Hello everyone ;]
This is my first contest. It's pretty simple really. I just want something on emotions. I want to feel how you feel. That can be happiness, depression, lonliness, whatever you want. Tears are good, so make me cry. I'll be honest, I hav e a really short atention span. So it has to be good, you make me want to keep reading then good job (:. If your stuck, message me for a prompt or insperation. Any format is fine, but I really like prose. If you can do prose, please do. But it has to hold my intrest, prose that makes me interested is BIG brownie points. (:
Now onto the boring stuff:
Please no "sticky" caps. Capitalisation where ever needed. Please don't forget the 'I's. Please please please NO text talk. I cant stand it. (: No bashing. Swearing a dirty pretty are fine, do a degree. I'm only 13 though. Religion is good, it actually interest me. If I need you to edit anything I will message you. And if you need anything message me too. (:
Good luck, MBM xox. xD
P.S Fresh writes are also brownie points (:
*Note*
Entries that are entered in more than 3 contests I wont even bother reading. I'm sorry, but it really puts me off. And if that entry has won contests before you know its a good write. Sorry.
This is my first contest. It's pretty simple really. I just want something on emotions. I want to feel how you feel. That can be happiness, depression, lonliness, whatever you want. Tears are good, so make me cry. I'll be honest, I hav e a really short atention span. So it has to be good, you make me want to keep reading then good job (:. If your stuck, message me for a prompt or insperation. Any format is fine, but I really like prose. If you can do prose, please do. But it has to hold my intrest, prose that makes me interested is BIG brownie points. (:
Now onto the boring stuff:
Please no "sticky" caps. Capitalisation where ever needed. Please don't forget the 'I's. Please please please NO text talk. I cant stand it. (: No bashing. Swearing a dirty pretty are fine, do a degree. I'm only 13 though. Religion is good, it actually interest me. If I need you to edit anything I will message you. And if you need anything message me too. (:
Good luck, MBM xox. xD
P.S Fresh writes are also brownie points (:
*Note*
Entries that are entered in more than 3 contests I wont even bother reading. I'm sorry, but it really puts me off. And if that entry has won contests before you know its a good write. Sorry.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on August 24
- Rewards: Gold: 500, Silver: 100, Bronze: 50
- Final notes: All of the entries were really good. I'm sorry I didn't get to comment all of them. And I didn't read the ones entered in more than three contests. Congrats to the winners- and thank you to Kiera for helping me judge. Well done people. (: xxx
Contest Winners
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I miss the simpler times,
When love was dead, and all a lie,by Woundweaver 20 lines, 5 comments, on Aug 8 6:56 PM. In Irony, Personal, Love, Loss, Simpler times, Reflection
Gold trophy winner
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she sits all alone
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I'll never see your face.
Or hear your hefty cry.• Commented on by judge. [remove] -
I don't know if you're out there,
but I want to thank you.by InsanityisAmusing 55 lines, 4 comments, on May 2 11:59 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Images filling my mind
scenes of death, my own demiseby awannabepoet 38 lines, 20 comments, on Jul 26 6:15 PM. In Life, My life, Abstract, Suicide, Personal., Humanity, Lost in thought, My own style• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Every rose that stings ,
brings more broken dreamsby candela696 14 lines, 2 comments, on Aug 22 1:27 AM• Commented on by judge. [remove]
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I am so full of sadness in my heart.
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I walk inside church with my bible in my hand a smile on my face
I greet my friends and put in a couple bucks in the offering basket• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Crashing down to the ground
I tear at the carpet screamingby Dragonshadow 28 lines, 5 comments, on Jan 7 1:25 AM 2007. In Dark• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
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a girl gave me the world onceby Icarus 49 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 19 4:39 AM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
you dissolved from my daily life
but you never left me.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Eyeliner tears run down my face
I see myself in the mirrorby PiXiEdUsT84 17 lines, 11 comments, on Jul 22 2:40 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Distant songs
of yesteryearsby Coathanger 53 lines, 10 comments, on Jul 18 7:22 AM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
In neon lit Manhattan
iridescent all around,by Coathanger 48 lines, 13 comments, on Jul 20 1:38 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
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You are a secret you are a lie
I know I can't keep it by my sideby TrulyLoothy 19 lines, on Aug 8 3:06 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
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Thank you for hitting
me with an arrow, Cupid.by InsanityisAmusing 18 lines, 3 comments, on May 5 5:10 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I want to live the full life
Take what's not mineby Blue-Rose Beauty 69 lines, 20 comments, on Jun 19 8:19 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Through these eternal realms / I have walked once before / Memories of the ancient ones / Knocking at my souls door / Embracing this new experience / Of this life I have been given / A glorious gift from above• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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you hear me talk but do you really listen?
you hear me cry do you reply?by jake x x x 14 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 31 6:02 AM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I loved you
And you felt the same way too• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Crying for I have no food
Crying- because I cannot improveby roland halloway 13 lines, 12 comments, on Jul 21 11:17 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
The way it worked out
Is all you have
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but my wretched mind
won't stop it's aching
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by TheLyricsArePoetry 24 lines, 30 comments, on Jul 11 3:03 AM. In My own style, Personal, Depression• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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What if death wasn't the end?
What if death was a lie?• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I am alone I close my eyes but sleep wont come
I lay my head on my pillow soft and long for dreamsby Shining for You 15 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 18 10:30 AM. In Thoughts• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
love is not about someone being perfect
love is about you seeing someone as perfectby jake x x x 9 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 31 5:11 AM. In philosophy, Love, Personal, Life, Hope, My own style• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
whatever it is
that carries love,by kedoconnor 14 lines, 15 comments, on Jan 31 9:03 AM. In love lost• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
she lies on the bed, looking so lifeless. everything is quiet except the sound of her breath torturing her with life. vivid blues eyes open widely and glazed over... so lost, so empty, so dead. just another girl with a missinby Violent Glass 4 lines, 6 comments, on Aug 9 8:13 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I’m stuck; trapped in this box of nostalgic moonlight
Wallowing in the debris of my shattered dreams.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I sit by your side
As we wait to hear the news.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Let There be Darkness
To vercome the Light and its sharpnessby isaacokumu 39 lines, 9 comments, on Aug 9 1:02 AM
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She sits upon the floor looking into the face of Death,
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How I remember her well-- She clears the darkness with a path of light. And brightens the most hideous night. There is no compromise- for tby roland halloway 34 lines, 42 comments, on Apr 23 9:44 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Am I really wanted in this world?
Do I have a place, a reason?by brokenhearts1219 54 lines, 5 comments, on Jul 24 1:14 AM. In Sad, Personal, Other, Thoughts, Love, Life, Depression, My life, Self, Teen issues• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
A watery fire
Drips up from below• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I opened my eyes in a strange place
Not knowing anybody or recognizing any faceby hend shaheen 28 lines, 2 comments, on Aug 20 10:59 AM• Viewed by judge. -
We live in a life that is pure
We liveby roland halloway 16 lines, 10 comments, on Jul 22 12:19 AM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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thank you
Thank you so much for giving me my first trophy ever
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Thats okay (: you deserved it xD. You should try in my new contest too (: xD 'cause your such a great writer
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