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I want YOU.
Give me anything, and everything!
I will comment all poems submitted.
This is a pre-write maddness !
Got something that you want comments on, or think it needs a shiny trophy?
Chuck it in XD
I want to spend one WHOLE day commenting all the poems submitted.
Come on, Surprise me and give me a busy busy day !
Points will go up
Note to Self ; i owe clare and ylova
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I want YOU.
Give me anything, and everything!
I will comment all poems submitted.
This is a pre-write maddness !
Got something that you want comments on, or think it needs a shiny trophy?
Chuck it in XD
I want to spend one WHOLE day commenting all the poems submitted.
Come on, Surprise me and give me a busy busy day !
Points will go up
Note to Self ; i owe clare and ylova
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Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on July 26
- Rewards: Gold: 400
- Final notes: Well. I commented EVERYONES poem. And gave Three clappys to each, so i didnt have enough points to add to the big pot afterwards. Shorry
Well done Winners!
Contest Winners
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by creationsfromheart 66 lines, 6 comments, on Jun 30 1:56 AM 2008. In Adult, Personal, Thoughts
Bronze trophy winner
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Hello,
It's been awhileby SapereAude11 29 lines, 6 comments, on May 13 12:02 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
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by redbarchettadrive 14 lines, 13 comments, on Jun 13 4:22 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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by redbarchettadrive 16 lines, 16 comments, on Jun 14 10:29 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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by redbarchettadrive 42 lines, 10 comments, on Jun 20 4:32 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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by redbarchettadrive 24 lines, 14 comments, on Jun 20 5:16 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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by redbarchettadrive 18 lines, 11 comments, on Jul 6 12:56 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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by redbarchettadrive 36 lines, 6 comments, on Jul 8 4:34 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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by redbarchettadrive 44 lines, 5 comments, on Jul 13 6:52 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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by Mister Mattia 94 lines, 8 comments, on Jul 19 9:29 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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by redbarchettadrive 36 lines, 6 comments, on Jul 13 9:56 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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Ravishment of marrow
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Gold trophy winner
Silver trophy winner
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waking up in sweats, shivers and chills
can't sleepby Andi. 20 lines, 5 comments, on Jul 12 7:12 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
The true dance of nature,
Consists of many things,by Spirit of the Water 30 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 21 11:30 PM. In Nature• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
There came a time when injustice had been vast,
A massacre that was said to always last.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Jubilant skies morph,
Into foreboding blackness,by Spirit of the Water 18 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 21 11:21 PM. In Nature• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Hypnotizing those in its presence,
Not one that is identical,by Spirit of the Water 24 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 20 7:22 PM. In Nature• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Perfectly ironed navy blue dress, classic black wedge sandals,
Brown hair snug in a bun, smelling like cherry blossom candles.by Spirit of the Water 14 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 20 7:26 PM. In Other• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Arise from this curse,
oh princess of the valley,by Spirit of the Water 11 lines, 6 comments, on Jul 20 7:14 PM. In Dark• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I throw down drink after drink of the poison of the night at my chosen psychiatrist. Surrounded by other patients, such as myself, I raiseby Eddie Ecstasy 7 lines, 6 comments, on Jul 8 11:23 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Whisper those words I long to hear,
Let me know you'll always be near.by Spirit of the Water 14 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 20 7:23 PM. In Love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
So small and innocent, or so they seem,
Their playful eyes always gleam,by Spirit of the Water 13 lines, 5 comments, on Jul 20 7:24 PM. In Other• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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------------------------------Layers-------of--pure----------delicacyby Spirit of the Water 35 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 20 7:09 PM. In Nature• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Whirlpools of passion,
Immerse two sweethearts in theby Spirit of the Water 8 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 20 7:07 PM. In Love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Tempting lips,
resist desires,by Spirit of the Water 11 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 20 7:05 PM. In Dark• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
colour the world that the people blacked out
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In front of him lies a grand piano, in perfect shape,
Anxiously waiting for its music to fill the empty room.by Spirit of the Water 33 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 18 11:16 PM. In Love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
My pleasant December,
Oh, how I greatly miss,by Spirit of the Water 29 lines, 7 comments, on Jul 18 11:12 PM. In Nature• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Fervent rainbow kisses,
Bask in the sun's lucid rays,by Spirit of the Water 14 lines, 5 comments, on Jul 18 11:10 PM. In Love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I feel like time is working against me,
Prolonging the day's hours and minutes,by Spirit of the Water 19 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 18 11:08 PM. In Love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Translucent rainbows,
Arch with lasting dignity,by Spirit of the Water 3 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 18 10:54 PM. In Nature• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Gentle grassland stretches wide,
All agriculture richly untainted,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Your words slice through tender flesh and bone, but slide easily into my soul through the wounds left a few cosmos ago by more insulting seby Eddie Ecstasy 6 lines, 7 comments, on Jul 6 11:42 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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you are the soft ocean breeze
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An average soul morphed
Into a calamity,by Spirit of the Water 10 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 18 10:19 PM. In Dark• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by Spirit of the Water 3 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 18 5:37 PM. In Nature• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Springing up from rest,
Flames erupt with excitement,by Spirit of the Water 2 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 18 5:25 PM. In Other• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Beyond the shadows lies a creature so horrid,
That all who hears its sinister name spoken,by Spirit of the Water 29 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 21 11:25 PM. In Dark• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Gnawing at my mind forever,
Never recoiling from view,by Spirit of the Water 8 lines, 5 comments, on Jul 21 4:18 PM. In Life• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Early morning sun,
Chases away night shadows,by Spirit of the Water 10 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 20 7:21 PM. In Nature• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Liberated hooves,
Pound with a driving tempo,by Spirit of the Water 15 lines, 9 comments, on Jul 18 5:12 PM. In Life• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Lipstick stained sheets
Curve around our figuresby Spirit of the Water 46 lines, 12 comments, on Jul 18 4:52 PM. In Love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Just when I kiss its memoirs
I realize it’s years that I’ve died.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Winter came, and we waded through the snow,
depressed and carrying our burdens in heavy sacks,by The-Human-Stain 27 lines, 13 comments, on Apr 19 10:40 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Praying for help
Yet there's no way out, or so it seems.
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Born in a little town,Bethlehem,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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See them over there?
Here they come out of nowhere!• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Winter wind whistles through the hollow
Here she hangs high above the ground• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
T h e - H u m a n - S t a i n• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by angelfalls.silently 36 lines, 6 comments, on Jul 21 3:51 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by angelfalls.silently 31 lines, 11 comments, on Jul 20 7:58 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by angelfalls.silently 24 lines, 8 comments, on Jul 20 5:50 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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this is sad....click!by angelfalls.silently 72 lines, 45 comments, on Jun 28 1:41 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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It may as well be on neon signs
The world overby SapereAude11 31 lines, 7 comments, on May 26 1:01 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
It's clear there's a wall
A steel-reinforced wallby SapereAude11 21 lines, 5 comments, on May 10 12:49 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Crying for I have no food
Crying- because I cannot improveby roland halloway 13 lines, 12 comments, on Jul 21 11:17 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by redbarchettadrive 42 lines, 5 comments, on Jun 13 10:31 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by redbarchettadrive 8 lines, 7 comments, on Jun 16 11:22 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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We live in a life that is pure
We liveby roland halloway 16 lines, 10 comments, on Jul 22 12:19 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by redbarchettadrive 22 lines, 12 comments, on Jun 19 10:13 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by redbarchettadrive 33 lines, 9 comments, on Jun 19 10:53 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by redbarchettadrive 81 lines, 11 comments, on Jun 24 1:22 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by redbarchettadrive 59 lines, 16 comments, on Jun 26 3:19 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by redbarchettadrive 121 lines, 12 comments, on Jun 27 2:04 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by redbarchettadrive 33 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 20 8:34 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by redbarchettadrive 22 lines, 16 comments, on Jun 28 1:01 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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birthed by a youngling
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by redbarchettadrive 41 lines, 10 comments, on Jul 1 1:59 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Love is...
the dream,by redbarchettadrive 33 lines, 7 comments, on Jul 1 2:50 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by redbarchettadrive 53 lines, 6 comments, on Jul 28 12:27 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by redbarchettadrive 31 lines, 7 comments, on Jul 1 4:10 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I lay down to rest
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They imbed a deep harpoon and take you from your womb!! No one sheds a tear--It,s as if you were never here. They never gave you a chance-by roland halloway 46 lines, 25 comments, on Apr 15 11:21 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Shaping molten sin into wrought iron murder.
Rusted rivet's sparks sail down the spiral staircaseby redbarchettadrive 35 lines, 9 comments, on Jul 2 3:10 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by redbarchettadrive 35 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 2 12:42 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Darkness--Thrill me forever!!! It is darkness I endeavor to caress--Allowing its beauty to possess--As I feel it,s loveliness upon my doom-by roland halloway 45 lines, 45 comments, on Apr 19 1:14 AM. In Dark• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Jeez cookie.
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lol... this is AP sucide attempt no. 1 for me
this is what happens when its holidays, and your bored.
once it hits 300 poems ill close
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I struggle with 50... even with the holidays O.O
Smart idea
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mzuniverse, you sure do want to keep really busy dont ya!
LOL
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Haha, Muffin, sweetness, lovecookie...
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I know.
Im... Dying.
poopie.
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*offers chicken and chips I convinced my bestie to bring me for lunch*
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mmmm
Thanks pumpkin...
Food makes everyone happy
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have fun judging this gem 
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oH YEAH
finished commenting every single one...
now to pick the winners...
ill do it tommrow
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wow! thank you so much for gold
-Raven
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