporary, Romance• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by fairy princess k 128 lines, 23 comments, on Aug 16 8:27 AM. In Fantasy, Life, Society, My own style, Romance, Abstract, Inspirational, dirty pretty• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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You spotted me from far with my John Galliano’s signature newspaper print pants
I turned around and saw Roberto Cavalli’s mad patterned stby fairy princess k 24 lines, 7 comments, on Sep 8 1:43 PM. In fashion, Fantasy, Life, Love, Nature, Personal, Contemporary, Contest, Romance• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
({[{(sky magic)}]})
night fall arrives and the stars start to come to sightby fairy princess k 47 lines, 2 comments, on Sep 11 4:12 PM. In Nature, Fantasy, Thoughts, Inspirational, Abstract, Romance, Escape, Contest• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by SpinnerAndTheHawk 15 lines, 2 comments, on Sep 17 8:11 PM• Commented on by judge.
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Like a book,
My heart is open.by jessifer1792 20 lines, 11 comments, on Mar 22 5:25 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I know in my heart
That I'm set on the truth.by jessifer1792 17 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 7 9:16 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Are you listening???
Something inside of meby jessifer1792 37 lines, 5 comments, on Jul 5 2:37 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Your eyes don't leave mine as they dig deep in my soul
They're wearing me down, they're begging for controlby Blue-Rose Beauty 13 lines, 36 comments, on Jun 13 6:35 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Fire, yes
my face was burnt.by jessifer1792 15 lines, 1 comment, on Mar 29 2:45 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I lay here each night,
every nightby jessifer1792 33 lines, 3 comments, on Oct 11 1:55 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Sometimes I wanna scream
at the sheer complacency• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
OOPS! I didn't listen...• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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masked behind shimmering white powder k
by fairy princess k 49 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 20 5:17 PM. In Contest, Fantasy, Society, Love, Life, Inspirational• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
My God is beautiful and abundant in loving kindness
I feel proud to call him ‘your heiress’• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Everyday I'll find a way to make you happy.
Each night• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
There’s something I can't tell you
You don't need to know• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
When you feel me reaching out,
Don't drawl back your hand in doubt.by jessifer1792 26 lines, 8 comments, on Feb 11 9:06 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I've called your name so many times
my throat is raw & dry.by jessifer1792 34 lines, 3 comments, on Aug 23 1:37 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Here's to the girl with the fire
Here's to the girl with the steel in her heart• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
an angel, you say?
....oh honey. you always were naive.by Jack-of-all-Colors 34 lines, 21 comments, on Aug 25 1:25 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Crawling under my skin
like an itch i can't scratch;by Jack-of-all-Colors 46 lines, 12 comments, on Aug 28 5:35 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
As Apollo blazes across the sky
the setting sun, it seems to die...by burdened 26 lines, 2 comments, on Aug 25 7:57 AM 2006• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by Mango Memories 21 lines, 13 comments, on Oct 4 7:17 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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