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The Darkness

digital art

Notice the dark spot in the middle appears to get bigger.

This is all you got so make your poem good.

I want your best.

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on August 16
  • Rewards: Gold: 600, Silver: 300, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 3 people
  • Final notes:
    Thank you all for a great contest. It was interesting to see everyone's take on the pic - even the prewrites.

Contest Winners

  1. Through the spires of man's desires,
    lie the pigments of all art,
    by BeachBum1 28 lines, 5 comments, on Jul 19 4:59 PM. In Contemporary, Contest, Dark, Life, Sad, Spiritual, Thoughts, Weird
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  2. Massive explosions are going off in my head,
    Frustration barks along the sidelines of braincells.
    by doyouloveit 21 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 8 12:06 AM. In Thoughts, Personal, Life, Love
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  3. This loneliness in the face of eternity,
    Guarded so closely, I,
    by Nyhte 30 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 19 5:02 PM
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  4. laying alone
    in the middle
    by Shelby K 11 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 19 4:04 PM. In Dark, Thoughts
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  5. by liltandrhyme 25 lines, 18 comments, on May 9 8:29 AM 2005. In Contemporary
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]

Entries [12]

1 - 12 of 12
  • A sulken wooden frame
    Holding a broken canvas
    by Fallen-Thumper 28 lines, 8 comments, on Jun 25 11:54 AM. In Dark
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • Garden of Eden
    Shattered over night
    by Night Terrors 28 lines, 10 comments, on Apr 24 9:30 PM
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • The Love in your heart, puts a spring in your stride,
    takes you over the moon, on a carpet ride.
    by judmc 21 lines, 38 comments, on Jul 14 8:20 AM
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • She focus's on the core of her pain...
    if she concerntrates long enough it will drive her insane.
    by xButterfly Sx 31 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 19 6:30 PM. In Pain, Sad, Dark, Weird
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Travelling the darkness in which she resides;
    "Will I ever be more than the loner?"
    by ErisLeFae 18 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 19 8:44 PM. In Contest, Darkness, Dream/Self-Exploration, Fear
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Standing on a precipice, gazing into the abyss
    I hear a voice, a voice screaming in despair for me.
    by pkoirish 37 lines, 9 comments, on Jul 8 8:35 PM. In Dark, Love, Pain
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • by kagero 34 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 20 4:44 AM. In fear, pain, sad, depression
    • Commented on by judge.

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Comments

  • x growing pain x

    She focus's on the main reason causing her pain...
    look at it long enough it will drive you insane.

    One day ends, tomorow will un-fold just in the repetitive way
    starting as a dark hole, expanding as she falls deeper by the day.

    she's hasn't quite hit the ground yet...but it seems shes getting near
    all the good things around her gradually disappear.

    The darkness over takes, oblivion she is in...
    nobody can hear her, but they see and just grin.

    Overcome with fear, the pain continues to grow...
    is this just her mind playing tricks, or the spreading wings of a black crow?

    She's engulfed in total blackness...the clock strikes midnight,
    she cant watch it expand anymore...she shuts her eyes tight.


  • Night Hope gold member
    August 16
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    Thank you for hosting and for the Honorable Mention, XxGoldenxXDawnxX. Congratulations, one and all. Be well, Poets and Scribes.