image is bruno dayan-kiss me
here it comes 
damn it.
my birthday.
there's no way to stop it.
believe me,
I've tried....
so instead of crying about it,
I'd want to wish for the one thing
in this world
you cannot do alone, lol..
believe me again, I've tried that too
.
so do your best to make me forget.
sweep me away with magic
and passionate beauty
and tenderness...all that stuff.
yep, better than a birthday cake
.
thanks, everyone.
Love, jin
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on September 21
- Rewards: Gold: 918, Silver: 409, Bronze: 205, Honorable mention: 2 people
- Final notes: Wow, I did not expect such a turn-out. Not at all, but I sure did enjoy reading these entries. Thank you all for taking the time to make my birthday special. Congratulations winners, and bravo for penning such awesome writes.
love always,
jin
Contest Winners
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We were two
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by Pure Thought 49 lines, 14 comments, on Sep 16 10:13 PM. In Contest, Love, Adult
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Entries [36]
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I feel the tingle on my lips as we kiss behind the school.
I feel the warmth of my soul as I finally let myself love you.by Blue-Rose Beauty 12 lines, 19 comments, on Mar 28 8:55 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by GeneralPeppers 6 lines, 3 comments, on Aug 11 5:49 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Will it be magic, a sparkle in time,
a memory lost, in once upon a time?by melodytcromer 9 lines, 1 comment, on Sep 16 9:18 PM. In Contest, Life, My own style, Lost in thought, Message• Commented on by judge. -
Oh gret love
Grant thy souls desireby glenn shannon 36 lines, 5 comments, on May 16 8:36 AM. In Love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Oh, how I do so
Love itby Stirrer of Stardust 20 lines, 1 comment, on Sep 16 9:25 PM• Commented on by judge. -
love I gasp your words
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We're sitting, just you and me, and the breeze lightly blows your hair.
by Brittaney73 17 lines, 4 comments, on Feb 17 11:18 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Oh how my arms yearn to hold your body close to mine
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Oh, shameful admission,
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When our lips meet for the first time / And the heat of passion explodes and soars on high. / We’re on the edge of love’s sweet desires. /• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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When I see you smile I understand
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Perfection
spelled out in each crevice of his lipsby alexandrathegreat 20 lines, 1 comment, on Sep 17 1:09 AM• Commented on by judge. -
Behold the Belly dancer
The goddess of loveby My Souls Reflection 130 lines, 9 comments, on Apr 13 12:01 AM 2008. In Spiritual, Bellydance, Fantasy
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So tell me what these kisses are
For there are none for me
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Between each smile
There’s a tear in your eyesby hend shaheen 34 lines, 25 comments, on Sep 15 8:39 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
The day when I proposed you,
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through a kiss
early malabu poetry• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Wrapped in his arms
As he sincerely tries to keep me dryby SweetWhiskey 25 lines, 4 comments, on Sep 10 9:20 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
The spirit and the flesh are separate,
And yet they will combine to make us whole.by PerVirtuous 25 lines, 15 comments, on Jul 1 12:47 AM. In Love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by RobertPaulson 17 lines, 24 comments, on Aug 7 2:51 AM. In Prose• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Like the tender touch
Of virgin ,resplendent ,dewdropsby smitaanand 53 lines, 2 comments, on Sep 17 11:47 AM• Commented on by judge. -
Butterfly feelings set loose to fly,
Flapping wings spread giddy smiles,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
No matter what language you speak -
Spanish, English or French…• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
my tongue is quivering, bow full of arrows,
dancing behind my teeth set in motion withby breathethedream 16 lines, 1 comment, on Sep 17 5:11 PM• Commented on by judge.
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Aww Happy Birthday Jen. You aren't getting older, just more beautiful in so many ways.
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I love you for that William
thank you.
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I must write for this one.
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its okay love, no worries. alright?
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Yeah, it's hard to play Parcheesi by yourself.
When is the birthday?
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Friday, the 18th...
sniff
lol
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Happy Birthday!!
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thank you.
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kiss the mirror..and fog it up a little...you will never know
who is kissing you...imagine, imagine
imagine one from me
Happy Birthday toooooooooooo you
mal
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funny you...okay, I'll give it a shot-though my mirror will probably feel a little awkward Thanks Mal.
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Happy Birthday my Bestest Bestest Friend in the whole wide world JIN!!! Why oh Why does my muse have to be vacant at such an important time like this??? HUH???
Love you
Kat
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spank her for me
love you back.
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Happy upcoming birthday, you getting younger all the time.
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uh huh...lie to me, remember..?
'...as long as they're told with the best of intentions...'
lol
thanks, my friend.
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Happy Birthday. I know that the tenderness of lips to wish one a pleasant time as the days turn to years is something that would melt all that time away.
Here is to you getting millions upon millions of kisses dear lady.
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he has tattoos, and his name is Joe.
he lives in the building next to me, and slips little love notes under my door.
he hasnt kissed me yet, but I told him on Friday he could.
Im a little nervous, believe it or not.
sigh...
thanks JoAnn.
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sigh. guess I'm old news with no hope of making Hula girls dance on my biceps.
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but if you can get one to make a battleship sink on your belly,
I'd drop him like a last week trend
so there
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Sweetie, let the moment last a lifetime, for the first kiss will be with you forever. Those are the memories that will mean more later on. Take it from an ... older lady. One that feels young no matter what life tosses my way.
Joann
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Doll, nothing to be sad about, in fact, it should be a celebration of your spunky and caring nature, blessing us all. I'll slip in sexy nature here too right along this white line, in this white box. Tell me, where in the world would we be able to pick up a lady 'jes like Jin'?
Each day has its night, it may take a while in Alaska but still it happens. How you decide to spend this special day is up to you. Would you rather forget it, run through it like any other day, remember it or zestfully point out certain events from the future, about this day?
The choice is all yours, we are along for the ride. 
Or is that the one being rided? hmmmm .... *hides* 
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rided. omg, you're just awful.
terrible. incorrigible, and and and naughty.
dont ever change.
thanks my dearest.
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You are beautiful and talented and an amazing person...
What are you now, 21? looks like it to me
I knew your birthday was coming Friday. Thanks to facebook
Love ya Sis and I will be back for this one!
Lynda
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21...pffft....I remember my cookie cake at 20 saying "20's fun, but wait till 21"...and I had to think back to my 19th birthday, and the trashcan punch party my friends threw for me, and I sat there playing strip poker with all my friends, and thinking right then
I would never get any older.
sigh....
trashcan punch lies, ya know
thanks, my friend.
love ya back.
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Happy Birthday
Oh hun just enjoy, let your hair down and PARTY on....
Age matters not when the heart is vibrant and a smile paints
your face
Have FuN xx
Luv ya sis
Julie
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Happy Birthday Sweetie, you are very much loved here, so when you're feeling this way, which I can relate to also, just know many love you here and have arms open wide with hugs for you, all the best, Josie
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Happy Birthday and many more.
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thank you Rod.
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Wow, thanks!
Glad you enjoyed it.
Now if you will please excuse me, I shall go and read the other winning entries.
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