
Notice the dark spot in the middle appears to get bigger.
This is all you got so make your poem good.
I want your best.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on August 16
- Rewards: Gold: 600, Silver: 300, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 3 people
- Final notes: Thank you all for a great contest. It was interesting to see everyone's take on the pic - even the prewrites.
Contest Winners
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This loneliness in the face of eternity,
Guarded so closely, I,• Commented on by judge. [remove] -
• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
Entries [12]
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A sulken wooden frame
Holding a broken canvasby Fallen-Thumper 28 lines, 8 comments, on Jun 25 11:54 AM. In Dark• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Garden of Eden
Shattered over nightby Night Terrors 28 lines, 10 comments, on Apr 24 9:30 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
She focus's on the core of her pain...
if she concerntrates long enough it will drive her insane.• Commented on by judge. -
Travelling the darkness in which she resides;
"Will I ever be more than the loner?"by ErisLeFae 18 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 19 8:44 PM. In Contest, Darkness, Dream/Self-Exploration, Fear• Commented on by judge.
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x growing pain x
She focus's on the main reason causing her pain...
look at it long enough it will drive you insane.
One day ends, tomorow will un-fold just in the repetitive way
starting as a dark hole, expanding as she falls deeper by the day.
she's hasn't quite hit the ground yet...but it seems shes getting near
all the good things around her gradually disappear.
The darkness over takes, oblivion she is in...
nobody can hear her, but they see and just grin.
Overcome with fear, the pain continues to grow...
is this just her mind playing tricks, or the spreading wings of a black crow?
She's engulfed in total blackness...the clock strikes midnight,
she cant watch it expand anymore...she shuts her eyes tight.
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Thank you for hosting and for the Honorable Mention, XxGoldenxXDawnxX. Congratulations, one and all. Be well, Poets and Scribes.


