EMO, [Make me shiver and cry]

Contest is Over

• Contest was judged on August 18
• Rewards: Gold: 400
• Final notes:
  Wow okay, sot his contest took kind of long; I did nto get the chance to comment every piece but i read every write; it was killer hard to judge SO MUCH talent. I would like for whoever wants; to add me as a favortie; i'd love to read more of your work. I shall ave another contest soon. Thanks so much guys for entering. You're all amazing ;]

Contest Winners

1. A dozen black roses and a coffin for two

   A dozen black roses
   Were sent to me in a box

   by hisfallenangel821 37 lines, 9 comments, on Jun 5 11:57 AM. In Depressed, Suicide, Dark, My own style, Death, Emo Love
   Gold trophy winner

   • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
2. Last Breath

   I lay here in this
   hospital bed. Tubes

   by AngelsKissesJenna 37 lines, 8 comments, on Jul 5 3:29 PM. In Contest, Dark, Thoughts, Pain
   Silver trophy winner

   • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
3. My Own Nightmare Killed Me....

   I thought you that it would be easy to follow my heart
   Didn't you tell me I would be okay, once I followed my heart?

   by sophia moonfairy 38 lines, 13 comments, on Jul 16 4:34 PM. In Thoughts, Weird, Life, Pain, Sad, Self, Lost in thought, Death, Fantasy, Dark
   Bronze trophy winner

   • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
4. whale bone and beech tree

   you landed in the safety net of stars,
   and i hit the ground;
   im lost within this.

   by rainbows. 296 lines, 12 comments, on Jul 12 6:35 PM. In Noguest

   • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]

Entries [129]

• It hurts.. It feels great. I'm torn.

  When it hurts so bad, why does it feel so good? I keep thinking that looking down at my wrists. Why do I continually put myself in pain? Wh

  by Blue-Rose Beauty 0 lines, 14 comments, on Mar 27 6:01 PM

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• Look! See ME?

  Look at me
  Tell me what it is you see

  by Allyson.Lashae. 28 lines, 5 comments, on Jun 10 6:59 AM. In Dark, Emo, Pain, Sadness, Thoughts, Life, Soul, Broken, Suicide, Depressed

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• {asphyxiated}

  by Allyson.Lashae. 2 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 14 4:34 PM

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• Drive Daggers Down Your Spine

  Baby-
  For Once I'd Like to not be the only one crying-

  by Livingemptyspaces 25 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 16 8:50 PM

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• Little Bird

  A little bird lives under my skin
  It perches on a silver tin

  by rowzeeboat 14 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 2 9:34 AM. In Sad, Angst, Hope, Life

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• It Was Just A Mistake

  I suppose it's my fault
  for holding onto the pain

  by Aki-Komoriuta 46 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 17 3:19 PM. In Pain, Sad, Thoughts, Dark, Contest, Love, Life, Depression, Death, Emo

  • Commented on by judge.
• Tears of Blood

  Inside I have a dark soul
  My heart has gone ice cold

  by hisfallenangel821 30 lines, 1 comment, on May 6 4:27 PM

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• Frustration

  It's difficult when you know you can't control it
  That the levers and switches lie far out of reach

  by rowzeeboat 8 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 15 8:36 PM. In frustration

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• What time is it?

  There was a time when I wanted to hug you and slap you at the same time
  There was a time when I wanted to tell you all my secrets and burn

  by rowzeeboat 32 lines, 12 comments, on Jul 15 8:17 PM

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• How Long?

  At my windowsill I remain, watching the bleak sky darken.
  Drops of rain pattered to the floor from my once gentle eyes.

  by XxLoverOfDarknessxX 31 lines, 8 comments, on Jul 14 10:42 PM

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• In An Empty Room

  This empty, strange room
  In this empty, screaming house,

  by xXDemonxKissXx 48 lines, 5 comments, on Jul 17 11:30 PM. In Emo, Pain, Sad, Dark, Suicide

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• angry little lines

  angry little lines
  form an angry little secret

  by nothingfancy 12 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 19 1:02 AM

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• what will they salvage?

  Devote your eyes to me..
  Nightshade in the heat of combustion..

  by mywallsyour crimson 26 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 19 3:03 AM

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• Max

  Why did you change your fate
  When you took your own life

  by Ami amour 43 lines, 9 comments, on May 9 3:40 AM 2006. In Angst

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• Letting Go

  Your brilliant blue eyes full of intelligence I love.
  That megawatt smile always brightens my day.

  by XxLoverOfDarknessxX 19 lines, 30 comments, on Jun 30 7:40 AM

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• My Razor Blade Friend

  Letting the tears fall
  from my eyes. I can't

  by AngelsKissesJenna 25 lines, 15 comments, on Jun 29 3:51 PM. In Contest, Life, Pain, Personal, Cutting

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• awareness of how I feel? (T.W)

  by DEAL xx WITH xx IT 29 lines, 10 comments, on Apr 13 5:50 PM. In Dark, Pain, Thoughts, Life, Suicide, Depressed, Emo, Noguest

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• The Voice of My Heart Tells Me To Prepare For The Worst

  I heard what he said
  I know the truth

  by DinkyDiver 25 lines, 5 comments, on Sep 2 7:48 AM 2008. In Contest

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• Death Wish (Poem #31)

  I turn my eyes to see what is inside,
  The emptiness fills me,

  by Dillin 37 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 20 8:44 PM. In Dark, Pain, Sad

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• Darkened Days

  A broken mess splayed on the floor for you to see.
  Agony burst through her; the pain is endless.

  by XxLoverOfDarknessxX 23 lines, 15 comments, on May 19 6:58 PM. In Pain, Dark

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• Assholes

  by Dezzy26 28 lines, 3 comments, on May 1 10:32 PM. In Adult, Personal, Thoughts

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• Cancerous Love

  by Allyson.Lashae. 17 lines, 9 comments, on Jul 3 9:10 AM. In Adult, Anger, Bitter

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• Shadow

  Speak to me, my precious
  Now tell me what you see

  by Allyson.Lashae. 58 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 24 1:07 PM. In Sad, Pain

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• Young Lover's Regret

  I gave away my innocence
  to nothing short of a fool

  by Allyson.Lashae. 52 lines, 10 comments, on Jun 12 11:52 AM. In Love, Pain, Sad, Thoughts, Regret

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• everybody thinks!!

  Everybody thinks
  She’s so strong

  by DEAL xx WITH xx IT 60 lines, 3 comments, on Mar 17 7:18 PM. In Personal, Pain, Angst

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• If you were alive again

  If you were alive again
  I would be there more for you

  by DEAL xx WITH xx IT 34 lines, 6 comments, on Mar 16 4:26 AM

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• The Smile of A Girl

  The smile of a girl
  So charming and sweet

  by Allyson.Lashae. 18 lines, 6 comments, on Jun 6 10:40 AM. In Life, Pain, Sad, Thoughts, Emo

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• Broken Soul

  The darkest place she's ever known
  No one knows she's all alone

  by Allyson.Lashae. 11 lines, 24 comments, on Jun 4 8:41 AM. In Dark, Emo, Pain, Sadness, Thoughts, Life, Soul, Broken, Suicide, Depressed

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• Save our love

  by Allyson.Lashae. 19 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 9 8:00 AM. In Adult, Love

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• Marie's Diary

  by xbonniemichellex 42 lines, 10 comments, on Jul 13 8:22 PM

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• Suicide.

  theres always people calling your name, interrupting the peace;
  little do they know your in wa

  by Tzipora 22 lines, 17 comments, on May 14 9:03 PM. In Life, Dark.

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• Drunk

  he sat me on his lap and poured something down my troat.
  it burned, one shot.

  by Tzipora 26 lines, 11 comments, on Mar 23 5:31 PM

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• I Just Want It Over

  Would you cry out tonight if you discovered
  I've been beaten down to the point of breaking

  by whatever666 26 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 16 9:13 PM. In Dark, Contest, Emo, Personal, Pain, Depression, Teenage thinking, Escape, My life

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• Both Sides of the Gun

  I should’ve known
  You weren’t thinking of me

  by A-Solitary-Fantasy 22 lines, 3 comments, on Jan 1 1:51 PM. In Angst, Dark, Life, Love, Pain, Sad, Weird

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• Mistress

  One...two…three…
  I watch

  by A-Solitary-Fantasy 19 lines, 6 comments, on Jan 18 8:59 PM. In Pain, Dark, Suicide, Depressed, Emo, Depression, My life

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• Haunted

  Skin crawling with unrequited truths;
  Writhing over years of long violated naivety

  by A-Solitary-Fantasy 7 lines, 7 comments, on Apr 18 8:25 PM

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• Cut

  my wrists ache
  screaming for steel

  by quietheather 12 lines, 1 comment, on May 8 1:07 PM 2008. In Pain, Depressed

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• Lost Soul

  High above everyone
  On the edge looking down

  by quietheather 23 lines, 4 comments, on May 7 11:39 PM 2008. In Pain, Suicide

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• Mommy... Mommy

  Mommy … mommy can you hear ?
  Can you see my fear?

  by Dezzy26 25 lines, 6 comments, on Mar 16 5:52 PM

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• Sparkling Diamond Glitter Tears

  Ruby tears falling
  The razor blades embrace

  by ListeningToSilence 13 lines, 4 comments, on Jan 27 6:08 AM

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• Do you know why death fascinates me?

  From the day we are born
  we are waiting,

  by Divina love 46 lines, 5 comments, on May 20 5:43 AM. In Personal, Thoughts

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• Block Out the Pain

  I can't just wipe away my tears,
  And forget about my fears,

  by TheDarknessWithinXx 31 lines, 21 comments, on Aug 6 7:10 AM. In Pain, Dark, Sad, Personal, Thoughts, Depressed

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• There's this child who is left behind

  There’s this child who’s left behind
  And cry with her big black eyes

  by dying inside 4ever 45 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 3 4:18 AM

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• Chain

  Whispering softly in my ears ,
  hope is just around the corner.

  by Dezzy26 21 lines, 8 comments, on Mar 3 9:42 PM

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• Why Won't You Die?

  "Now I lay me down to sleep"
  

  by Walls-within 33 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 13 7:22 PM. In Pain, Personal, Sad, Thoughts, Dark

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• Life

  Sometimes pain is the only release you get
  Sometimes you use the pain to forget

  by schoolsable 24 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 28 3:19 PM. In Life, Thoughts, Sad, Personal

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• Darkness inside

  Walking slowly
  Sand between my toes

  by dying inside 4ever 49 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 28 3:42 AM

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• I hope to God the end is near, so that I no longer have to hide my tears.

  I hope to God
  the end is near
  so that I no longer

  by MyCutsDontBleed 24 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 14 4:35 PM. In Pain, Personal, My life

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• Saddend, This Misery, When Does It End?

  Showing sad serpent, slithering sickness, sadistic.
  Terrible thoughts taint the tangible truth.

  by Manic Reverie 6 lines, 5 comments, on Jun 13 12:33 AM

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• C Kem Tbl? [Who are you With?]

  I know you've been left
  thrown carelessly aside

  by zoev 37 lines, 3 comments, on Aug 6 7:22 PM

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• And the Hourglass Sadly Runs Out of Business...

  The velvety stars, shining upon me,
  Now dwindling, dimming with perplexity.

  by Ebbing.X.Discreetly 30 lines, 8 comments, on Oct 31 8:52 AM 2008

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• If only they had realised

  She sits alone on the outskirts of the playground
  tears of pain dripping down her face.

  by Shelby K 23 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 17 1:59 PM. In Pain, Dark, Life, Thoughts, Death, Depression, Sadness, Emo, Personal, Suicide

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• The Truth of Life

  To begin this dawning in such a way,
  To awaken from warmth into this cold,

  by melroxanne 20 lines, 1 comment, on Jan 30 7:39 PM. In Contest, Dark, Life, Pain, Thoughts

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• Remembering May Kill

  Fuck you and the Moon.

  by Manic Reverie 33 lines, 14 comments, on May 13 2:57 AM. In love, pain, loss, personal, sad, thoughts, life, relationship

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• My Suicide Note

  My suicide note is short and sweet.
  My suicide note you will soon meet.

  by Kodie Scarlet 23 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 6 1:05 PM. In dark, emo, sad, pain, life, suicidal, death

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• Footsteps erased in the sand

  Your new footsteps leave a reddish hide,
  Blood stains on your new page.

  by vampireintherain 26 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 13 11:07 PM. In Depression

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• Shedding wild tears

  Hold me like I'm a crying baby
  who just learn to walk but fell down

  by HannahsDead 15 lines, 4 comments, on Jun 4 2:40 PM. In Thoughts, Weird, Inspirational, Loss, Dedication

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• Addiction...choice number 3

  I'm cutting out my vain
  I'm addicted to the shame

  by Leanna-bean 31 lines, 13 comments, on Apr 23 1:02 AM 2004. In Angst

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• cry quietlt in a corner

  Cry quietly in a corner
  Don’t make a big scene

  by dying inside 4ever 28 lines, 1 comment, on Jun 25 1:16 AM

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• All That I Have

  It's hard to forget about my past,
  The good times never seemed to last,

  by TheDarknessWithinXx 29 lines, 14 comments, on Aug 6 7:31 AM. In Pain, Sad, Depressed, Dark

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• Giving In

  Fly away my angel,
  Because things are wrong,

  by TheDarknessWithinXx 21 lines, 10 comments, on Aug 8 4:47 AM. In Personal, Pain, Sad, Death, Suicide

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• My Silent Suicide

  There were times I thought I had enough
  yet day by day, it's getting worse

  by Enrinye 34 lines, 13 comments, on Jun 25 6:39 PM. In Pain, Sad, Life, Death

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• Love or depression?

  To anyone out there who has loved someone and they didn't love ya back!

  by SilenceDoesScream 26 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 17 1:50 PM. In Depressed, Lost love, Loss, Depression, Sadness, Message, Self, Hate, Love, Personal.

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• Just End It. {N}

  i stand alone in my room
  just like any other day

  by fantome errant 63 lines, 5 comments, on Feb 4 5:54 PM. In Pain, Angst, Sad, Personal, Dark, Life, Thoughts

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• while you were sleeping

  i showed everyone
  my name while you were sleeping

  by HannahsDead 43 lines, 4 comments, on Feb 20 8:15 PM. In Abuse, Dark, Fantasy, Life, Lyrics, Other, Pain, Personal, Sad, Society, Thoughts

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• The Heart Doesn't Realize...

  A single tear
  falls,

  by MyCutsDontBleed 42 lines, 16 comments, on Aug 3 11:18 PM

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• Suicide-Because I will

  Don't tell me to kill myself
  

  by hisfallenangel821 47 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 4 1:51 PM. In Personal, Thoughts, Sad, Pain, Dark, Depression, Depressed, Suicide, My own style

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• Geting Over Delusion

  Test of faith,
  Bind my thoughts and kill my own beliefs.

  by Manic Reverie 41 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 29 12:44 AM. In fallen, rise, god, personal, dsigrace, pride, pain, fallen angel, recovery, lyrics

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• I Am.......

  I am Stephanie.
  I wonder why.

  by Eveybodys-FOOL 18 lines, 25 comments, on May 15 7:22 PM. In Emo, Dark, Death, My own style

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• Blindness

  Hands on the eyes…..
  Hearing the sound of broken lullabies

  by Dezzy26 23 lines, 6 comments, on Feb 19 7:15 AM

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• My Masterpiece

  letting the pain spread
  aching to soothe, to clean the cut

  by slaybackc 18 lines, 11 comments, on May 2 10:12 AM. In pain, other, thoughts, life, cuts, masterpiece

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Comments

• By me, right now

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• Xxpoison.kissesxX
  July 16
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  im sooo going to enter! I need to write something nice and depressing, my favorite
• • 
    GraveyardGoddess
    July 16
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    Don't we all.

    That's why made this contest. So many other contest are like "ehm no emo or cutting"
    Fuck it, people have to express themselves. this is going to bhe so hard to judge.
    Already so many entries in so little time.
    I must be crazy.
  • • Xxpoison.kissesxX
      July 16
      Edit | Reply
      pshh, you are crazy
      
      !
• 
  Livingemptyspaces
  July 16
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  O.o

  I just realized out of 33 writes.. I was the only fresh one. Eep. Good luck with your contest.
• 
  Kristen Kay
  July 16
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  Emo

  I'm horrible at Emo poetry thou I am so bad at it.I'll see if I can write something.
• • GraveyardGoddess
    July 16
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    Don't worry

    Just try your best darling. Emo means Emotional.
    Take an event that has upset you the most.
    Death, break ups \ whatever.
    And just write how you feel.
    Take you anger out .
    I'm exc ited to see what you come up with.
• 
  GraveyardGoddess
  July 17
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  AHH

  12 hours - 84 writes.
  Lucky meee.
• 
  Immortal Obscurity
  July 17
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  i'm not emo, but i could pretend to be for now.
• • 
    GraveyardGoddess
    July 17
    Edit | Reply

    Haha.

    You don't hafta be emo to write an emo poem darling =]
• 
  Kristen Kay
  July 29
  Edit | Reply
  I finally made something for this contest it took me forever but I made it.
• • 
    GraveyardGoddess
    July 29
    Edit | Reply

    Haha.

    Thank you for the effort darling <3
  • • 
      sophia moonfairy
      August 15
      Edit | Reply
      good luck with juding

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