Im not feeling my best at all so I'd like sad poems.....poems with emotions, with feeling....i want to feel your pain....
you can write about any emotional difficulty your having or you've had,
or even write about whatever it is you're feeling at this moment in time...
the only rules are no dirty pretty please, No WrItInG lIkE tHiS and no nasty comments about other peoples poems
you can write about any emotional difficulty your having or you've had,
or even write about whatever it is you're feeling at this moment in time...
the only rules are no dirty pretty please, No WrItInG lIkE tHiS and no nasty comments about other peoples poems
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on August 30
- Rewards: Gold: 1000, Silver: 600, Bronze: 300
- Final notes: wow the entrys i got this time were amazing! i really wish i could have given gold to every single entry i really do
thank you everybody for taking the time to enter my contest and congratulations to all the winners x x x
Contest Winners
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You do not need to torture your body, it did nothing wrong,
And if you keep this up, someday soon you will be gone.by Scarlet x Stone 91 lines, 5 comments, on Aug 28 4:17 AM. In Abuse, Eating Disorders, image, Body, Shell, Life, Personal, Sad, Anorexia, Therapy
Silver trophy winner
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I've watched with my mouth closed,
life and those around me living.by Silver Asylum 23 lines, 2 comments, on Aug 16 6:50 PM• Commented on by judge. [remove] -
Mirror, mirror, on the wall,
Who’s the thinnest of them all?by NvrTh1nEn0ugh 30 lines, 8 comments, on Aug 21 10:24 PM. In Anorexia, Eating Disorders, Sad, Depression• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] - Error: Unable to find finalist item 5279425, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
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Walking in the dark,
I follow that sparkling little light,by Falling.Again...Xx 40 lines, 2 comments, on Aug 10 9:22 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Got a house full of memories that I don't want
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Day go by as do the months and the years,
Every time you cry I will be here.by DancingStar 32 lines, 1 comment, on Aug 16 6:07 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
Gold trophy winner
Bronze trophy winner
Entries [69]
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My emotions-
-choked byby Spirit of the Water 29 lines, 14 comments, on Jul 25 12:30 AM. In Dark• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I smoke another of my cigars,
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Sequestered behind hollow orbs
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He was everything I always wanted
Whenever we kissed I mistaked Earth for Heavenby thelamb01 19 lines, 4 comments, on Jun 11 8:56 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
something feels wrong
something feels off• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Years of abuse, have made me hollow.
So many tears of pain and sorrow.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
An ethereal shimmer glows
with eyes as cold as stoneby Circuitsboard 35 lines, 17 comments, on Aug 20 10:49 PM 2004. In Other• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Feel the warmth eating you alive
Feel it take you into its caring grasps and evaporate your soul• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by veganmaster 25 lines, 1 comment, on Aug 11 11:06 AM. In Sad• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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If only he would stop,
Shed that black painted coat.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
When did I get to this place, She whispers.
Whenever she thinks about it,by insidemjsnotebook 39 lines, 5 comments, on Jul 16 12:06 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Ah, Fake happiness. I'm familiar with it. I fake it every day. You put those real smiles on every day and I put on the mask. The mask of the past. The mask of the past that I want to hide. You can't know, I'm sure you'd wantby Blue-Rose Beauty 2 lines, 4 comments, on Mar 27 5:53 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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We were close friends,
Though she did not knowby Lionheart 63 lines, 91 comments, on Dec 11 8:07 PM 2007. In Love, Sad, Friendship, Lost love, unrequited• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
She smiles and says goodbye, not knowing it's the very last time
She knows it wasn't supposed to happen, but she knows it wasn't a crime• Commented on by judge. -
I'm broken.
All the white lies in the worldby JWGoethe 32 lines, 10 comments, on Oct 3 12:11 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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When the music stops and dies, the lullaby of the soul
grows silent in the silence from the loss of the girl.by A-muse-in-writer 16 lines, 7 comments, on Aug 5 9:50 AM. In Contest, Dark, Pain, Sad, Depression, Lost love, Suicide• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Am I really wanted in this world?
Do I have a place, a reason?by brokenhearts1219 54 lines, 5 comments, on Jul 24 1:14 AM. In Sad, Personal, Other, Thoughts, Love, Life, Depression, My life, Self, Teen issues• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
what a child at heart
and lovely as could be• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Whenever I look into the mirror
I don't like the person I see,by Poetess12 36 lines, 1 comment, on Aug 11 9:31 PM• Commented on by judge. -
Like a worn out piece of clothing,
You donated my love to Goodwill,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
It’s a secret I tried but I can no longer keep
Every night when all creatures are asleepby hend shaheen 28 lines, 7 comments, on Aug 19 1:59 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Thoughts racing,
Crashing,by KaSandra81 21 lines, 2 comments, on Aug 19 1:03 AM• Commented on by judge. -
There are three words I fail to believe in
Their constant use has made their meaning thin,by moy 68 lines, 12 comments, on Aug 17 3:46 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
what sad girl
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Depression is a solemn fate, submitting all of whom it takes.
"Hmm.. . What is this?? A boy?"by onyxblack2000 35 lines, 1 comment, on Aug 18 6:16 AM• Commented on by judge. -
I never thought
it would end like this,by silent.insanity 60 lines, 13 comments, on Apr 12 9:14 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Every breath is becoming a chant-whispering your name-,
snaking its way into my system,by pyarkavaada 25 lines, 4 comments, on Jun 12 10:06 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
smile the're watching
laugh and play alongby bballchic01 12 lines, 1 comment, on Aug 11 11:18 PM• Commented on by judge. -
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Two hearts entwined
with malice and hatred...by joyfuljossie 81 lines, 9 comments, on Aug 13 12:28 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
October skies are crying
Dark clouds release their tearsby Rakerman1 29 lines, 10 comments, on Oct 5 1:45 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Heartfelt pain echoes through my soul,
Lonely am I, My sadness unfolds,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
If you love me
You have to let me knowby James Aguilar 64 lines, 12 comments, on Aug 27 5:53 PM. In Love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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