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~Menna
Points WILL go up,
No rules
*** Will only comment on preliminary finalists or if i have a specific thing to address (e.g. spelling, grammar errors)
Well, click that pre-write button.
~Menna
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on August 30
- Rewards: Gold: 600, Silver: 300, Bronze: 200, Honorable mention: 5 people
- Final notes: Wow, how amazing was it to read all your wonderful words. My winners I am VERY proud of, you have no idea how hard it was to determine an order for the top three. The honourable mentions are in no particular order and I highly reccomend the reading of the poetry of all my finalists and I thank you all greatly for entering
~Menna
Contest Winners
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I could see it in your eyes, your wonderland, the way you were falling.
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Let's rip out the pages, and move straight to the ending.
Too much is broken, and nothing is mending.by Festering Eye Sore 13 lines, 161 comments, on Jun 26 12:21 PM 2006. In Other
Silver trophy winner
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I think the night steals souls; hides them somewhere in the pits
of the moon. It shines like nobody's home, and the stars• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
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Gold trophy winner
Bronze trophy winner
Honorable mention
Entries [264]
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The roses are dry,
But not in death,by FalseShadow 18 lines, 1 comment, on Aug 2 1:27 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
The streets are empty, still and quiet,
So I lay down to rest my soul.by FalseShadow 25 lines, 7 comments, on Aug 3 3:12 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
The ghosts of people past their time,
Each of them victims of some murderous crime.by FalseShadow 84 lines, 4 comments, on Aug 4 7:23 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Jet stone colour bursts forth,
Seeping over the white canvas.by FalseShadow 19 lines, 6 comments, on Jul 23 11:30 AM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
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She sits by the phone
Waiting for him to callby Sweetest-sounds 18 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 21 9:18 AM. In Love• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
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You’ve done things to me,
Things that never should have been.by FalseShadow 24 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 23 10:32 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
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She's broken in his eyes,
Bleeding tears and crying blood.by FalseShadow 13 lines, 7 comments, on Jul 24 11:31 AM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Today I give you everything,
All you've ever dreamed.by FalseShadow 16 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 31 11:27 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
A bullet proof vest in a windowless room,
A fortress of glass in impenetrable gloom.by FalseShadow 16 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 23 10:35 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Surrender myself to darkling sleep, a world of dreams and memories,
Recalling now those hands that clasp and with love those lips that mee• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
A locket of silver with a picture inside,
And the smiling faces of you and I.by FalseShadow 13 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 10 11:55 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
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Every hour I spend with you,
Seems to last but a moment.by FalseShadow 20 lines, 3 comments, on Aug 8 9:33 AM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Tell me that you love me, Tell me that you care.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I first met you
when you were young,by Caitlin 55 lines, 4 comments, on Aug 10 11:36 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I love you so much
But I know it can't be true• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
fuck the pain away make it through the day
don't give a fuck what you think or say• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I'm feeling so alone
I have nothing leftby Leanna-bean 10 lines, 19 comments, on Apr 30 5:42 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
The thirteenth year of life
I guess it was okayby Leanna-bean 38 lines, 21 comments, on May 17 8:06 PM 2008. In Angst, Life, Love, Pain, Personal, Sad, Thoughts, Teen issues, Teenage thinking• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Feelings are emerging
I can't hold it in• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I'm gonna get drunk I wanna get fadedby Leanna-bean 19 lines, 13 comments, on Mar 12 9:13 AM 2008. In Personal• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I once knew this girl named Peaches
She sucked the life out of you like leachesby Leanna-bean 18 lines, 16 comments, on Mar 28 2:21 PM 2008. In Thoughts, Life, Dark, Pain, Angst, Weird, My life, Depression, Angry, Dedication• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
It took away my innocence,
It took away my heart,by Sticks-And-Stones 54 lines, 1 comment, on Aug 10 6:08 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
by ladybug. 71 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 26 2:22 AM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Pulse for pulse, breath for breath:
Speak low, lean low,by KaylaSHIKARI 23 lines, 13 comments, on Aug 10 4:08 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Your lies are lacking oxygen
and it's getting hard to breathe• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
It was out in the rain
That I remembered this gameby beautilfullycorrupt 46 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 18 1:29 PM 2005. In Sad• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
i want you to
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just breatheby rainbows. 266 lines, 12 comments, on Aug 2 12:57 AM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Sinking in empty voiced smears of blue,
Twirling ribbons through splatters of white.by KaylaSHIKARI 23 lines, 1 comment, on Aug 9 8:05 AM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
by Clovis...Curious 20 lines, 20 comments, on May 20 8:02 PM 2007. In Bare Bones Poetry, Humor, Philosophical, Therapy• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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You are kind, you are sweet,
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by PaintedParisPassion 42 lines, 6 comments, on Jul 6 12:58 AM. In Noguest• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I missed you when I was freezing cold,
And you arm wasn't there to keep me warm.by shelbymarie 6 lines, on Jun 2 8:12 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
by PaintedParisPassion 12 lines, 6 comments, on Jul 21 11:06 PM. In noguest• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Chaotic insanity has taken its toll,
Now sit back, relax, and watch the world fall.by Festering Eye Sore 48 lines, 18 comments, on Nov 12 9:36 AM 2005. In Dark• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
June just passed and now it's July..
I'm left here alone with all your lies..• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
by PaintedParisPassion 25 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 30 12:25 PM. In noguest• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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by PaintedParisPassion 26 lines, 6 comments, on Jul 7 1:12 AM. In noguest• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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by PaintedParisPassion 28 lines, 10 comments, on Jul 29 5:01 PM. In noguest• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Run, run, and only run.
This is the motto I find everywhere.by Freelance writer 35 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 24 6:18 AM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
On that fateful April day, I noticed our relationship was changing somehow.
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Sometimes at night I lay awake,
Wishing I could take a break,• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I walk along the dirtpath road,
To the place I like to be.by shelbymarie 27 lines, 3 comments, on Aug 5 2:05 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
as you turn out to be
just like the rest• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
he's my romeo
and i, his broken jullietby SkitzoSkittlez 30 lines, 5 comments, on Apr 16 5:17 PM. In Love• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
see looks at the damage she has done,
written in his words so beatifully.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
by PaintedParisPassion 22 lines, 19 comments, on Aug 8 2:19 AM. In noguest• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I love you more than cookies,
more than sun and sky.by jessicabuzz 14 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 31 5:57 AM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
i've been gone for awhile,
time to see myself.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
this is then end of my youth
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You left town,
left me here,• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
by PaintedParisPassion 40 lines, 8 comments, on Jul 28 4:44 AM. In Noguest• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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i want you to
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just breatheby rainbows. 34 lines, 13 comments, on Aug 1 8:31 AM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Urgh! This sort of contest would make me sick! I hope you enjoy it
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Menna is currently away and unable to judge this contest. Please be patient, I'm terribly sorry for the inconvenience.
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Thankyou sooo much for the trophy
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