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Take me on a Journey through paradise

Make me imagine that human industry never was, that factories, high rise buildings, cars and technology had never existed.

I want a beautiful, refreshing metaphorical journey through a perfect paradise of herbs, trees, flowers, water, animals and birds etc.

If you include people they must be the type of person I am! (You can research me if you don't understand me from this contest)

Rules: I've abolished them!

Contest is Over

Contest was judged on July 30
Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 100, Bronze: 50, Honorable mention: 3 people
Final notes:
You absolutely astounding poets!!! I'm awed by the quality of your entries and it was incredibly difficult to judge this. Yet judge I did.

Thankyou all of you for taking me on such incredible journeys!

Peace Georgia

Contest Winners

the last piece of June.

by perfectsunset 39 lines, 10 comments, on Jul 10 12:40 AM. In Nature, Summer, Thoughts, noguest
Gold trophy winner

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Along The River Bank

Wild reed bushes buckle
as field mice do suckle

by Coathanger 44 lines, 9 comments, on Jul 16 3:25 PM
Silver trophy winner

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The Porch Will Face the Rising Sun

I'm working hard, so it seems, to fulfill my once broken dreams
I have a plan to get there, and a plan of what to do, when I do

by Theasp 24 lines, 5 comments, on Jun 11 2:28 PM 2005. In Personal, Other, Contemporary
Bronze trophy winner

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Where have I walked?

by Gloriouswings 78 lines, 9 comments, on Mar 28 2:24 AM. In Hope, Life, Nature, Personal
Honorable mention

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Bellicose

Petals in the wind
their fan hands warding off spirits.

by T-Dizzle Mcnizzle 22 lines, 8 comments, on Feb 24 8:56 AM. In Nature
Honorable mention

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Entries [13]

1 - 13 of 13

Shade of Silence

by paperparadox 28 lines, 26 comments, on Sep 11 4:53 PM 2007. In nature, internal rhyme

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Beginning Fall

the very first day of fall touched by evening

by Antipodi 27 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 15 6:59 AM. In Contemporary, Life, Nature

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Hand In Hand.

by LonelyAngel 28 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 17 8:53 AM. In Love, Thoughts, Life, Sad, Contest, Hope, Nature, Fantasy, Romance, Happiness

• Commented on by judge.
Near Waterfalls

by Aurielle 26 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 5 8:10 PM 2007. In Thoughts, Weird, Love

• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
sanctuary

by Elvenfairy 8 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 17 3:49 PM. In nature

• Commented on by judge.
“Garden Tranquil”

“Garden Tranquil”
Scents of the garden,

by Malabu 42 lines, 28 comments, on Jul 19 8:38 AM 2005. In Personal, Spiritual

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Daydreaming

Strung all together,
The strings of the earth,

by JavaGuy147 28 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 11 10:12 AM. In dream, subliminal, supernatural, nature

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Kattywig

Each drop fell upon soft sponge like mass
Soaked into a solace refuge awaiting consumption

by roland halloway 37 lines, 27 comments, on May 25 2:42 AM

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perfectsunset
July 30
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thank you for the honor of gold
& for hosting a great contest

congrats to all winners too=]
Jim
August 6
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a shame I missed this one