Welcome to my very first ever contest. I am doing this because I have hit the 700 points mark and felt like I wanted to make a contest for all the dark writing lovers! Okay, I'd like all dark poems, as long it's not adult because it won't let me read that kind. Anyway. I prefer new poems, but you can put on prewrites if you really want too.
RULES:
1) Please no tying like tHis. (1 warning, then DQ)
2) No happy writings please (2 warnings, then DQ)
3) Word limit is 50, no stories please!
4) No bashing god, or other religions.
5) No bashing people
6) and have fun!!!
How to get my attention is to write:
Lost Love
Vampires
Werewolves
Demons
Fallen Angel
Murder
Sad and pain
So please make me cry, scared or any of that but you don't have to write about this! Write whatever you want and I will comment on all of them and if I don't tell please!!
Okay you can submit up too 5 entries but you don't have to. But if you do, please submit at least one new poem. Okay good luck everyone and have fun!!!!!!
RULES:
1) Please no tying like tHis. (1 warning, then DQ)
2) No happy writings please (2 warnings, then DQ)
3) Word limit is 50, no stories please!
4) No bashing god, or other religions.
5) No bashing people
6) and have fun!!!
How to get my attention is to write:
Lost Love
Vampires
Werewolves
Demons
Fallen Angel
Murder
Sad and pain
So please make me cry, scared or any of that but you don't have to write about this! Write whatever you want and I will comment on all of them and if I don't tell please!!
Okay you can submit up too 5 entries but you don't have to. But if you do, please submit at least one new poem. Okay good luck everyone and have fun!!!!!!
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on September 15
- Rewards: Gold: 400, Silver: 215, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 5 people
- Final notes: Thank you all for entering and It really was a tough choice!!! It took me a while to read them! lol well thank yo all for entering my very first contest and congratulations to the winners and good luck for the other writers because they all are great writers also!!! ^w^
Contest Winners
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I wrote this for my BFF"S contest.. i hope she likes it and finds it sad enough and good luck to all other writers
by PhoenixInTheCorner 43 lines, 2 comments, on Sep 13 10:30 PM. In Lost Love, Pain, Sad, Misery, Dark, Other......
Gold trophy winner
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I am a ghost
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Looking at you with love in my heart
seeing only pain and regret in your eyes• Commented on by judge. [remove] -
Everyone's around sitting in the
front room. A dad yelling at the kids.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
inspired by the asshole ex of mine and the father of my son written on febuary 17, 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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Here she sits; upon a stained dirty floor
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Looking at him and away always seeing death in the corner of my eyes
every night i sleep i feel his hand smoothing down my hair• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
Silver trophy winner
Bronze trophy winner
Honorable mention
Entries [84]
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you know momma always loved you / boy dont I wish I could be there to hold you / if only I could tell you that everything would be alrightby serenity silvermoon 34 lines, 5 comments, on Apr 29 7:28 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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i could imagine my son saying this to me
opions 3by serenity silvermoon 25 lines, 4 comments, on Apr 15 11:01 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
written on today inspired by my ex boyfriend tomas james grizbeby serenity silvermoon 24 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 9 2:20 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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You kicked me down, and stamb me in the face.by serenity silvermoon 26 lines, 4 comments, on Aug 17 6:24 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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What I used to feel is like I had a forgotten heart
You found my heart and you never want to lose it againby Jasmine Minx 8 lines, 3 comments, on Nov 29 12:28 AM 2008. In Personal• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Walking past the window as I see the burn victims
Tears stream down my cheeks at their misfortuneby Jasmine Minx 21 lines, 8 comments, on May 7 11:05 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
The masses value their ignorance as much as their hypocrisy
Each of which allows them to reject that very notionby aien aristeuein 20 lines, 10 comments, on Nov 14 12:21 AM 2008. In Thoughts, Society, Other, Dark• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Fleeting sights
Of lampposts on 9th street.by eat.yo.soup 9 lines, 3 comments, on Aug 28 12:13 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
If someone were to cut open my spirit...by GinryuStargazer 27 lines, 5 comments, on Sep 8 6:25 PM. In GinryuStargazer, Dark, Pain, Life, Thoughts• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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My clients sleep upon a bed of roses
Under your body will my heart forever wilt.by GinryuStargazer 7 lines, 3 comments, on Sep 10 9:09 PM. In GinryuStargazer, Death, Song, Evanesence, Dark• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Getting a fix in bedlam.
Not avoiding nightmares yet.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Cigarettes with wild heat
Leave violent kisses on my pale skinby eat.yo.soup 18 lines, 5 comments, on Aug 26 1:14 PM. In Suicide• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Definately one of my darkest writes.by GinryuStargazer 24 lines, 6 comments, on Sep 6 2:40 PM. In GinryuStargazer, Thoughts, Pain, Dark, Blood• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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He knew things I thought noone else could possily know / The sadness of Dixie cups rolling 'cross the pavement / The rusty hopelessness ofby Lord Bob 40 lines, 5 comments, on Jun 29 10:24 PM 2007. In Sad, Dark, Pain, Weird, Fantasy, Death, My own style, Lost in thought, Depression• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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About a vampire. READ IT!• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Bleeding and Broken
I lay weeping in the ground of a worldby Lord Bob 22 lines, 1 comment, on Sep 12 12:12 PM. In Love, Personal, Thoughts, Sad, Pain, My own style, Longing, Friendship, Depression• Commented on by judge. -
Papa can you hear me...please wake up!
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Seeing her these days makes
Me squirm on the insideby jeremylogan 16 lines, 5 comments, on Jun 10 1:48 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
In this lake,
I'm drowing slowly.by jeremylogan 7 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 6 2:50 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
These shadows help conceal all the monsters
and I see myself before I found herby jeremylogan 17 lines, 3 comments, on Aug 18 11:25 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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She colored her world in black and white, a question with no answer
She listened to the speechles birds and watched the nighttimes dancerby bookwrm1324 8 lines, 14 comments, on Feb 1 11:56 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Ruthless, hungry sons of war, murdering our hope and love
Bloody money is not worth the price of the slaughtering of the doveby bookwrm1324 7 lines, 18 comments, on Jan 26 12:08 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Wanting, needing, crying, haunting
Trying to understand what it is I'm wanting• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Her tortured crying soul leaves black shadows on her face
Her raw, naive heart has an empty, gaping spaceby bookwrm1324 7 lines, 20 comments, on Jan 7 3:14 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
He said,
"I've been working out my dysfunctions on this canvas"by FightOffYourDemons 23 lines, 9 comments, on Dec 11 3:47 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
wash my hands of your mess
of your skin,by FightOffYourDemons 53 lines, 9 comments, on Nov 10 2:54 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by FightOffYourDemons 38 lines, 6 comments, on Jun 17 11:42 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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With a broken heart she lays beneath the murky moon
Sightless eyes, torn flesh, crimson liquid dried on her skin• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I close my eyes and try to rest,
being here without you again,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
When the darkness comes and the sun is out of reach.
Don`t loose the way even if the darkness calls for you.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
You once swore on the moon,
Promising your undying devotion and love.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Ill fated resolutions,
cast aside for your absolution,by Gay-Militant 42 lines, 4 comments, on Sep 12 2:14 PM• Commented on by judge. -
It bubbles slowly through my veins
Cooking, boiling reaching the point• Commented on by judge. -
It tastes like hell, but it feels like heaven,
and it burns as it runs down my throat.by DeathHawk 28 lines, 4 comments, on Sep 10 10:46 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
The stars are in her eyes,
The sunshine is in her hair.by A m b r e a 23 lines, 16 comments, on Sep 12 5:27 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
abyssal eyes of radiant blue
draw me in; mesmerising.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
yes, my love
come to me• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
It is a night of darkness, a song of death,
wolves vent their pain. The immortal one risesby KissLoveCutPainDie 15 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 1 8:45 PM. In Dark• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
What in the name of 7 hell is this?
A closed cage!• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Around, all around, the shadows gather.
My dread grows as the stroke of death falls against my heart.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Hiding in the woods in a cold dark place
Shivering winds blowing you in the face• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Why is it my world
feels like it is falling• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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Scars are open again
Watching as the bleedby Only-Speak-YourMind 41 lines, 2 comments, on Sep 11 1:45 AM. In My life, Sad, Angry, Depressed, Suicide, Lost love, Emo, Teenage thinking• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I was there with you everyday of every hour
I sang, I loved, I laughed, I criedby Only-Speak-YourMind 28 lines, 4 comments, on Sep 11 1:35 AM. In Personal, Other, Life, Love, Hope, Teenage thinking, Depressed, Sensual, Emo• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
The abrupt shrill of the doorbell awoke me.
I jumped and got to my feet.by xBloodPromisedx 35 lines, 1 comment, on Sep 1 7:44 PM. In Vampires! Death• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Leave me alone,
Please let me be.by xBloodPromisedx 39 lines, 5 comments, on Sep 9 6:03 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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Is this just a phobia,
Brought on by the lack of light,by weathergirl123 38 lines, 1 comment, on Sep 13 7:56 AM• Commented on by judge.
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